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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

-Chapter One

THIS IS SO AWESOME...

I always thought ki in main scenes ke beech me ye characters kya kya sochate honge? Kya feel karte honge? ek-doosare ko kaise face karte honge?

Tumne wo sari gaps bhar di. Wo nhi itani achchhi tarah se.

Thank u so much and 👏👏👏👏 for awesome update!

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Tania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Hey nivz.. 😊
now this was a great start... 👏
loved the way you have used viha here... 😳
and awwweee...sharon thinking of swayam is such a cutieee thing to read dear... 😳
update soon bud.. 😊

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

WOWWW...
AMAZING!!
do continue to write and pm me...thanks for the pm this tym!

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

nyc update

totally loved it

thankx for pm

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Liked the update...it was awesome...luved how u expressed pov of those characters whose pov v hardly get to know...it was nice to know how vicky thinks about his relation wid neha...n special thnxs for sharon's monologue which v hardly get on d show...u have written taani's pov perfectly...plz continue soon...n thnx for pm.

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

awesome update...

sharon thinking abt swayum...

loved it...

bt plz state whether it is kriyansh or taani n rey bcoz i cant read something on taani n rey.hope u can understand n last bt not the least i love ur writing style the way u describe the thinkings s beautiful...

thnx for pm...

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Wow ! Amazing Nivriti! Sorry for the late comment though I read it as soon as I got the PM 😛

The truth is I don't really like Taani but the way you presented her in the update made me sympathise a little with her and understand her problems.

I also really loved the little ViHa bit where Vicky was lost in Neha yet he was upset with the way she had behaved.

And Sharon, that girl is very confused😆 But in ur update u made her confusion more clear

But, what I loved the most was how all of them considered Swayam to be the ideal person to talk to, to confide in and to follow. I really really liked that!

Overall a wonderful 1st part! I cant wait for the next one!! 😊

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beeny

@beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

hey nivi nice consept & returning of Kriya mustbe soo intersting soo waiting for next part..:)
thanx for PM

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beeny

@beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

1st chapter was mindblowing & starting Viha was soo sweet & rey & tani was also good & sharon ws happy dat swayam was still der for her to love her so sweet update thanx for PM..:)😃

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Guys.. Thank you so much for your lovely comments on my first chapter!

They are very encouraging! And I will try my best to reply back! 😉

But I am afraid updates will have to wait as my Formative Assessments and other sort of Units have started in school and since I am in Tenth, they are pretty much important according to the Continuous and Comprehensive Evaluation [CCE] here in Delhi!

I will try to write the next part soon! 😳 I have just started to write it! I will give my best shot on updating the chapter! Please be with me and I hope I don't lose out on my readers!

Thank you so much once again folks for showering your love on me and supporting me in writing more by encouraging me with your lovely comments! 🤗

Love, Nivriti ❤️

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 13 years ago