Dil hai k manta nahi..(sujal kashish) - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 farah dii aap cha gayi...too gudddd 👏 fantastic....mindblasting part 👏 excellent...keeep it uppppp jiii 😆 newayz plz cont sooon 😡 😡 aap karti nahi hain kar dena 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah kaha ho cont ker do aab..... 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah ab chal jaldi se continue kar na...please... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
hila dnt tell me k kashish ne Divorce k liye haan kardi.. hmm par shart nahi batayi.... 😉
ekdum solid part tha... 👏 kya garam mahol hai Sujal k Bedroom ka(full of Anger) 😆
dear cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok..so herez dil hai k manta nahi....thank u each and every person...luv you all

recap:....akshat tells sujal to re think on his divorce....sujal gets annoyed aur finally
dono...sujal and kashish mein larai hoti hai...which stops when the maid tells them
keh mr sinha just had a heart attack...lolx...not because of thier fight ofcourse..

..........

sujal and kashish arrive at the hospital...
kashish:....(she had controlled herself by now)...mere pa...i mean...mr sinha...
receptionist:..jee doctor..(ussi ka hospital hai)...woh ICU mein hain....under treatment...
kashish runs across the corridor...sujal pacing behind her....

kashish came near the door...and watched her dad from the glass window...as the sight of her
father made her weak...and tears rolled down....

sujal came up from behind....and was about to put his hand on her shoulder to comfort her..
....but then took his hand back....and managed to speak...

sujal:..kaa..kashish....tum..fikar mat...
kashish:..(immidiately turned around...)...koi zarurat nahi....muje tumhari is jhoothi
hamdardi ki...(tears still rolling dwon her eyes.....and sujal felt bad for what he did
to her)

sujal:..kashish ...i...i am
kashish:...mein ne kaha na....i dont need you...
sujal tighens his jaw bone...as nurse looked around at them....
sujal:...you will.....(he says looking into her eyes...and then leaves.....)

kashish watches him go ....and then turns back to her dad....when someone puts his hand on
her shoulder this time....kashish turns around in a huff and pushes the person...
shouting....

kashish:.SUJAL MEIN NE KAHA NAA....(but she stops as she sees its not sujal...)...t...tum??
angad:...angad....sujal nahi.....
kashish:..woh.....(she changes her tone)....an...angad...(she burst into tears)...papa
....papa......(she comes near him and holds onto him....angad bhi usse pyaar bhara sahara
deta hai lolx...moke ka faida uthana isse kehte hain hehehehe...)

angad:..relax kashish...kuch nahi hoga.....dont worry...
kashish:..par achanak yun.....pata nahi....upar wala mere itne kyun imthihaan le raha hai....
(she cries while angad...calms her down....).....

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after a while the doc comes out...

doc:...acha huwa kashish..tum agayi...

kashish:..papa kaise hain ab?

doc:..he'z out of danger....par teesra stroke tha...isiliye bahut care ki zarurat hai...
itni kya tension ho gayi?

kashish:...pata nahi....muje to hospital se infrom kiya tha...

doc:...haan.....par kashish...i am sure muje tumhe batane ki zarurat nahi keh...he needs
proper care...and NO stress at all.....NO tensions...(pats kashish on her shoulder)..

kashish:....jee...(wipes her tears)....par doctor...papa ko yahan laya kaun...

doc:..woohh...

angad:..mein...(who was standing beside her)

kashish:..tum????..par....

angad:..kashish....mein uncle se milne gaya tha.....abhi kuch baat ho hi rahi thi k..
achanak unhe dil mein dard utha....aur mein unhe yahan le aya

kashish looked at him with affection...:..angad...agar tum na hote to...

anagd:..kashish...plz..(holds her hands...)...yeh mera farz tha..

kashish looks at him....with..."really...hehehe"

angad:...insaan hone k nate....itna to kar hi sakta hon (gives a comforting smile..still
holding her hand.....song time...)

lolx...

zindagi yun luta doo....ek baar muskurade....(kashish smiles weakly)
kuch nahi mera sab kuch...teri ek hansi keh agaye...
ankhon ki yeh nami...(angad wipes kashish's tears)..
tere bin yeh sabhi....
aja de de muje meri jaaaan...
aaaa aaa kareeeeb aaaa aaaa aaaa kareeb aaaa...(they finally hug...when they part...
we see...sujal standing behind them....watching them.....and his fist tightens...


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akshat:..(running bumps into sujal who was still looking at angad and kashish)..

akshat:...sorry...abe..sujal...tu.....

sujal:..(comes back to normal)....haa...woh..

akshat:.....itni raat ko phone kar k bulaya...uncle kaise hain ab..

sujal:..theek hain...(he says...still looking at angad and kashish..woh sat on the sofa..)

akshat:..theek hain?..matlab?...tune to kaha tha..heart attck huwa hai...(he keeps
his irritating questions going...and finally sujal is fed up...when he sees....that angad
is holding kashish's hand...heheheheh)

sujal:...to kya heart attack k baad lazmi hai insaan mar jaye...(he says ghuse mein)

akshat:..yeh tuje kya huwa??...(gets back)

sujal:...mein ne tuje yahan madat k liye bulaya aur tu hai k..sawaal peh sawaal

akshat:...sorry yaar...

sujal:...(realizes his fist)....damn it...(as he looks at kashish once again and then
leaves)

akshat:..yeh isse kya huwa?...(asks the recpetionist lol..he then turns around and sees
kashish sitting with angad....close close heheh).....

akshat:..ohhh hooo hooo...(smiles)..i seee....MR sujal...Garewal...is bar tum bure phasse
(his smile gets wider and he goes out to catch up with sujal...)

.......

outside....sujal was standing near his car....hands resting on the car...

akshat:...(comes and stands beside him)..ab samaj aya...tumje ghusa kis baat ka hai
(teases him)

sujal:..(raises his head from the car roof top)...kya?..kis baat ka? (he ask furiously)

akshat:..hmmm....ab tu muje kyun bataye ga.....ab mein sab se important insaan to raha
nahi na...

sujal:...akshat....tu kya baqwaas kar raha hai?

akshat:..jis baqwaas se aj tak tu bhaagta raha....wohi baqwaas kar raha hon...

sujal:...(tires to change the topic)..mein ghar ja raha hon...tum kashish keh saath rehna.
...agar koi zarurat ho to bata dena...

akshat:...uski itni fikar??

sujal:..muej uski fikar nahi hai....

akshat:..to phir yeh...tension..ghusa....(raises his eyebrow)....yeh sab kya hai?

sujal:...dekh...tuje rukna hai ruk...nahi rukna to ja...waise bhi....uske paas bahut log
hain sambhalne wale..(he mumbles)

akshat:..kya kaha??...(trying to hide his smile)

sujal:...kuch nahi....(he opens the car and sits in...while akshat quickly sits
in the passenger seat...)....tu kaha araha hai?

akshat:..tere saath....

sujal:..to kashish..

akshat:..usko sambhalen wale to..bahuuuut hain...

sujal:..akshat...(calms down)..woh mujse naraz hai...par tujse nahi....tu plz (he makes
a pleading face...)

akshat:..acha acha...ja raha hon....par mana parega....bhabie ne tujpe apna jadoo...

sujal:..SHUT UP....aur usse bhabie

akshat:..haan haan..nahi bolaounga...(finishes sujal's line)

sujal:..ab ja...aur koi problem ho to muje bata dena...aur haan..sun...

akshat:..pata hai.....bhabie..i mean...kashish ko na bataon keh tune muje bheja hai...
hain na??

sujal:..chalo...kuch to akal ayi tumhe...(smiles and drives away....and akshat goes in...
where angad and kashish were already sitting...)


kafi lamba part ho gaya hehehehe....coming up....will kashish tell angad about her
going to be broken relationship....???...what will akshat do??...whats happening to sujal...
is it jealousy....infatuation...or...LOVE???....will update soon...plssshhh commentss

luv ya all...
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx sara yaaara luv you...and your red font lolx...haan yaar....woh ahem ahem scene bhi ajayenge..itni jaldhi kya hai...hehehehe.... 😆

lo jee..agayi WARNAAAA ki dhamki dene wali hehehehe....thanx jyothi....abhi continue kardi hai... 😛 😉

hey aishaa....hmmm divorce yaar..abhi to mamla taal jaye ga hehehehe....baad mein dekhein ge...agar angad peh pyaar aya to ehehehe divorce kar wa deinge lolx 😆 😉

hey anitaa...thank u soooo much..and don cry..i have continued 😆 😉 😛 ..comment karnaa 😃

and suryaaaa...hehehe...alwayz a pleasure to read your comments..inte lambe lambe jo hote hain 😆 😳 ..no thanx yaar...agaye agaye dekho..sujal ko kis kis baat se takleef hogi hehehehe 😆 😳 😛

and heylo mis late lateef..hehe is bar thodi late hui na...but thanx for commenting...y too luve akshat's character..lolx..and sujal too woh to apna cheeta hai 😆 😉

hey golu...thanx yaar...waise mein ne zaida time nahi lagaya next part likhne mein 😳

hehehe thanx surbhi...jani..abhi kardi na continue..woh us waqt net kharab tha na..isiliye..warna me try to update regularly 😉 luv ya

and last but not the least...kulbin lolx..thanx buddy...heheh haan sujal k beroom ka mahol ek dum garam...sujal khud bhi veryyyyy garam lolx....aur bhi abhi bahut kuch garam hoga...bus apne comment naram garam rakhna hehehehe 😳

baqi sab ko bhi jo parte hain thank uuuuuuu aur jo comment nahi karte..unko bhi thank u 😆 😛 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Farah.....
It was tooo goood!!

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Loved............................................Sujal!! His smiles...uska ghussa...attitude n all...And I can even imagine his face yaaaar....that was Fab...ab yeh Angad kahan se agaya ek dum se.....

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Cont. sooooooooooooon...Luv yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 tooooo gud.....excellent.....kya story hai...cont soon... 😳 😛 aur ab plzz iss angad ko frame se hatao...i mean...... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah...ths part was totally awesome....n angad....omg....ja ke kripa ko dhonde our kash ko akela chor day.....bechari kashish...her dad had a heart attack...i guess now she won't tell him abt the divorce ....YAYY!!!....N PLZ UPDATE SOON.......n u noe wut...hope tumhe angad pe pyaar nahi aaye... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 gud farah ji but aise hi cont karna 😳 😳 newayz this part was rocking 👏 gr88.....sujal ki jealously concern and all 👏 👏 👏 juzz tooo gud....u r a terriic writer.... 👏 amazing....awesome...tremendous....truely sepectacular 👏 and yeah dont say THANKZ to me me seriously dont like this word 😡 😳 😳

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