Haww! Naina! How can you do this to poor Arnav! Now, I guess he won't propose anymore? If she goes to Lucknow, will he follow her there? At least, they'll be all alone there. Aw! Poor Kushi. What will she do now? I'm feeling more sorry for Arnav than Kushi. Naina, yeh tunhe mujhe kya kardiya?? I'm feeling more for Arnav!!
I really love your use of monologues to show their feelings. More from Arnav though. Perhaps that's why I am feeling for him more. But I just love the fact that you've made him be putty in her hands. (No less she in his!) Now that is what I call true love. Willing to do anything without losing the fact of who you are, not afraid to be willing to do anything for your love. Hmmm... does that mean he will go to Lucknow as well? Or will she refuse him to come? Or will she allow it? Your Kushi is quite brave. Going with him on a moments notice to an unknown destination, staying with him alone. Hai! How will they handle it? Will they get through the night? Hell, how will I handle it? Will I get through the night??
How hot are you going to make the night? Or are you?
Hai Devi Maiya! My heart has already started thumping!
Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next part.😃
Also wanted to let you know, your FF is fan.tas.tic!!👏
Thank-you so much for letting me be part of it.😃😃😃
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