Arshi FF: A Love To Die For Imp Note Pg.22 (12/08/2014) [On Hold] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Great update! You should definitely continue your FF, its amazing! Please don't stop writing, looking forward to the next update! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awesome update... continue dis ff.
thank 4 2 updates simultaneously
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant update. Looking forward to next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzz do continue, you are a awesome writer:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys!!!
Thanks for the response! It means a lot to me! Its good to see that you are liking my FF and ecouraging me to write more!
I will update next chapter very soon ... probably tomorrow!
Thanks once again! And keep commenting as it gives me a lot of encouragement to write!
-Pari
Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Next two chapters...
Omg first of all please do continue it... I would personally hunt u down if you stop it abruptly😆 You know it I seriously wont hesitate to do it🤣
back to the chapter.. fab..👏
but I cant understand one thing yaar... why is it effecting both of them😉
Cant wait to know more update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys!
Once again THANKS for your comments!!!
Here is Chapter 6 ... Hopefully you will like it!

Chapter Six

Everyone was enjoying at the party! Both Arnav and Khushi tried to ignore each other but they could not help themselves from glancing at the other secretly. When their eyes used to meet accidently they glared at each other and immediately turned their face to opposite direction. This did not go unnoticed by NK and Lavanya ... They both understood that the air was definitely getting thick between their best friends and they decided to do something before the matter gets worse.
NK got an idea and looked into Lavanya's eyes for permission ... she blinked her eyes to give her silent permission as she knew whatever he planned would be good for both Arnav and Khushi. NK's eyes searched for Khushi and when they found her standing at the corner of the hall chatting away with Payal. Lavanya saw NK looking at Khushi and immediately understood what he was thinking - 'To bring back Khushi Gupta's chirpiness' Both NK and Lavanya started walking towards Khushi and Payal -
NK: What is this girls? Tum log mere saaliyan hon aur tum dono hi yahan pe chup chap ek kone mein ruke hon! What is this haan? You guys should be the ones who should lead the party and you both are standing here! Can I know why?

Khushi: Oh so you want us to lead the party haan? (She faced Lavanya) La what happened to your so called devars haan? Even they have the right to lead na!

NK and Lavanya both understood who Khushi was referring to. Lavanya looked at NK for help.

NK: Well let's just say that they are not good as you are! So come on let's go to the dance floor and rock the party.

Payal: Ya lets go Di!

Khushi: You guys go I will join you after a while.

Lavanya wanted to deny it but before she could say anything, NK started speaking -

NK: Ok fine ... You join us later! Let's go girls!

He pulled Payal and Lavanya towards the dance floor and started dancing. Khushi was watching them from where she stood ... she wondered about NK and Lavanya's compatibility. How much they understood, cared and loved each other.

Khushi: (In her thoughts) Just after four months of going out they decided to get married. I wonder how they realised they were in love and wanted to spend the rest of their lives together. I should ask about that to Lavanya sometime later.

Later when Khushi came out of her thoughts and looked towards where NK, Lavanya and Payal were dancing before, she saw NK whispering something into Lavanya's and Payal's ears and then leaving from there.

Khushi: (In her thoughts) I wonder where NK went ... probably went to get drinks for La and Payal!

Suddenly the lights went off and the DJ announced everyone to leave the dance floor as there is a special performance coming up.

As the music started playing, few boys and girls came to the dance floor and started dancing to the beats

There's something about tonight
Something very special
Something about the way you move that thing
Something very special
Something about the way you look at me
Something very special
There's something about tonight
Something very special

Here we go -

Suddenly NK came to the center of the dance floor singing

Sari ki sari duniya bhula ke
Main toh tere naal nachna

Even Lavanya joined NK

Boy you could be my one and only
Main toh tere naal nachna

NK pulled Lavanya towards him

Then I see you looking at me

Aaja baat kar le dil ki

They broke apart from their trance when all the dancers at the back singing

Hone lagenge afsaane

You know it, so sing it

Now throw your hands up and say

Both NK and Lavanya also joined the other dancers

Disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan
Ho Disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan ho

NK went towards Payal while singing and dragged her to the stage as well

Nasheeli hai raat
Ho haathon mein haath
Naachein gaayein saath

Payal also started dancing with them

Disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan ho

There's something about tonight
Something very special
Something about the way you move that thing
Something very special
Something about the way you look at me
Something very special
There's something about tonight
Something very special

Khushi was standing and watching them with smile ... this was one of her favorite songs. She suddenly felt a tug and saw Lavanya pulling her towards the dance floor.

NK came towards her and danced around her

Ho hai na
Mujh pe nazar teri

Even Payal came next to her and started dancing

Aankhon hi aankhon mein
Baatein hoti hain

NK pulled Lavanya who was standing at the side

Aaja baahon mein aa meri

She also started dancing again and forcing Khushi to join them

Aise hi to raatein
Shuru hoti hain

Khushi could not stop herself from dancing anymore, so she also joined them

Kabhi kabhi pal do pal mein yun
Fussy fussy baatein hoti hai
Do hi mulaqaton mein
Mil jaate hain zamaane

Disco deewane ...

You know it so sing it
Now throw your hands up and say

Disco deewane
Aahan, aahan
Ho disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan ho

Nasheeli hai raat
Ho haathon mein haath

Naachein gaayein saath

Disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan

Everyone who were not on the dance floor were also swaying to the beats except one person. He was none other than Arnav Singh Raizada ... He was intently watching the angel dressed in green. He was mesmerized by the way she swayed and danced to the music with a smile playing on her lips always.

He was brought back from his thoughts when he heard NK singing

Khel ja raaton ka
Khel yeh todi der

Khushi and Payal also started dancing on either side of NK

Jhoom ja bahon mein toh
Aa gaya meri thodi der

Nazron se hi main

Aahaan

Tujh ko samjha doonga

Aahaan

Khushi and Payal moved towards Lavanya who was standing at the side of the dance floor and all the three girls sang and danced together

Dance like deewana tonight
Move like mastana tonight
Party like parwana tonight
Jo kehna hai keh de

NK started dancing with the other dancers in the center of the dance floor

You gotta do the D.I.S.C.O
When everybody knows where we gonna go
Hotey hotey milte hain mil jaate hain bahaane

The girls also joined him

You know it so sing it
Now throw your hands up and say

Disco deewane
Aahan, aahan

Ho Disco deewane
Aahaan, aahaan

Nasheeli hai raat
Ho haathon mein haath

Naachein gaayein saath


Disco deewane
Aahan, aahan

NK, Lavanya, Khushi, Payal and the other dancer were swaying and spinning around dance floor according to the music beats. Suddenly Khushi's dress got stuck under shoes and she slipped. Before she could hit the floor she felt a familiar pair of hands wound around her waist and thus saving her from falling and hurting herself. When she looked at her savior she got lost in his warm chocolate brown eyes.

Arnav was standing next to the dance floor and was watching how everyone were dancing and enjoying themselves on the dance floor. Looking at them dancing like that brought a smile to his face but that smile vanished immediately when he saw Khushi stepping onto her dress and losing her balance. He instantly moved towards her and held her. The moment her eyes met his he also got lost in her hazel brown eyes.

While they both were lost in each other, the music was still continuing

Ishq wala love, ishq wala love, ishq wala love

Surkh wala soz wala faiz wala love

Ishq wala love

Hota hai jo love se zyada waise wala love

They both came out of their trance when one of the dancers bumped into Arnav. Khushi immediately pulled back, muttered a quick "Thanks" and moved towards where NK, Lavanya and Payal were dancing. Even Arnav left the dance floor when he saw Khushi distancing herself from him.

There's something about tonight
Something very special
Something about the way you move that thing
Something very special
Something about the way you look at me
Something very special
There's something about tonight
Something very special

The song ended and everyone in the hall cheered. NK, Lavanya, Khushi and Payal moved out of the dance floor after having a group hug.

Payal: That was fun!

Lavanya: I have never danced like this before!

Khushi: Me too! Thanks NK! If you would not have organized this party we would not have been able to enjoy so much!

NK: Hey ... You don't have to thank me! If I would not have organized this how would have I known my saalies dance so well! I am impressed!

Both Khushi and Payal smiled listening to NK and thanked him for the compliment.

NK saw Arnav standing alone at the corner of the hall. He excused himself and moved towards Arnav.

NK: What's up Nannav? Why are you standing here alone?

Arnav: Nothing NK ... Just tired! Do you mind if I go back home?

NK understood that Arnav was not in the mood so it's best to let him go.

NK: Ya that's fine! But you did not have your dinner yet?

Arnav: I am not hungry anymore, the snacks itself was very filling!

NK: Ok then! Do you want me to join you as well?

Arnav: No! You stay here ... the party is not over yet and Lavanya will also feel bad. I will meet you at home!

NK: Ok! See you at home then!

Arnav left the party venue after hugging NK and bidding farewell to his cousins and friends.

NK joined the girls and they chatted for a while till the dinner was served. The party also ended after a while and all the guests started leaving. NK dropped the girls back home and left for his house.

Payal: Lavanya Di, why don't you have a sleepover at our place tonight?

Lavanya: That is a great idea! You guys go ... I will go get my night wares!

Khushi: We will come with you as well! I haven't met Uncle and Aunty after I came!

Lavanya: Ok let's go then!

They enter Lavanya's house and see her parents sitting in lounge and having coffee -

Lavanya: Hi Mom, Dad!

Lavanya's Mom: Hello Beta! You are back ... (Just then she sees Khushi and Payal) Arre Khushi Bitiya, Payal Bitiya ... You both are here as well!

Khushi: Hi Aunty! We thought of coming and meeting you!

Lavanya's Dad: It's good to see you both! How was the party?

Payal: It was really good Uncle ... We enjoyed a lot!

Lavanya's Mom: Would you all like coffee?

Khushi: No Aunty! Thanks for asking!

Lavanya: Mom I am going for a sleepover at Buaji's! Hope it's alright with you!

Lavanya's Mom: Off course! But see to it you come back home early tomorrow! Our relatives will start coming at noon!

Lavanya's Dad: You should be here to receive them! Khushi, Payal ... you girls also come along with Lavanya tomorrow! The wedding day is not far!

Khushi: Yes Uncle! You don't worry ... we will be here!

Lavanya: I will go get my night wares! You all chat till then!

Lavanya went and brought her night wares, all the three girls then went to Buaji's house. They chatted to Buaji for a while then moved to Khushi's room to freshen up!

End of Chapter Six

Please do hit like/ comment! Let me know if you have any suggetions as well!
- Pari
Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really love the update ! Wonderful ! Love the ishq wala part soo much !
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dance part is really awesome.
wonderful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update! Looking forward to the next one :)

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