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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

I am on "Res'ing First" Spree! 😆

yes you are my champ!!!

What a chapter, Darling!! It had everything I could have asked for ' a good dose of laughter, great conversations, intense passion and then .. bam ..Drama!!! A perfect update!!

thank you, thank you... I do try 😆

Loved the advice from Angel .. pretty much sums up what love has done to Arnav Singh Raizada!

yep - a smitten bunny if there every was one!!
😆 And it was hilarious to see Khushi realizing what she was doing to him .. what a pay back! He is having a racing heart .. and that too because he is scared of Khushi's reaction. Oh God! Who ever though Arnav Singh Raizada was going to turn into a puddle in front of his woman someday? I just loved to see him in this avatar. The man of few words were talking a lot these days .. and how much he is explaining! And someone is calling ASR melodramatic and he is abiding by! Oh Girl! What have you done to my ASR! 😆 He is nervous, isn't he? 😊
love does amazing things doesnt it... but lets see how he goes from here😳

Jalebi Junction in Lucknow .. that must have been the worst news Arnav must have heard in months. Poor boy! That reaction was instant and so much like him! He is going to be in such a fix ' he wanted her to succeed but he cannot stay away from her. I think he will now think twice about proposing, not willing to sound like being a hindrance to her dream' Oh Naina, what are you up to?? **Relax Farha, Naina loves these two just much as you do. Take a deep breathe.**

precisely!!!!

That make-out session was intense. I wonder how long they can keep themselves away from each other .. 3 days in the same room. You are not planning to throw cold waters of drama in the fire or passion, are you?

ooohhh I cant reveal that now can I 😆

PS: What are you giving me in return of the "Bribe"? I am waiting!! 😳😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks

i am fuming as i type!...don't get me wrong but this chapter completely undid all the lovely moments created in the previous one..for starters, i was almost screaming, "pop the question", "pop the question", in my head..moreover i feel things didn't move much in this chapter...since you have asked for reactions, i'll be honest with you- i am disappointed..nevertheless, i have hit the 'like' button..i'll be looking forward to the next chapter..let's see how things turn out...also thanks for the pm..

Thanks for writing in and fair enough hun... I respect your feedback and still accept it just as gratefully as I do with comments. 😊 😊
I have said this before and I will say it again: TRUST ME with this story...
I look forward to your feedback after the next few chapters to see if your opinion changes.
😳
Naina😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting to see Khushi all flared up. she has a total right to flip! ASR was very foolish yet at the same time very smart about the whole marriage thing. goo job!! :D
sorry dnt comment too much.. dead with work!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh NOo... eeverything was fair and fine... Now, this Jaleebi junc in Lucknow...
HOpe they both will be understanidng each other and take a fair decision... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...I am not very worried about the Lucknow thing. Ideally, that shouldn't stop him from proposing. Please don't do that. You can always work these things out.

The sexual tension is just skyrocketing. They need to diffuse it a bit. I hope she chooses to stay in the other room. It is practically very difficult otherwise. The first night in the Pent house, only you know how they managed to course through it as planned.😊

I will be waiting for your next update. Bye for now.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nainaaa... NO!!!!

U had my heart racing n come up my mouth n then u STOP!!!!
Juz like dat!!!! U r a cruel girl... u kno dat??????

Waitin anxiously for the next Update...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm.. what is going to happen now... I guess, Arnav will not open his mouth now...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Trust...so important in a relationship. Romantic Srinagar...Arnav couldn't have chosen a better place. Thanks for todays dose of MC. Though it was long am still not satisfied...waiting for your next update.

I just loved the clarity in your thoughts and how you gradually reveal the story to reach at a cliffhanger every time. Please don't separate Arnav and Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update:)luvd their conversation in flight...continue soon nd thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nooo.. seriously?? seriously??? no.. delhi is good for jalebis... no need to go to lucknow.. seriously?
come on!!!

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