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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awesom update...thank god finally swayam's grandmom agreed to his relationship wid sharon...u described the places so beautifully...very well written...SwaRon r so much in love...they can't remain widout each other for 1 sec...u have very well described their romance...n thnx for pm.

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tanharockks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Nice update

waiting for ur next update

thnx for pm

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

it was sooo gud,...
thanks for the pm and do continue to pm me!!!!
u are a amazing writer!!

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

RES...i'll read it whenever I am free!

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Trip was interesting...

Finally Swayam 's Old GF okied Swayam's Young GF 😆

When Swayam decides to avoid sharon, i thought he will avoid for 3 day s and will create MU... but thanks you kept it simple..(had it been D3 cv's they would have found one more reason for MU 😛)

Are you from that place ??? Or Like swayam you have been there twice ..just kidding ...You seem to know it very well and it was knowledgable for me as Iam not aware of that place and picture helped too 😊

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Simren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA
Trip was interesting...

Finally Swayam 's Old GF okied Swayam's Young GF 😆

When Swayam decides to avoid sharon, i thought he will avoid for 3 day s and will create MU... but thanks you kept it simple..(had it been D3 cv's they would have found one more reason for MU 😛)

Are you from that place ??? Or Like swayam you have been there twice ..just kidding ...You seem to know it very well and it was knowledgable for me as Iam not aware of that place and picture helped too 😊

Hey firstly thankx for the comment and secondly m not from Shimla, i m from Goa...and all the details of Shimla are been taken from the internet.😊

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Awesome update. So Swayam's one GF approved the other GF. Nicely penned sequence. Looking forward to the next update to see what's next.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

WOW...loved this chapter dear...grand mom already knew about sharon..how sweet...loved the small small cute moments ...swaron in ur ff are the cutest ...😳😊👍🏼...plz update soon😊

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Simren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

(Tanha) Swaron ' Dushman To Dosti To Love part 14

Guys hope you enjoy this part''and If I missed to PM anyone then I'm sorry'..thnkx for your comments and likes on the last update''ENJOY!!!😊

Chapter 14: 😊

The Next morning at Swayam's house'..
Swayam: grandma aap kyun jaa rahe ho'..app mujse naraz ho??
Grandmom: nahi pagal ab dekho mein India ayi thi teri aur nuts ki shaadi keliye lekhin ab tu shaadi kar raha hai toh mein isliye jaa rahi hoon.
Swayam: par aap India kyun nahi rehna chahti???
Grandmom: dekho beta tumare dadagi ne apni akri saas Australia mein liyi thi toh mein chahti hoon ki mein apni bhi akri saas Australia mein loon.
Swayam: ( keeps his hand on her mouth) ayinda aisi ankri saas wali baate maat karna.
Grandmom: acha baba tikhe ab mein chalti hoon bye.
Sandy enters:
Sandy: (hugs Grandmom) bye Grandma.
Grandmom: bye beta.
Swayam: oye tu kyun yaha ayi???
Sandy: tujhe kya bhai meri Grandma hai'
Swayam: nahi meri hai'.
Sandy: meri
Grandmom: Bas bas tum dono ladna bhand karo mein tum dono se equally pyaar karti hoon.
Sandy and Swayam hugs her and grandmom leaves to go to Australia.
Swayam: oye Sandy.
Sandy: haan bhai
Swayam: who tujhe pata hai na Nil wapas aagaya isliye who ab participate karega foorloose mein.
Sandy: (smiles) haan bhai aur waise bhi acha hua ki who aagaya mujhe London jaana hoga next week mujhe kuch kaam hai.
Swayam: (smiles😊 and hugs🤗 her) chal bye.
Sandy: bye
Swayam leaves to go to college.

All of them (gang) were gathered in the corridor including Sharon, just then Swayam entered.
Swayam: hey guys, kya ho raha hai sab ek saath assemble hue ho.
Weaklings: yaar tumara hi wait kar rahi the hum.
Swayam: kyu??
Kriya: Swayam rehersals nahi karni kya ya phir team chod di tune.
Swayam: Arrey yaar kriya kitna dati ho tum?? Not fair'
Kriya: ok ok acha ab chalo.
Sharon: (to herself) yeh Kriya ko rehersals ki itni kya jaldi hai'..ek baar Swayam ko muje hi bolne bhi nahi diya.(angry)
Swayam: acha chalo''.
Kriya: haan chalo
Weaklings to dazzlers: bye guys (smiles)
Dazzlers: bye (smiles)
Sharon: (staring at Swayam angrily because he didn't even once look at her.)
Weaklings leave for their rehersals. And dazzlers go to the canteen.

Later In the rehearsal hall:
Kriya: ok guys ajj ke rehersals bohot ache se hue hai, toh ab hume chalna padega'.kyunki ab dazzlers ko bhi toh rehearse karna hai.
Swayam: haan chalo hum canteen chalte hai.
Weaklings: haan chalo.
They leave to the canteen. The dazzlers were already sitting in the canteen.
Weaklings: hii guys.
Dazzlers: hii
Bharat: tum logo ko rehersals nahi karni hai kya??
Nilesh: aaj nahi kar sakte hai yaar.
Amar: kyun le?? ( kyun re)
Vicky: Rey ki tabyat thik nahi hai isliye who ghar chala gaya.
Kriya: (tensed) kya hua use??
Sharon: usko bohot tezz bukar hai'
Kriya: ok guys toh mein Rey ke paas chalti hoon'bye
All: byee
After Kriya leaves Sharon also tells them that she has some work pending and need to complete it so she leaves. Swayam can see that Sharon was angry on him so he excuses himself and follows her.
Swayam: mein bhi chaltha hoon mujhe ek important call karna hai.
All: ok
Swayam leaves and follows Sharon. Swayam pulls Sharon, put his hand on her mouth so she can't scream and drags her to the Fire exit.
Sharon: (did'nt see who it was) How dare you??? TUM???
Swayam: haan mein.
Sharon: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? Tum jao na apne team ke saath rehersals karo.
Swayam: arrey I know tum gussa ho lekhin mein kya karta footloose aaraha hai sab pressurized feel kar rahe hai.
Sharon: tumhe sab ki chinta hai sivai mere.
Swayam: aisa nahi hi Sharon try and understand.
Sharon: I understand kit um logo ke rehersals the us wakt toh tum kya mujse milne todi dher pehle nahi aa sakte the kya??
Swayam: mein kaise ata??
Sharon: jaise mein ayi thi tumse milne mein aaj collge jaldi ayi thi lekhin tum ho ki'.
Sharon was about to leave but Swayam holds her wrist and pulls her towards him and pins her to the wall.
Swayam: aaj grandma wapas Australia chali gayi suba isliye mein jaldi collge nahi aa paya Sharon.
Sharon: (felt bad that she scold Swayam for such silly reason)
Swayam loosened his grip and was going to leave'..just then
Sharon: Swayammm
Swayam: (froze)
Sharon: I'm sorry
Swayam went looked at her just ignored her apology and left the fire exit.
Sharon: damn mein bhi na baat ke gussa ho jaati hu'.pata nahi ab Swayam mujhe karega ya bhi nahi.
Swayam and Sharon comes back to the canteen.
Bharat: yaar Swayam kaha reh gaya tha'
Swayam: kuch nahi yaar'.
Simmi: you know Swayam ,Sharon there is party tonight its RDX sir's party.
Swayam: that's great guys'
Simmi: yeah it is and remember we all are going for the party tonight but except Kriya and Rey.
Swayam: ok cool guys then see you at the party.
All: bye c u..
Sharon: (upset) ( innervoice: mujhe aaj Swayam ko kuch bhi karke party mein manana hoga.

At RDX sir's party and were present except Kriya and Rey.
Rinni: ok guys lets go in
Everyone goes in Sharon tried to talk with Swayam but he just ignored her.
Sharon: Sw'.
Swayam: guys chalo lets get drinks'
Party host: guys please rock the dance floor with your partners. '
All the couples went on the dance floor except Swayam and Sharon.
Swayam just asked a random girl for a dance and he went with her to the dance floor, Sharon was fuming in anger.
Swayam: awww kitni jaal rahi hai''I think muje use maaf kar dena chahiye'..(Swayam was about to go to Sharon)
Just then a boy entered the party and came near Sharon, and Swayam was watching them.
Boy: Hi pretty lady,
Sharon: hi (fake smile)
Boy: One dance please'.
Sharon: (didn't want to be rude so she agreed) sure
Boy: your name??
Sharon: Sharon
Boy: and I m Shivam ( yh guys its chee-vam/ shirritating)
Sharon was least interested she just gave a fake smile.
Shivam pulls her more closer, Sharon was feeling uncomfortable and Swayam was jealous and fuming in anger.
Shivam: so your from st Louis?? I guess'
Sharon: yh
Shivam: so your alone at the party???
Sharon: no I'm with my friends'
Shivam: ohhk
Shivam dragged Sharon to a corner.
Sharon: what the hell are you doing??
Shivam: ohh c'mon babe''ur acting as if tum kisi ke itne close gayi nahi
Sharon: ( thinking about the beautiful moments, she and Swayam shared) par tume koi hakk nahi hai mere paas ane ane ka'
Shivam: ohh c'mon
Shivam was trying to kiss Sharon, she tried to push him away but He was more Stronger than her and was about to kiss just then someone had kept his hand on Shivam's shoulder.
Shivam turned around to see who he was''Sharon felt happy seeing Swayam and she ran near him'.
Swayam: ( to shivam) hey buddy tum yaha kya kar rahe ho''Party to andar hai na'( angry)
Shivam: haan who mein jaahi raha tha'. ( scared and leaves)
Sharon hugs Swayam.
Sharon: acha hua Swayam tum aagaye who cheap Shivam pata nahi kya karta''I'm sorry Swayam tumpe subha chilane kel liye mein jaanti hu mein bina baat ki hyper ho jaati hu lekhin mein kya karo'.mein tumare bina nahi re sakti'..
Swayam: Sharon hume wapas jaana chahiye warna sab log hume dundte dunte yaha aa jayege.
Sharon: ( breaks the hug) Swayam tumne kya mujhe abhi bhi maaf nahi kiya??
Swayam: Sharon lets talk about it later.
Sharon: please Swayam itni si baat pe itna gussa'
Swayam: mein iss baat pe tumhe maaf karne wala tha lekhin tum toh dusre ladke ke saath dance karne mein busy thi na'.
Sharon: woh mein'
Swayam: let it be Sharon'
Sharon: enuf Swayam tum bhi toh kisis aur ladki ke saath dance kar rahe the na'
Swayam: haan par itna close nahi.( angry)😡
Sharon: par Swa''(without hearing her Swayam leaves)
Sharon: I'm sorry Swayam'yeh sab uss cheap Shivam ke wajese hua hai'..par mein tumhe manake rahungi.

After the party everyone went home. Sharon tried to call Swayam, but he didn't receive her call. Sharon was very Sad and worried about the fact that Swayam was ignoring her.

Next morning in the college''Sharon was searching Swayam in the fir exit but She banged into Someone.
Sharon: ( without looking who it was ) I'm so sorry'.
Someone: heyyy
Sharon: TUMM???
Someone: haan mein ( not allowing Sharon to move)
Sharon: Shivam get out of my way. ( Kind of scared)
Shivam : (evil smiles😈) not that easily babe uss din toh tumara savior lucky charm aya tha aur tumhe mujse dur kiya tha lekin aaj yaha pa koyi nahi ayega, tumara woh friend bhi nahi.
Just then Swayam entered'.He saw Sharon and Shivam in such a position that he got sngry again.
Shivam loosened his grip seeing Swayam.
Shivam: hey dude tum phirse'.
Swayam: ohh sorry to interrupt'. ( angry tone)😡
Sharon: Swayam u're miss understanding''its not wat ur thinking.
Shivam: haan dude its not watt thinking hum aise hi iss position mein nahi the hum dono iss position mein the kyunki we are in a relationship.
Sharon: watt??? U shameless creature'..how dare you??? Swayam his lying'.i swear I only love'. ( shivam interrupts)
Shivam : c'mon babe don't be shy'..woh kya na buddy usne kaha tha ki friends ko maat batana isliye woh aisa react kar rahi hai'.
Sharon: shut up Shivam,tum kyun aisa kar rahe ho?? ( tears rolling down)
Shivam: buddy belive me she's just scared.
Swayam: firstly I'm not ur buddy, and do you think I'm gonna belive you over my GF.
Shivam: GF???
Swayam: yh GF
Shivam: haan tere GF toh bohot fast nikli tere saath saath mujhe be date kar rahi hai'
Swayam: Shutup'.look agar tume apni jaan pyaari hai''toh leave.
Shivam: abhi toh mein jaa raha hoon tum logo ko baad mein dekhlunga.
Swayam: just leave ( shouted)
Shivam left and Sharon cried and hugged Swayam''..
Sharon: (crying😭) kya tum mujse abhi naraz ho I'm sorry Swayam and jo Shivam ne kaha who sab joot hai I only love you Swayam and I will only love you till my last breath, you're my first and last love Swayam.
Swayam: (broke the hug🤗 and cupped her face) shhh sharon stop crying please''
Sharon: (still crying)😭
Swayam: I believe you Sharon and trust me woh Shivam humara kuch nahi beegad payega jab thak hum dono ek saath hai'.
Sharon: I LOVE YOU SWAYAM!!!❤️
Swayam: I lOVE YOU TOO SHARON!!!❤️

Just then a girl was standing near the fire exit door who heard their conversation''
Girl: ohh toh yeh baat hai'.ab dekho Swayam Sharon mein kya karti hoon just wait and watch.

Ok guys this is it for today'..so who's the girl will be revealed in next chapter till then keep guessing''I hope you enjoyed the chapter''and I know but this was a bit smaller one'..but I could have continued it but I wanted to keep the girl for the next chapter so'..do comment and hit like!!😊
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Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago