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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

a beautiful ending with all the loose threads being tied up very nicely! had a suspicion dev was aman's child... anjali deserves her share of happiness... khushi is almost saint-like in her ability to forgive and forget! but love happy endings and khushi is right about everyone deserving a second chance!

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Deepa

@harshdb

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

good one.. thanks for the beautiful ss. keep writing.

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chemistry9

@chemistry9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

wow

awsm

superb

will surely miss it alooot

amzng end

thnx fr d pm

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sarra0

@sarra0

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

I am sad 😭 that this journey has come to an end, loved both destroyed and unconditional and I was always waiting for the next update for these stories. I was rite they were divorce papers, did I actually write that in my last post or did I just think it, hmm, can't remember, never mind they were divorce papers yipee, and I liked his action for Shayam, I am glad that it wasn't Shayam's child but was Aman's.

I am glad that both baby and mother survived and that ASR signed everything to Khushi, loved the last line perfect way of ending the series thou I part of me was disappointed at the same time that she forgave so easily.

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ragaya

@ragaya

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

both u sisters made me sad. both unnamed and unconditional ended :(
that said, very nice ending to the story with a simple explanation of the title unconditional. thanks for not making it melodramatic. it was simple yet touching.
thank u lazy for bringing us destroyed and unconditional.
looking forward to reading more stories from u.

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Awesome, wonderful story. Loved it completely. I really couldn't see how you could make Arnav repent after what he did in Dangerous, but you were able to make me like him again. That is the capability of a writer. Well done.

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Heyyy

Loved the end!

Are you going to give a epilogue for this??

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zoya

@zoya-shah

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

👏👏👏.that was one incerdible story i really enjoyed so much.the ending was superb and i feel like crying that i won't get to read more😭.long live zehra and her incredible writing.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

congratulations on such a beautiful story. I have loved and enjoyed every bit of it. and it was such a beautiful chapter, such an absolutely amazing end to this story.

cheers
sonia

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

I loved it!

From your story it is clear that khushi forgave him. For a while even I thought she was in denial! Then I went backs no tear thru when she talked with him! She countered each of his acts with the ones he had later... In her mind, he had done penance or something similar and there was no bad to remember! At least that's how I took it!

The entire twist with dev being Aman ' sson was brilliant! I loved it! And sending Shyamu to HK with fake passport and drugs! Lol!

Thank you thank you. thank you!