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Part 12
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Maan came back to present, not wanting to think past but Geet being near him was not helping. It was just making things worse

"Maan you don't have to be effected by her. Just keep an eye on her and treat her as a common employee"

He looked at Geet who was immersed in making presentation. Then his eye went on envelope in his table, he opened the envelope. It was regarding another project which needed his immediate attention.

"Geet you cannot divert me from my work… Gosh I was just going to miss this one"

He dialed her, she picked the phone still immersed in her work "Come in my cabin soon"

"But sir presentation…" "No arguments come immediately."

Geet knew she has to go to him as well as finish presentation, there was no option

"yes sir" "Yes, take this dictation and draft it well and send it at address by today's office outgoing mail"

"Dictation? "She is used to give the dictation not take it.

"Sir I am busy with the presentation, can I send someone else if you don't mind" Maan gave her a stern look and seeing that before he was about to start his lecture on her duties she picked the notebook and pen

"Sir I am ready" Geet took the dictation, drafted and posted it and then again started working on presentation. It has to be great and on time, no mercy this time.

While Maan got busy with other work, aloof of the fact that GEEt was here working for him since her first day without having dinner or lunch as he has loaded her with so much work and kept adding work of PS on top of it.

Geet did not have even time to even charge her phone when it went dead, she had no idea, so when her father was calling worriedly, she did not pick it up.

Geet was completely exhausted when she was called by Maan sharp at 4. She showed him the presentation and he Okayed it.

When she was about to leave "You look too messed up. Geet Handa is not this I know so don't try to act much. I want you well presentable in meeting, sharp at 5pm."

Now when she thought she will take a break, he gave her the work to look presentable.

The meeting at five went well. After client went, Maan was about to talk to Geet when his phone rang .. "Handa construction" He looked suspiciously at Geet but without telling her picked the phone

"Maan beta" he heard Mohinder handa's shaking voice. Voice was shaking as he did not have guts to talk to Maan and he was also hell worried about GEET. With no option he had to call

Maan went far away from Geet "Ji Papa…" he had thought of calling uncle but that did not happen with Maan

"Beta I am sorry to disturb you per Geet, I have no Idea of where she is"

Maan looked at Geet. This girl cannot stop troubling anyone.

But before he could say anything "she has not come since yesterday .. she informed that she has to stay in office whole night but from morning I am calling, phone nahi utta rahee. I was worried." Maan just pulled Geet and handed her the phone.

Maan then realized that she has been in office since yesterday. He closed his eyes with the though of realization but then soon gained his control

"All this to gain sympathy, I am not buying this Geet Handa" and he left.

Geet after a while came with some other files to handle them to Maan

"Listen, you had your lunch right? If you don't know, there is office canteen in the bottom floor. You have to find everything on your own. Don't expect me to give personalize tour to you." There was a hidden concern but will he accept, never. She was nothing to him now is all he wanted to believe.

"Thank you sir for asking. I will try to figure out everything soon. Can I leave now?"

"Hmm" and Geet left the cabin and closed her eyes with slight tears in her eyes. He had concern; she could not miss to notice it. He is Maan and he can never be as hard as she had been, however hard he tries to prove it, she thought.

Her whole days' pain was forgotten. His 10 pain will try to break her but his one concern will bounce her back. It was only he who will help her in her mission, she will have to look upto him and hold on to his smallest support and travel this tough route. No one else can help her in this rough emotional journey. This is how Geet has decided.

Geet was in car, back to home, happy at the thought of how he had at last made her day. And this small small hope will help her. But then she realized how she had been hard on him always.

Past

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She had decided to stay in their house for 1.5 or 2 yrs. But staying was not as simple as she had expected.

Geet had went to her father just to know in polite manner why he selected Maan.

"Dad, just wanted to know, you must have found something special in Maan"

"Beta, don't go by the status and simplicity of Maan, he is a gem. Tabhi to itne bhir me maine usse chuna tumhare liye.Trust your dad."

"Status do matter Dad but if you say so I go by your words" she did not say anything to hurt her dad but did not internally buy any of his words.

How will she make him meet her friends if they ask.

"ohh no, I am not going to take side of that man. In fact my friend will know how this middle class man had dreamt of a rich girl. I will show him this down that he will think twice before standing in front of me." She confirmed in her mind.

"We can fix the status issue dear, why don't we make him a board member in our company"

"Yes Dad, whatever you feel is correct"

"Very well, now I know this man will jump to this opportunity and once he has done this, I will show him his real color. All his chanting for his parents will go and at least for these 2 yrs he will do whatever I say and I can pass these years in peace."

Geet's father came to visit them and they were welcomed whole heartedly.

They had offered Maan the position as Board of member

"But how can I be board member?" his father who wanted Maan to have practical approach at least literally banged his head at Maan's question.

"But Maan what's wrong if you are being offered. You must have caliber." His dad said

"off course Maan deserves it" said her dad but Geet could not bear it. This Maan has hurt her ego my arguing with her, he will see the punishment.

Geet's main anger on Maan was he was her husband and she was not able to digest this fact but she also knew that he was her husband and at present could do nothing about it. This led to more and more loathness for Maan in her heart. To calm her anger and to boast her ego she needed to do something and coz Maan was the core reason, he will have to suffer

"Well Dad, why don't I talk to Maan personally in room and tell him why he deserves this post."

Maan was surprised to see this soft Geet, maybe meeting with dad, her POV has changed.

He left to room with Geet. She closed the door "So you want to know the reason, reason is simple. I can't be seen associated with person of your status so you have to come up, at least somewhere to my position. And that's why this post is being offered to you" She threw paper on his face

"Now sign it? " Maan who never gave any attention too his ego, actually felt his ego breaking down with this much insult.

"I am sorry, take care of your status in your way. I am not interested. I was about to sign but they way you think, I will never sign for this post."

"Wow, what an ego man, but don't act pricy with me. I know your hungry eyes are dying to take this post. I very well know you middle class people."

Maan knew her father was down, if he says something everyone will know of fights and he did not want her parents to know about all this. For him this was still internal matter between them.

"After saying such pretty words, your heart must feel some peace, right. But as I said, you have to take care of your status your way" an he left the room

"Khadoos" this was first time she labeled him Khadoos for showing his attitude.

Maan politely declined the offer to her parents to which his father did not approve. What was wrong in that, he was their Son –In-Law and he deserves such posts on merit too, then why not? And this would have calmed Geet to, but this boy is ready to spoil everything. What he did not know was, what happened behind the door.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 13
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Maan was somewhere not liking the fight. The ever light environment at home was loosing its charm. Everything seemed so serious and his parents were always in concern.

He decided to talk to Geet again and try to resolve issue and their fight.

"She is my wife, Mishty mana hai maine usse, what does it matter if I bend a little in front of her and the liveliness of house returns back. Maybe this way things will sooth and she can also absorb the situation."

"Now I am married to her, in our family never have any marriage broke. I can at least try from my side."

He knocked her door, she opened with pink night suit on. She was so beautiful, he could not deny. He again got little lost in her, his heart beating at different speed all together.

"What's up, come straight"

Maan wanted to make things Ok, he smiled "I have something to talk, can I come in"

"wow' where did all those attitude go away Mr." he was prepared, knew harsh words would come. He has to be patient and talk to her. This was all going wrong and somehow needed to be fixed.

"Anyways I don't discuss anything with person like you, I have my class but what to do, am stuck here"

"See I know, your status is way beyond mine, but we both are stuck in this situation. Can we not discuss it and try to bring situation to some control"

"Yes my dad wanted to make things normal but you, you spoilt it all by not signing the post"

"Ok, if you want me to sign, I will but let's try to make environment friendly"

He was about to sign the paper when she snatched it away

"chh chh chh'. Your dream is about to fulfilled and I snatched it away"

"What?I am doing this coz you want me to do."

"Hey,don't show me any attitude, I very well know persons like you. First you showed attitude to sign but then when it didn't work you came with your polite face and telling me that you are signing this for me."

"I know how middleclass people are, your greedy eyes on property on position, aur ho bhi kyun na'you have got a jackpot in form of marriage with me'. Now do one thing, Say sorry to me and then sign the paper. I know you will do it,just for one sorry you will not leave this opportunity and Money"

"I am sorry, if you think so I will not sign. Believe me I did not marry you coz of money, I can earn a lot than I am currently but I don't want to run after it. See try to understand we are now married and so I just want to suggest we can at least try. "

"Try with you, how can you even imagine and have guts to say it."

"See you are upset with everything, I know. But vent it out on me and please be calm in front of my parents"

"And why are you ready to take all my crap" He looked deeply into her eyes, kept looking into it, it was so intense that the hard Geet also shook for a second

"Coz I love you and I had madly fallen in love with you way before our marraige. Tumhare yeh berukhee iss pyar ko aise mita nahi sakhi Geet. I have spent nights and days talking with you thru pictures'. Haan gusse me kuch jyada bol gaya main bhi "

She immediately showed her fingers to him, how he can have guts to speak this rubbish in front of her. "Don't even dare to say that again."

Maan looked to other side and closed his eyes "And listen, OK I will not say anything to your parents but you need to see a proper place of where you belong or else Believe me I will make you hate me one day' "

Then Maan had no option but to stay working in Handa construction as Local Civil Engineer as Geet had challenged him to earn money for his family on own and he could not trust to leave his parents alone with her and move to different city for other opportunity. No better opportunity available in HP.

But however Maan tried to make things normal, Geet had decided to show him his place. He had guts to argue with her and then a middle class person like him, how he dare confess his feelings in front of her. She needed to satisfy her Ego.

Now the talks in village have started about Maan and Geet relation. People almost knew that Geet did not consider Maan as her husband .

She had declined the Muhdikhai function in which almost whole village was invited.They could not cancel the function as it would be a big talk in village but Geet not showing up for Muhdikhai had raised many questions.

Maan and his mother had tried to convince her. Maan, she had just rejected to even listen and his mother she politely had said'

"Please Aunty, aap meri reputation ka soochiye' these people and these level of people work way beyond me and I here I go and sit down to show them my face and Aunty try to understand, I don't even accept this marriage then' you should have cancelled this function at first place' maine suggest kiya tha"

"Ok if you insist then I will ' I don't know what elase I have to do for the marriage which I don't even'."

"Koi baat nahi beta, you don't need to come if you are so uncomfortable' you are more important to us. We will manage."

They had somehow tried to manage the function but people had started to talk.

Maan tried to cover up things as his family had name in village, which was being tarnished but he have to save it. His father was being hurt hearing things but his frustration only came out on Maan as he could not say anything to Geet.

Maan one day was out going to bring vegetables when group of girls caught.

"Kya Maan, hero of our village' why have you to marry that girl. Did we not say, don't go for these smart girls per nahi isse he shaukh hua tha" said harpreet

"Bass karo tum log. Everything is shocking for her and that is why she is so troubled."

"Na.. now don't even talk to your frinds' did we not say, marry any of us. Itnee diwaniyoon ke beech hote, aisa haal kiya apna" said Nandu

"Kya haal hua hai mera' jaisa tha waisa hoon' chodo mera peecha tumlog" and he went from there.

They were all friends and Girls always liked Maan for his looks, his body shody, his football and above all his simple nature'.

They always teasingly offered him their hands for marriage with which he used to get irritated but he knew they were his well wishers always.

Maan had taken two weeks of vacation for his misty but he had to spend whole two weeks managing things, which was actually not happening. Geet had left for Mumbai for 2-3 days before starting the project in HP.

He was sitting at home with his mother who was caressing his hair'

"Maa today is my match, I am preparing my team for better opportunity. They will go beyond HP. I had been called for selection in state level"

"But your bauji" He turned towards her with fake angry face. He was sitting on ground while she on chair.

"I missed going two years just coz of him.. please explain him"

His father came to know and all his frustration of these days came up on Maan.

"So now you want to tarnish whatever name is left for me. You could not handle your own life. Anyone in place of you would have seen a different life after being married to such girl but you Maan. When will you understand life."

"Just denied their offer for the great post you were getting and now instead of doing anything for your career, you are here asking for Footbal selection"

"bauji try to understand" "No You understand, you still don't understand what we are going thru just becoz of you."

After his father gave the lecture Maan was upset and with his mother. He was imitating his father's anger when his mother had held his ears and running after him, when Geet was returning home. She had went to HP office directly from flight. And when she had seen the scene, that Maan was holding his ears and sitting on the groung near his mothers knee she had made a disgusting face at Maan.

In these two weeks Geet's behaviour had hurt Maan's ego too much. He was peace loving person but he had his limit too and it was not due to himself but his father's and family name were being tarnished. Questions like how Khurana's just married Maan for money, they were reputed name in HP and how could they do it.

Question that Maan will be working as employee under his own wife and khurana were just watching it, why.. everyone thought Money.

There were many many more talks that were coming up.

Physical aspect of their relation is soon going to come up.

Also, I am trying to finish of the past soon so that we can concentrate on the Manaoo kaise part.
Hope you all are liking. You will get to see a very sweet and passionate effort of Geet to get her husband back.
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye oye double update...
loved it...long way to go Geet...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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wow great story's plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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you have etched the characters very well.. be it Maan , the simple easy-going-normal-everyday-lovable-guy , to the super-ambitious-snobbish-Geet, to Maan's father who is constantly disappointed in him..
the interactions between each of these characters rings true.. natural and spontaneous.. Geet's sophistication and complete disregard for the feelings or reputation of Maan and his family is very convincing of her character and so contrasting with how average Maan was..

wow.. i loved the small nuances, like the way the local girls interacted with him ... the most innocent way they all are, in a small village, outright, and into everyone's business, but mostly meaning good by it.

Very interesting updates.. do continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATES

OMGGG GEET WAS VERY RUDE
POOR MAAN'S REPO WAS SPOILED IN FRONT OF WHOLE VILLAGE

WAITING FOR NEXT PART
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Omg Geet is so rude


Poor maan



He truly loves her


Anything tht Geet does or say will not change anything ...what maan has gone through is painful... How can man tolerate all these...




It is shame tht a husband cannot trust wife with his parents... That tells so much about wife character


There is NO way Geet can undo all these




I will never forgive Geet for her actions... And no logic or reasoning will change tht.



I'm sorry if I offended anyone...BUT I had to comment

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