SS Secret ensnared in Night's Blanket..CH 17 UPD

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

res.. will comment on weekends after reading..
exam season 😔

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

What a story, What a story you two!!!!

My lovelies!!! *hugging both of you* This is seriously amazing!!!

Mindblowing concept and Outstanding Expression!

You two are... "Aha!" 😆

Chalo we have an alliance out here! Another one actually!! 😉 Deedee, we, three are next!! 😆

Coming to Chapter One,

Described beautifully and the way we feel precisely in reality when something like this happens!👏

Arnav's thoughts were the best out here as, if I were in his place, even I would've thought in the same way and would feel warm on thinking of having a kid and simultaneously shocked to no ends on finding out like this, when there is not so much of a past like mothering/fathering a kid!

I think Arnav is not the father of Aarav for 2 reasons..

1. He is a Control Freak: he wouldn't let such a thing happen, if he did get involved physically with his girlfriends, now his ex-es!

2. If it were his mistake, he definitely would have accepted and admitted his mistake and told Khushi about it.

Yet there is a very horrid nagging feeling of Sheetal, supposedly Aarav's mother you try to bring in for more twists and turns, will have not told Arnav about them spending a night together or something...

Even then, I feel that Arnav wouldn't have done because of his hunger for Control!

Arrrgh!! Me will do CA-RAZZZY!!!

Annie

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing ...wonder if something like this will happen on the show...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome start thanks for the pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

congrats ladies awesome start that was emotional intense well written very intense wow awesome concept thanks for the pm
wished she had talked to him instead of blaming him

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Little S

@Semeira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

The beginning is awesome !!!! Expressions are very well described !!! Great job !!!!!
Keep it up !!! Feel good to read you again

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

very nicely written, feel so sorry for both khushi and arnav.
please continue and thnx for the pm

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Just so Typically Arnav! Awesome start!

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

I M NOT FEELING BAD 4 ARNAV AT ALL...GO N GET INVOLVED WITH ANY RANDOM GIRL ,,,, N U STILL DESERVE KHUSHI...KHUSHI IS THERE 2 FORGIVE ANYBODY...NO WORRIES...GR8 GOING GALS...I'VE NO DOUBTS ABOUT D WRITING SKILLS OF U BOTH...BUT I CAN'T CHANGE MY HARSH WORDS.AS THEY R NOT MEANT 4 U,BUT...😡...I M LIKE THAT...I CAN'T TOLERATE HEART BREAK N INSULT 4 KKGSR😳😳

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Arnav is so dumb he couldn't see what was in front of him

Khushi has a right to be angry, Arnav too

But Arnav needs to stop running, he need to face his past to make his future

He should try to understand how Khushi feels and not shut her out.

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