Dil hai k manta nahi..(sujal kashish) - Page 24

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Posted: 19 years ago
farha WELL DONE 👏
Nice part Sujal is jealous 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah maan gaye tumko.....itna zabardast part likha..........wow wase itna lamba bhi part nahi tha thora sato lamba likhte...... 😭 ........(hehehe)......wase superb haan.....kia role hai akshat ka......maza a gaya ji.........baas aab jaldi se kashish ko sujal k saath sahi ker do......ye angad kaha se bech mai a jaata hai..... 👏

ur Miss Late Latif... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah ji ye lo agayi tumhari dhamki den wali.

nice part yaar.but us angad ko mein 🤢 tapka denen ka man kar raha hai.

sujal is jelous hila ab toh i am waitin to read the next part .

ab jaldise cont karo na yaar plzzz .

(my trade mark)

warna tumhe bhi angad ke saath tapka doongi.

aur haan ayinda se thanx boola na toh tumhe mein gooli se udadoongi.

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW fARAH KAMMAL KAR DIYA YAAR.... 👏 👏
Sujal Kashish ko kisi aur k saath dekh le aur use fark na pade ho hi nahi sakta... hehehehe 😆 😃
too good part dear... 😛
plz cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah dear very good part.. me very happy that sujal ke dil mein kuch kuch hone laga hain kashish aur angad ko saath mein dekhkar... this is a very nice development....me liked it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very much.. sujal's increasing concern for kashish.. his not liking seeing kashish i mean his wife with some paraya mard angad... 😆 oh.. i totally fulltoo love it... ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ sujal is shooo sweet he has sent akshat to kashish & he does not want kashish to know he has sent him...shooo cute...... 😳 tho angad has admitted kashish's father in the hospital...i think there is something really fishy in this.. i think angad ne MR.Sinha ko dhamkaya , daraya hoga & that's why he had a heart attack...this is my guess.. 😉 hmm.. i did not like jab kashish ne sujal se chale jaane ko kaha...i wanted to smash her face.. 😡 tho sujal says she will need him..me sure she will need him as jab kashish ke father ko hosh aayega tho he will tell the actual reason why he got an heartattack aur tab as i think kashish will know it is because of angad that her father is in the hospital tab kashish ko shock se bachane ke liye sujal ki zaroorat padegi... tab sujal usse apna sahara dega... 😆 i hope sujal kashish atleast dost tho ban jaye.....😃 aur haan us angad ko durr rakho kashish se... 🤢 🤢 🤢 aur haan let kashish not tell anything about her married life to angad... agar kashish ne apna mooh khola tho achcha nahi hoga........ 🤢 achcha chal ab jaldi se continue karna.. yaara...me will be waiting for the next part jab kashish's ke father ko hosh aayega aur woh such batayega... 😉 😊 😛 😃 😉 😊 😛 😃 😉 😊 😛 😃 😉
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
dil hai k manta nahi...

recap:...sujal is jealous at seeing kashish with angad...he leaves akshat
behind to help kashish..etc etc...

.......
Inside....kashish and angad were sitting outisde....kashish had met her dad..but he
was still unconcious....

angad:..ek baat pucho? (he asked after quite a bit of silence...lol)

kashish:...pucho...

angad:...woh...sujal..nahi aya?..(he looks at her chori chori lol as kashish avoids
eye contact)

kashish:..haan....woh...aya tha...par..

angad:..par?

kashish:...chala gaya...

angad;..kyun?? (ek aur sawaal lolz...yeh akshat peh gaya hai..hehe)

kashish doesnt answer she looks here and there...

angad:...kashish....tum...khush ho na....????

this time kashish looks at him...eyes filled with tears...

kashish:...jab se tumhara saath chuta....khushiyon ne mun pher liya hai...(she says...)

angad:...kashish....(quiet shocked)...matlab..tum aur sujal???

kashish:...woh muje talak dena chahta hai.....divorce...chahta hai

angad:..WHHAATT....(his eyes narrowed)...par yeh sab...i mean...abhi shaadi ko din hi kitne..

kashish:....usne yeh shaadi majburi mein ki....mein usse samaj nahi pa rahi angad...
(she looks helplessly at angad).....mein bhi uske saath nahi reh sakti.....par papa ki
yeh halat......tum hi batao....mein yeh kadam kaise uthaon.....papa peh kya guzre gi
....is umar mein beti ka waapis lautana....(her tears drop).....par sujal nahi samjhega...
(she wipes her tears)...

angad:...(he puts his hand over hers)...kashish....muje tumhari khushi sab se azeez hai...
agar sujal ko chor keh tum khush ho to.....chor do use...

kashish looks at him...as angad nods his head in agreement...
kashish:..kehna ahsaan hai angad.....rishte itni asani se nahi tut te...
angad:..agar naye rishte intezar kar rahe hon...to purane rishte bulne mein waqt nahi lagta
...aur phir..sujal k saath...tumhara rishta hi kya hai???

kashish thinks for a while...and looks at angad again...with questioning eyes..lolx

angad:...jis rishte ko tum beech mein chor gayi thi....woh rishta ab bhi tumhara..
sirf tumhara intezar kar raha hai....mein tumhara intezar kar raha
hon......(he holds her hand tightly...and gives a reassuring smile....kashish smiles back
weakly........lolxxx)


....here we see akshat watching this scene...and is quite shocked....he steps back...
and calls sujal.......

.....

idhar garewal mansion mein sujal enterz in anger....fulltime...and rushes upto his room....
he slams open the door....and enterz inside...

ab sujal bina bole act karega...wah wah..taliyan ho jayen hehehe..well its almost
like kth wala scene where he destroys the room...fark itna hai..he doesnt lit the
room up in fire hehehe

sujal pulls down the blanket.....and throws it in the corner.....
sujal:..(mumbles)..how dare she.....meri zarurat nahi....she doesnt need me...damn itt...
(he breaks a couple of glass pieces...photoframes....)

sujal ki nazar dressing table peh pari..kashish ki jwellery aur churiyon peh parti hai..
he picks up a churi...and breaks it..:....khud ko samajti kya hai...(he tightens his fist
....)...sujal garewal se ulajhna bhari parega.....kashiisssh...(he slides his arm
across the dressing table....aur kashish ki churiyan urti hui zameen peh girti hain....)

sujal ka ghusa..was just pouring from his eyes....achanak..uski nazar zameen peh pare
lal rang peh parti hai.....it was the sindoor ki dibiya...jo sujal ne ghusa mein gira di
thi....(he goes near it...and observes it)

sujal:...yeh...(usko sametna shuru karta hai)....kya ho gaya hai muje?.....kyun uski kahi
baat (touches his heart).....woh mere liye koi maine nahi rakhti....to kyun mein uske bare
mein soch raha hon.....(abhi sujal khud se sawal kar hi raha tha....keh kashish entered
in the room......totally shocked at seeing the sight of the room.....)

sujal looked at her....and kept on looking while kashish hehehe looked everywhere...lolx..
uska bistar...pics...jwellery...sab kuch to sujal ne bikher diya tha...

kashish:..sujal yeh sab...
sujal:..(moves his eyes off her..lolx)...woh...
kashish:..(ghuse se dekhti hai)....tum khud ko samajte kya ho???
sujal:...yehi baat agar mein tumse kaho to??...(phir larai hehehe)
kashish:..what do you mean.....meri cheezein....kamre ka haal kya banaya hai??
sujal:..jo tumne meer saath hospital mein kiya....uska hisaab pura kiya hai
kashish:....ur disgutsing..
sujal:...to tum kaun si dhud ki dhuli ho....(woh ghuse mein bol jata hai)
kashish:..kya?...kya kaha?
sujal:..woh jo sach hai....muej nahi pata tha....tum itni...(he gives a dirty stare..)
....wahan tumhara papa ki halat kharab thi aur tum...
kashish:..aur mein kya?saaf saaf kaho...sujal
sujal:...saaf saaf....acha....(he comes near her)...woh admi kaun tha?
kashish:..kaun?
sujal:...wohi....jo tumhare saath saath tha
kashish:..(she understand hez talking about angad)...kyun?..tumse matlab
sujal:...haan matlab hai...
kashish:..kya?...kya matlab hai?...
sujal:....muje nahi pasand keh meri patni...
kashish:...patni???...(she smirks)....yeh lafz tumhare mun se acha nahi lagta....aur waise
bhi...yeh rishta khatam hone wala hai...isliye mein chahon karungi.....tum kaun hote ho
rokne wale
sujal:...(grabs her arm and pulls her towards himself)....yeh rishta khatam hone wala hai...
par abhi huwa nahi.....jab tak tum mere saath ho....mera tum par puar haq hai...samjhi..

kashish and sujal stared at each other....when sujal suddenly realizes what he just said..

sujal:...(he leaves her)...mein nahi chahta...tumhari waja se....is ghar peh koi khichar
uchale....(he adds...and avoids eye contacT)

kashish:..khiichar??....Mr Sujal Garewal....is ghar peh...sab se bara dhaag to tum khud ho..
(she starts to walk by when sujal stares at her...really hard....)

sujal:...mujse mat uljhoo...(he holds her arm...kashish looks at him..and then pushes
his hand back)...

kashish:...muje koi shauk bhi nahi...(she was about to leave...but the turns around)...
aur woh admi....mera hone wala pati hai.....(she says giving a winning smile...while
sujal's jaw bone gets tight lolx...ghuse mein....kashish leaves the room...)


sujal:...hone wala pati...(he mumbles...)....mein bhi dekhta hon....kashiiish...tumhe
yeh khushi kaise naseeb hogi.....(aur phir sujal keh chehre peh bhi ek challening smile ati
hai...jaise kashish ko uski khusiyon se dur kardena hi uska maqsad ho......)


ok..aj ka part...plssh comment...and thanx everyone....luv ya all...
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Posted: 19 years ago
OOOOOOO...My Goood!! 👏 ..Yaar Too Good!...Kya Jawab Dia Kashish Nein..."Vo Admi Mera Honai Valla Pathi"...Too Good!..Hun!!...To Good!!..Keep It Up! 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah yaara tu tho ek dum chah gayi.. you are a STAR..na na naah STAR nahi balki ek dum ROCKSTAR...the part was toooo damnn coolllllllllllll..
seriously the part was EXCELLENT , FANTASTIC , MIND-BLOWING , SUPERB , AWESOME , MARVELLOUS , GREAT....
👍🏼
i liked the part very very much.... 😎 us kashish ne angad ke saamne apna mooh khol diya....uski tho main...very very badddddddddddd........ 👎🏼 sujal ka ghussa.. oh..man i just loved it.....hye hye us ghusse par tho mar mitne ko dil kartha hain.. me totally fida over his ghussa... 😳 ab us kashish ki itni himmat ki usne sujal se kaha ki angad uska hone wala pati hain.. mera tho jee kar raha hain kashish ko goliyon se uda doon..tapka doon.. 😡 tho ab sujal has told that woh bhi dekhega how kashish will get married to angad..ab mazaa aayega.. sujal kashish ko tadpayega..yipeee....maine kaha tha ki kashish angad ke saamne apna mooh na khole ab joh usne apna mooh khol diya sujal usse theek karega , sujal kashish ko dikhayega ki asli sujal garewal kya hain..... oh..seriously i would just love it.... 😆 waise ab thak kashish ke father ko hosh nahi aaya..me waiting for him to get hosh aur phir shayad kashish angad ko ek thappad maregi kyunke she will know it is because of him her father is in the hospital... 😉
u know what yaara me seriously want to know ab sujal kya karega.. woh kashish ko din mein taare kaise dikhayega.... 😆
ab please jaldi se continue karna...mujhse sach mein intezaar nahi hoga.....me become very greedy when it comes to your stories..jee kabhie bhartha hi nahi hain ek part se....teri stories ki lath lag gayi hain mujhe...jhat se continue karna..... 😆
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 wow !! amazing......fantastic part farah ji juzzz excellent....me loved it 👏 yeh so called "love triangle" bada jhakas lag raha hai....bole toh hatke 👏 gr888 part farah ji....aur aise hi ek angel ki tarah cont karti rehna plzzz 😳 😳
Edited by lklk - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
farahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.........ek dum kool part............mindblowing part.................................tooo gudddddddddddddddddddddddd..........juzt luv it yaar..............oh god itna acha part ta.............wow maza aya sujal kashish ki laraye dekh i mean parh k( 😆 )................aab jaldi se cont karo........ 👏
Miss Late Latif...

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