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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't believe this SS has finished 😭
I am so glad that dev is Aman's son 😃

I loved what he did with Shyam 🤣

Beautiful ending 😳 Loved it 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wordless yaar !!😳
you write so well... I am eager for your further works 😊😊

Amazing SS !! BEST ! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ending khushi forgive him ... Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
U have no idea how happy i am...😭

Thank you for making me a part of this wonderful story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing but me sadwa why did u endwa??😭👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey zehra
If u remember me and my comments then u know what I feel abt the story and now it's ending. So I would completely skip arnav and khushi and would say I'm happy for aman and anjali but at the same time shocked that dev is aman's son. These two are seriously chuppa rustam.
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Posted: 12 years ago
u ended this??? nooo..
chalo koi nehin let me tell u this was awesome... no more than awesome.. this was simply fabulous... I loved loved loved each and every update of this one.. Destroyed had made me sad, wanting to throw juta chappals at asr and what not but i loved that too... and this one had the repenting arnav who tried everything to win his khushi back... I too have the feeling knowing khushi that she forgave asr and not dilusional.. I read two updates together.. standing ovation to u zehra..Loved the way khushi came to arnav to complete her world. And aman and anji.. ah.. perfect together.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
You wont believe what happend to me i have wrote a long comment n when i clicked ok i got javascript error msg... Ahte it ... AWESOME CHAPTER u did justice to all characters and didnt left any questions to brew in anyones mind... I would like to THANK U for writing such an awesome ss like DESTROYED where Arnav was a true animal and he hold the negative character till last chapter of destroyer almost last... I am happy that u didnt show a sudden 360 turn in him but showed it once he knew the perfect reason to do so not just after seeing his wife's beautiful face or petite form... M prasisng u not the character whom i hated from the bottom of my heart in DESTROYED but u made me love him again gradually in unconditional ... The way he took care of her and accepted his mistake infront of his loved ones and accepted their wrath without having self pity ... Its a very hard job and only he could do it... The AA meeting and flashback was hot... They did the mistake twice Ahemm... Wht the was my reaction with eyes poping out when Aman told Dev was his son so tht was the reason he smiled while seeing Shyam's file in one of the previous updates... See i told u u didnt left a single gap... One request which i missed in alst chapter and for that i would request u pleaseee give us an epilogue showing some romantic moments btw Arshi... Plzzz coz till now what we saw was either the rape track or the repenting love one but nothing light n cute romantic... M not asking for a sizzling mature type but just a light romantic one may b jus Arnav being all flirty with Arnav and ANJALI AMAN settled... Only if u can but do consider it ... *Puppy face with lots of pleading emotions in eyes*

ur reaction
*eyes rolling* n thinking *yeh larki requests hi krti rehti hai*

n m smiling broadly wht can i do else cant order u around m not ASR type
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was the perfect ending! I loved it! Amazing job! Im so glad you didn't make her delusional :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very well written loved this story I am def going to miss reading it .I will read all parts again together from destroyed.

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