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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS CONTENT HAS BEEN REMOVED BY THE AUTHOR DUE TO COPYRIGHT ISSUES.

SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.

-KARMACHAMELEON.

Edited by karmachameleon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS CONTENT HAS BEEN REMOVED BY THE AUTHOR DUE TO COPYRIGHT ISSUES.

SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.

-KARMACHAMELEON.

Edited by karmachameleon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Girgit, I'm just bowled over by your knowledge and creativity. Knowing facts is one thing but being able to incorporate those facts into something to create a story so beautiful is another thing altogether. You are brilliant! Needless to say, I loved how you pulled together the Radha-Krishna facts/information into a narrative. Incredible! I also got an insight into your unique vision of the Gods.
Coming to the protagonists in this story, it is interesting how love has started breaking down some barriers, love that exists yet it is unknown to them. The way you've conveyed this is amazing, these barriers are being broken down to give way to feelings that ASR did not even know existed within him. It's crazy how we sometimes discover our true selves through the help of another individual even without them doing anything. This is exactly what's happening to ASR.
The story's pace is just fine! I like to look at the positive instead of focusing on the lack. I'm happy that there's at least some progress and by that I mean ASR listening to his heart/hand for once and not his brain.
This was a wonderful effort by you, karmachameleon and you pulled it off wonderfully. I would highly recommend this story to anyone who loves to read, regardless of whether they know anything about IPKKND or not.
This story is a magical and engaging work that I know I will read again and again.
Thank you for the PM, Karma.
With love and light,
An ardent follower of your work.



Edited by ananya123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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KC hats off to u ...buddy u describe u beautifully ... its not just an update its dat u potray indian culture so well... radha krishna idea was fabulouse

now u can see i m here on ur threads ... u had to make a new thread to update ... i loved spamming ur thread😉 ... will see u at 300😊
Edited by sam88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Res

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🤗 KC I can't kiss your brain but I can surely kiss your hand so mwahhh ...that's an awesome piece of writing 😳 and 😭 just because of FACEBOOK I missed first place...par koi nahi...thread ka first post to mila

thank you for the note ❤️...LOLzzz it's just because of my stupidity I forgot that I'm a newbie and lost all my 10 posts in spamming and have to make another account so that I can comment on chapter 32 😉

hmmm 'CHAPTER 32' finally I saw your face after so many SOON's 😆

His hand on her hand ☺️...

BREAKING NEWS!!!!!!!!!
abhi abhi vishesh sutroon ke hawale se pata chala hai ki...

Mr ASR ke pass bhi ❤️ hai...but the problem is that it only beats for Khushi oops GLOOMY...
GOSH...didn't I tell you in last chap review that iska to baj gaya baja...isko LOVERIA hua-2...

baki ka edit tom...too sleepy now...🥱

---Edited Part 2---

ASR is so sweet...he want to tell her about him being her HOT BOSS 😉 only because he can't see her sad or upset...

Mrs. India and half naked women 🤣 🤣 🤣

Fall line bridal wear...first time launch...hmmm is it Asr's idea? 😉
maybe for his gloomy like a thank you kind of thing for coming in his life...a dedication or something...

Radha-Krishna concept idea and the way she describes it is so magnificent and sensational also...the peacock colour theme...simply awesome...kaise sochte ho aap yeh sab????? 👏

Our Gloomy-Tsunami are so much like Radha-Krishna...SOUL MATES
Krishna was physically irresistibly appealing...same as Tsunami...
Radha was the only one who ever enchanted him...same as Gloomy...
Entire world yearned for Krishna but he yearned for her...just like tsunami and gloomy...

I had read it somewhere that Radha was most important friend of Krishna 'his heart and soul...Radha is soul of Krishna...
their love is DIVINE & PHENOMENAL...their love symbolises the feeling of being united...but now I can imagine Tsunami & Gloomy in place of Radha-Krishna(sorry if I offend anyone's feelings)

They say that when two souls are united, then the difference of the other or the second vanishes...

now coming back to chapter...he find A in her mehendi...when your husband or loved one finds their name in mehendi then your love increases...or maybe it symbolises that her soul mate is in front of her and she's searching yahan wahan...faltu mein 😆

I won't say update SOON until I found what's the meaning of SOON in your dictionary...Lolzzz

P.S. Appy, Ananya, Sam, Cyma love u all 🤗
P.S. 2 : Appy beautiful VM and banner...
Edited by aanisawarsi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res :)

eagerly waiting😊
Edited by anjs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay...
i am terribly confused...😕

but coming to the story.. OMG.. did you just explained about my kanha ji..??
i love you.. thank you...

one information.. the reason why krishna and radha ji was not married is
because radhaji was part of kanha ji..incarnation... and you can't marry your
own part.. krishna ne radha ko banaya tha.. written in many books.. and this what
i believe...

the whole peacock concept was beautiful.. i loved it..😃

P.S: uumm.. don't mind but now i feel story should move lil ahead..
Edited by Shruti21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES (thts for divya)

KC di.. divya says she will be back and regular on IF soon and then hack the thread so beware 😉 😆
Has been lately very busy with office work and thts why has been highly inactive 🤢

Edited by cymateli - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
5page done aaalready...
Late to join..
Congo on the new thread sisy! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Wow... CONGRATS on the new thread ... eagerly waiting for the next chapter ...

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