Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120 - Page 10

wow !! wat a passionate update..loved it..

The update was superb. Glad that Khushi has doubts about Shyam & she had discuss it with Dr. Manav. Feel sad for Manav that he cant get the person he love. I like the jealousy that is brewing in Arnav when he sees Khushi with Manav. His confession about not being with any women after seeing her was superb & their romance on the bed was so passionate but as usual was interrupted. Now y he is angry knowing that she is a designer😕

amazing update...bt u need to cont sooon...

hate shaam

Sitting on the edge of my seat with baited breath

uh-oh!!!!

Oops sorry K, I wrote my feedback in thread 2 , my bad...

Originally posted by: dpotnis

That was ... ahem.. ahem...hott. But whats with these Raizadas and their interruptions. Serial mein hota hai, per yaha bhi? Never imagined that a buttoned down dress could be so seductive. Only you can make such a simple outfit a turn on. That scene where he is waiting for her in the bedroom, I so wanted it to be repeated in the reel one. Udhar nahi hua per tumne meri murad puri kar di. The CVs has so much scope to introduce such cute scenes in the serial. But they never show what we want. Chalo DR mein hamri mange toh puri hoti hai.

Originally posted by: lovelyangel

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oops,I am terribly late to update my comment,but I was so busy that to complete reading the update I read at three different times,every time reading 1/3rd of the update,so I couldn't comment.You are so intriguing writer that I read this chapter in bits(you can imagine I wasn't even finding fifteen minutes to read the update).Whenever I got the second free,I very quickly looged in and read whatever I could read.

This chapter was beautifully written as usual.Mami can't ever be something loveable to me,why is her behaviour always petty😒???.Payal has to face both petty mami and immature Akash,but it was her wish now nothing more than hoping for better developments can be done.I am happy that Khushi is aware that Shyam is definately fishy man and he is bad-eyeing her(my praise for Khushi who is very quick to observe this fact).

p.s Akash what tha f**k😡

p.s.s On the hopeful note,Arnav is angry on Khushi because she is designer and still she wore such a dress which was so difficult to unorbe☺️

congrats on the new thread,