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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Truely said 😳

Second you. But have different things in my mind and I still need to come to a conclusion! 😉

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Nivriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sweety-reylover
i read it!!!!!!!! together ol in one shot!!!!!!!!

n must sae its is good intresting!

i also tried n did same thing ! but the story is over nw!

i wuld luv to c d twist in the current storyline!

Thanks a ton for liking my concept.. 😃 Will try to do full justice to all the expectations you all have! 😳

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Nivriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Hey Guys!

So. After much of brain-storming.. 😕

I finally streamlined my thoughts and penned down the first chapter of this Series. 👏

Though it does not make everything very clear, but then this is all I could afford after all the confusions in my mind about this Concept. 🤔

I would like to thank all my friends, old-and-new for commenting on the concept and giving me support with their overwhelming response! 🤗

I hope you all keep showering your love on me like this and also I hope I am able to live up to all your expectations regarding this Series.

One more thing I want to say is, please do not ask me questions about the "Rey being paired to whom?" as I have not yet come to a conclusion, and as of know, it really doesn't matter in the story. 😉

The love would come much later, and I really pray to God I am able to come to a conclusion by then.

Anyways, enough of my speech, now I am here posting the first Chapter of this all new series : Exiguous... 😆

Hope you all enjoy! 😳

Here we GO : 😉

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

I Know, too much of hair-splitting and less of dialogues.

But this series would be mostly based on monologues of the characters as this is how it will move forward.

And this is the first time I have written on behalf of Taani, so I hope I did justice to her character, thoughts and sentiments.

And if I didn't, I apologize.

Thanks to all those who pressed like on the Conceptual Post! Thank you so much!

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I wish I can receive all the love and support I have received so far in all my other works and you continue to read. 😳

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With Love,

Nivi ❤️

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

I liked the way you've introduced VIHA..
Their dilemma and emotions have been penned down beautifully

The character of Taani had undergone few major changes in your story..and that is what I loved the most

Sharon thinking about Swayam..
It feels so soothing😆

You've given story and space to every couple..and that is the hardest thing to do..
kudos to you for that..😊

The Update was amazing as usual..:)
A great start..:D

Thank you for the PM..:)
Do update soon.:D

-Mansi..:)

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I really loved the way how this story start.Its good to read about viha specially vicky"s pov n his matured behaviour.
Taani's pov was the best even though i didn't like her character that much but still i think she is a lil strong in this ff.I would love to read about taani pov more after this as u said that u will give equal space to both taani n kria ...:)
Sharon admire swayam is something we desperately want to see n its good that she don't want to hurt him.
Waiting for next part eagerly
Update it soon

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Yay.. I knew it.. Nobody cud do it better thn u.. N d best thing is u giv full justice to a character.. N d way u portray it.. It always blows my mind away... Loved it thorughly!!
For d first time.. Lik really first time.. I hav liked something written on Taani.. Atleast it gave justice to her well being.. Her past story beautifully coordinated wid her character.. D denial,d ignorance by her parents towards her.. D love d warmth d care given by swayam n family...
Woah!!
Dis surely is d bestest start of dis update..

I further loved vicky's pov.. His love fr neha is pure n is bot coz she's beautiful by she's pure at heart!!
I lovd his realisation of wht he has done wid him n neha.. He himself made a mess of his relationship wid neha.. N I evn liked how Neha reciprocated to him... She's hurt n its clearly visible!!

N n sharon too admirin swayam.. Awww n she evn knows tht swayam wud neva giv her stress by tellin him his problems.. Not tht he doesnt wants it but he knows well wht to b done n wht not!!

Bt bt wht gained my interest d most is..
Wht swayam wud b thinkin abt????????
Hufff.. Suspense!!

I loved it.. U know.. U neva cease to amaze me by ur updates!!!
N as I always say.. U write brilliantly :D

Waitin fr d next part.. Update soon..:p