MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA#8 LINK #9 PG 141 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
thnxx for the pm
beutiful part
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! the letter n poem was fantabulous! U have a way wid words! 👏Sanju n Prem n wonderful friends! Precaps r awesum! update soon! superbly written!
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awesomeee
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Omg Piya...What a beautiful update..
Loved Destiny's letter...Superbly written and so moving...
Pls continue soon...
Thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends here is the next update I hope u like it. Here is the 50th update of this FF I have tried my level best to make it special with Maaneet moments. This update marks the new start of Maaneet's life 😳 pls if possible do give me big comments 😃 Congratulations to each one of us for the half century completion of this ff 🤗🥳

love-Piya

PART 50

The room was dark and hence neither Maan nor Geet saw each other as a curtain was dividing the room into two halves

Both of them took steps towards the object and Maan placed his hand on that phase of the hand print which was visible to him

Nothing happened but Maan decided to wait

Geet reached the object and placed her hand on the print.

The curtain moved up as soon as the print on the object got its ideal partner and within a second the curtain got replaced with handcuff (HATHKADI) and the whole room got brightened with romantic lights

As soon as their eyes got adjusted to the unexpected brightness Maaneet were surprised to see their hands locked together in the handcuff thus making them realize they were the only 2 guests who were invited to the party

Maaneet were all alone'the room was closed'their hands were trapped together in the handcuff and now' the CUPID OF LOVE WAS ON ITS WAY WITH A HERCULEAN CHALLENGE OF MAKING THEM FALL IN LOVE ALL OVER AGAIN'

Maan greeted Geet with a loving smile but Geet had made up her mind of showcasing her acting prowess in front of Maan by proving it to him that his presence or absence has no effect on her existence

Geet: Toh Mr. MSK ye kaunsi nayi chaal hai aapki publicity gain karne ki? [So Mr. MSK it looks u are here with yet another plan to gain publicity]

Maan understood the pain of his angel that she was trying to hide behind the mask of fake hatred. He decided to remain calm and patient in front of his angry love

Maan: Geet main toh yaha ek party attend karne aaya tha mera yakeen mano tum mujhe dekhar jitni surprised ho utna hi surprised main bhi hoon [Geet I am here to attend a party believe me your presence in this place is a surprise to me as well]

Geet: Aapka yakeen toh main sapne mein bhi na karu Mr. Khurana mujhe bus itna bataiye ke iss hatkadi ki chabi kaha hai mujhe aapke saath bande rehne mein gutan si mehsoos ho rahi hai [I cannot trust u even in my dreams Mr. Khurana can u kindly tell me where can I find the keys of this handcuff as I am feeling uncomfortable with your presence around me]

Before Maan could say anything a message flashed on a nearby screen which read

"Welcome to this unique party. In order to get out of this room you need to find the key of this handcuff and that too by executing some perfect dance moves. After 5 minutes the music will start and your path will be decorated with enormous hurdles and it would be completely upto u how u guys would be crossing the hurdles in order to reach the next level of this game which will take u closer to the key. If the music ends before you guys can find the key then u would remained locked in this room for the whole night' Walking or running is not allowed u need to dance through the hurdles in order to escape from here. All the best"

The thought of dancing with Maan forced Geet's heart to pace with a strange blend of excitement and fear

She knew that even today her soul craves for the touch of Maan and she was in no mood to reveal this truth in front of Maan that his touch still has a majestic effect on her

Geet: Mujhe nahi khelni ye game main jaa rahi hoon [I am not interested in this stupid game I need to go]

Geet tried to move away but since she was handcuffed with Maan her legs were forced to freeze the very next second

Maan: Darr gayi Geet issi liye bhaag rahi hona? [Scared hence running away?]

Geet turned around to face Maan

Geet: Mujhe kis baat ka darr Mr. Khurana? [Why on earth would I be scared Mr. Khurana?]

Maan pulled Geet closer by holding her waist with such a possessive hold that Geet's chest gracefully kissed Maan's abs

Maan tightened his hold and with intense passionate eyes he successfully read the hidden chapters of her heart

Maan: Tumhe darr hai Geet ke jo pyar tumne nafrat ke mukhote ke peeche chupaya hai wo meri nazdikiyon se tuth na jaaye'tumhe darr hai Geet ke kayi tumhari aakhein mere dil tak ye sachayi na paucha de ke aaj bhi tumhe mera intezaar hai' tumhe darr hai Geet ke meri mohabbat ki shidat ke saamne aaj tumhare jhooti nafrat ki deewar gir na jaaye [U fear that the love which u have been hiding behind the mask of fake hatred might come out due to my closeness. U fear that maybe your eyes will betray u and will reveal the secret that u still await my return in your life. U r scared Geet that the building of your fake hatred will get destroyed in front of the intensity of true love]

Geet lowered her eyes and revolted back

Geet: Main aapse nafrat karti hoon Mr. Khurana [I hate u Mr. Khurana]

Maan: Jaanta hoon ke tum Mr. Khurana se nafrat karti ho par ye bhi sach hai tum Mr. Khurana se itni nafrat nahi karti jitni mohabbat tum Maan se karti ho [I am aware u hate Mr. Khurana but there is another truth attached to this version ur hatred for Mr. Khurana is very small as compared to the vast ocean of love u possess for Maan]

Geet: Mujhe aapki koi bakwaas nahi sunni [I am not interested in your stupid talks]

Maan: Aisi baat hai toh sabit kar doh mujhe galat Geet. Iss dance se main tumhe yakeen dila dunga ke humara pyar aaj bhi zinda hai aur tum iss baat ko saabit karne ki koshish karo ke tum mujhse ab pyar nahi karti dekhte hai kaun jeeta hai humari sachhi mohabbat ya tumhari jhooti nafrat [If this is the case then prove me wrong Geet. I will show u that our love is still alive through this dance and u try to convince me that u no longer harbor any feelings for me. Let's see who emerges victorious our true love or your fake hatred]

Geet held her bracelet tightly and with faced Maan with determined eyes

The music was switched on thus declaring the start of the game

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtfMAZl9x50


Omaha ziya..
Wahi yala Wahi yala
Ziya newa sahiya

Maan's eyes were narrating the immense love that he possessed for Geet and like a man who was totally drowned in the love of his angel Maan went ahead and requested Geet to join him in the dance that would have a rhythmic touch of his heartbeats

Omaha ziya..
Wahi yala Wahi yala
Ziya newa sahiya

Geet promised herself that she would remain immune to Maan's touch till the time she finds the key. She would never allow Maan to read the hidden chapters of her heart'Yes it was true she loves him but he had lost the right to know this reality.

Geet allowed her hand to slip in the possessive shield of Maan's palm as she accepted the challenge to prove Maan wrong

Music

Maan placed one hand on her waist and Geet allowed her free hand to become the ornament of his neck as both of them got into a perfect dance pose and declared the beginning of a war between love and hatred

Khwabon Khwabon Jaage soye
Khoye khoye Hum hai jaise yahan

Maan locked Geet's eyes with his passionate gaze which successfully melted Geet's soul and heart'Maan allowed his hand to write his claim on Geet's back as he caressed her silky smooth skin with such a delicate touch that almost forced Geet to shed a pearl from the mirror of her eyes

Raho raho Dundle dundle
Halke halke Hosh ke hai nishan


Geet gracefully changed the step in order to prevent any eye contact with the man whom she loved beyond sanity but this step of hers landed her in another difficulty as it gave Maan a chance to go on his knees and convey the feelings of his heart in soul searing fashion

Maan placed their locked hands on his heart and through clear cut gestures he confessed his love for Geet taking Geet by surprise

Omaha ziya..

Wahi yala Wahi yala
Ziya newa sahiya

Maan was proposing her and this was the only dream that she had weaved from many years but how could she forget his betrayl yes she couldn't trust him she was sure he will break her heart again'she couldn't fall in this trap again. Geet took few steps away from Maan as she tried controlling her pacing heartbeats'

Omaha ziya..
Wahi yala Wahi yala
Ziya newa sahiya

Maan twirled her gracefully and with full authority he pulled her back with such a force that she landed on Maan's knee. Geet tried to move away as she was already becoming vulnerable to his closeness but Maan was in no mood to leave her. He wanted to write it on her heart that he will never leave her till he breathes his last. He encircled his arms around Geet's waist and pulled her closer

Tum hum safar ho toh Raste sab hai sehar
Har mod par milte Sapno ke hai mehal
Pighle tan mann hai Sanson mein han nasha

The sudden unexpected pull took Geet by surprise and before she could voice her displeasure she found herself lost in the ocean of true emotions that were dying to embrace her in its folds

The lock of Geet's hair were masking her angelic face delicately it seemed they were trying to act as a barrier to stop Geet from falling in love with Maan all over again inspite of knowing that this was where she belonged in his arms'.

Tum hum safar ho toh Sab hai jaise haseen
Chand se zyada hai Jagmagati zameen
Pyaar mein dhoobi si Lagti hai har disha..

With immense love in his eyes Maan carefully tucked back her locks

There was a strange serenity in his touch which made Geet feel sacred and pure

Khwabon Khwabon Jaage soye
Khoye khoye Hum hai jaise yahan

Their innocent moment was broken as a path got highlighted thus making them realize this was the first hurdle they had to cross in order to reach their destination

The path was full of pointed glass pieces

Geet got frustrated as once again she was lost in Maan she tried to get up but Maan surprised her by lifting her high

Raho raho Dundle dundle
Halke halke Hosh ke hai nishan

He danced gracefully through the pointed and challenging glass pieces without allowing Geet to come even in the slightest contact of the harmful material

Through his actions he made Geet realize that he would also protect her throughout her life irrespective of circumstances

Kya karoon mein bayan Ladkhadaye zabaan

With every passing second it was becoming difficult for Geet to hate him; her heart knew what Maan was trying to confess through his actions but the fear of losing him once again was preventing her from believing him

Maan gracefully allowed Geet to descend down without allowing her to move even an inch away from him

Her skin was set to ablaze as Maan's warm breath caressed the sensitive skin of her nape


Music

Maan scooped Geet in his arms and happily danced his way on the carpet of glass pieces and continued to protect his angel from all the uncertainties that could ever welcome them

Geet was drowned in his eyes and she was forced to think maybe this time he won't betray her

As long as she was in his arms she would always be safe

Hum jo aise mil gaye hai Ab iraade hi naye hai
Tum hi kaho Kaise na ho
Dil mein mere Yeh..hulchul

They didn't realize when both of them successfully crossed the first hurdle

A shower of rose petals made them aware that they were now going to enter the second level

Geet cursed her soul as she gave herself the liberty of living in the bliss of Maan's arms

She moved her legs in discontent and hit Maan's chest with immense anger and told him your stupid romantic tricks won't work for me "I hate u"

She was successful in getting out from Maan's protective embrace and as soon as she was placed on her feet Geet tried to push Maan away in an attempt to convince him that their relationship has no future

Hum toh jaise hai deewane Dil ki saari baatein maane
Tum ho jahan Main hoon wahan
Dono hue hai pagal

But her attempts failed as the handcuff was once again successful in uniting the two souls

She landed in Maan's arms and without any hesistancy Maan locked her completely by hugging her tight

There was a beautiful blend of possessiveness and an undying promise of love in this hug Geet was once again lost in this special touch as she knew this was the first time that Maan's touch was appearing divine to her' This touch cannot be fake deep down her heart she knew it was the touch of TRUE LOVE' As soon as this thought crossed her heart without thinking twice Geet submitted herself in his heavenly embrace

Kum na ho deewangi apni Guzre yuhin zindagi apni
Dil jo batayenge Hum kehte jayenge..
Ha'

A sudden wave of heat forced them to come out of their dreamy paradise

Geet looked unbelievably at Maan as once again his love had captivated her to such an extent that she herself had reciprocated to the hug

She looked to the other side of the room but this time she did not try to move away from him this thought itself was enough to give positive vibes to Maan

Both of them were now welcomed with a new challenge and this challenge was indeed a life threatening one as it was a game of fire and death

The path ahead was lit with fire and the way was so narrow that it was only possible for one person out of the two to successfully cross the hurdle without getting burnt



Khwabon Khwabon Jaage soye
Khoye khoye Hum hai jaise yahan

Without wasting any second Maan positioned Geet in such an angle that he could easily allow his coat to slip into the handcuffed arm of his angel

Raho raho Dundle dundle
Halke halke Hosh ke hai nishan

He twirled Geet and brought her closer and without thinking of his safety he covered her completely with his coat taking Geet by surprise

Music

He lifted her and placed her feet on his shoes and sqeezed her body completely into his such that there was no place for air to pass through them

Geet hugged him tight as she was afraid her one wrong move can injure her Maan

Omaha ziya Wahi yala
Wahi yala Omaha ziya
Wahi yala Wahi yala
Ziya newa sahiya

Maan kissed Geet's forehead as if telling her that as long as we r together every hurdle will become a blissful memory for us

Geet's heart skipped several beats with his one simple kiss'she tightened her grip on Maan's shirt as Maan protected her from the flames of fire by drowning her in the mesmerizing rain of his love

This challenge proved a cupid for them as they had to remain in each other's embrace in order to come out of this hurdle



Maan took small dance moves as Geet made it a point to support him by allowing him to carry her feet on his shoes

Geet was now completely drugged by Maan's manly scent she wished to forget the past and live the present that was all hers but was it so easy for her'maybe not she was still trying hard to hold herself back

Maan had successfully protected his love from the fire clad challenge

He allowed her the liberty to set herself free as soon as they crossed this hurdle but once again Maan's love had emerged victorious as Geet was unable to remove her gaze away from his face

Pyaar ke joh raaste hai Apne hi toh waaste hai
Tum bhi chalo Main bhi chaloon
Chalte rahe..hum pal pal

Mesmerizing lights were successful in seeking their attention

The next hurdle was in the form of a paper dance

Maan placed his hand on Geet's belly as they stepped into the first folded paper and to add to his joy Geet did not revolt this time'their eyelock intensified with the passing moments

Palkon palkon khwaab leke Ik dile betaab leke
Hum joh chale Chaane lage
Geeton ke..yeh baadal

Without breaking the eyelock Maan twirled Geet and supported her head with their locked hands as they stepped into the smaller version of the paper'they could actually feel the fragrance of each other's breath such was their proximity

Gunje hai joh geet surile Mann joh iinki madira peele
Hum bheke jayenge Hum kehte jayenge
Ha..

Slowly their feelings and desires for each other was breaking the walls of uncertainty, fear, anger and hatred giving them a trust that this time if they meet no one would ever be able to separate them

The next piece of folded paper gave rise to a perfect dance step which was a blend of passion and sacred love

As Maan guided Geet to the floor Geet got a new life as she saw a locket hanging from Maan's neck'(it was the same locket that Sanju had attached with the letter)

The locket had Maaneet's marriage pic in it'

Khwabon Khwabon Jaage soye
Khoye khoye Hum hai jaise yahan

Geet relived her dream once again'she touched the locket lovingly as Maan carefully lifted her back

All of a sudden all her insecurities vanished she wanted to trust Maan atleast for this moment

Raho raho Dundle dundle
Halke halke Hosh ke hai nishan

Maan guided her to the last piece of folded paper and as soon as he allowed his eyes to admire Geet's face he knew his love had emerged victorious as he could see his old Geet back in his arms

Her eyes were reflecting love for him and if this feeling was a dream he wanted to end his life with this dream

Tum hum safar ho toh Raste sab hai sehar
Har mod par milte Sapno ke hai mehal
Pighle tan mann hai Sanson mein han nasha

He caressed her face and moved his lips close to her ear and uttered " I LOVE U GEET' I WILL ALWAYS STAY BY YOUR SIDE TILL ETERNITY"

Tum hum safar ho toh Sab hai jaise haseen
Chand se zyada hai Jagmagati zameen
Pyaar mein dhoobi si Lagti hai har disha..

His simple confession teased the chords of her heart'she knew this was not a publicity stunt; she knew he meant every word that he had uttered' She closed her eyes and allowed the pearls to make way to her cheeks'Yes atleast for this moment he was her sole possession'Tonight she wished to become Maan's Geet all over again irrespective of the outcome

Before she could say any other word she found Maan's lips drinking and licking her tears away which breaked all the remaining barriers and gave her the liberty to flow in this moment'YES SHE WANTED HIM TO LOVE HER'

Ab har disha..

Oo..owo' yeyiyeyo
Yeyiyeyo aa..ye..ho..

She opened her eyes and now there was no way or no reason left to stop herself from living this moment. The burning desires in their eyes had so much strength that automatically their lips started reducing the distance

Geet's lips were trembling maybe there was still a slight fear of getting rejected in them..Maan was now able to understand the language of every breath of hers he wanted her to know that she is the only girl who owns his heart and his soul

Without any further delay Maan captured her soft rosy petals delicately in the form of a tender kiss

He kissed every inch of her upper and lower lip by decorating it with small pecks; every peck of his acted as a medicine to her wounded heart

Geet encircled her arms around his neck completely and made her desires more evident by parting her lips and giving him the permission to relish the sweetest nector that was and would always be his sole possession

Maan entered her mouth and slowly this tender kiss of love, longing and desires took the form of a passionate and soul searing kiss that once again binded two hearts permanently atleast for this particular moment into a beat that was always meant to be one

PRECAP 1: What would be the reaction of Geet after this blissful moment?


PRECAP 2: The secret of Geet's bracelet and Maan's precious ring

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Love-Piya


PART 51: Page 101


Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
Mehek25 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Piya...👏
Loved every word of it...
So very sweet...And Maneet are simply awesome...
This is the most beautiful FF i have read so far..👍🏼
Waiting for u to continue..
Thanx for pm dear...
🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful romantic update
thanx for the pm
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
spell bounded with this update ...l visualize each and every part of this update ...and song prefect one ...applause for you ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan of ur stories knows how to melt Geet in his own way

awesom
i loved it

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