MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA#8 LINK #9 PG 141 - Page 13

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UPDATING TODAY😳
AS SOON AS I RETURN FRM WORK I WILL POST THE UPDATEšŸ˜‰ TILL THEN IF ANYONE WANTS A SPECIAL TREATMENT FOR NT THEN LET ME KNOW šŸ˜†



PS: Many of u know about Maaneet FF Writer's INTERVIEW THREAD 😳 this time I have been honored to be the writer to be interviewed. I would be answering all your questions that u wish to ask me Today(Wednesday) is the last date to post the questions 😳

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am sorry for the late updates but as you'll know I am hell busy 🤢 Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it. The countdown of the 50th update begins guys šŸ˜‰ and from that update the story will enter its next phase that would b full of Maaneet Maaneet and only Maaneet 😳

love-Piya

PART 47

Inside the bunglow,

Sanju: Geet tujhe kaise pata chala k Naintara yaha aayegi? [Geet how did u make out that Naintara will come here?]

Geet: Ye aurut kis hadh tak gir sakthi hai ye mujhse behtar koi nahi jaanta Sanju ye mujhse kya kehne aayi hai iss baat ka bhi pata mujhe hai'aane doh isse aaj iska saamna ek nayi Geet se hoga [I very well know to what extent this woman can stoop low. I am aware of her intentions to meet me Sanju but today she will be meeting a new Geet let her come']

After few minutes Naintara entered the room

Naintara: Geet kaha ho tum? Hum aa gaye hai jaldi bahar aau hume intezaar karne ki aadat nahi hai [Geet where r u? Come down immediately as I don't have a habit to wait for anyone]

Sanju was watching Naintara's restlessness through the laptop as the room where Naintara was standing was fully surrounded by cameras

Sanju: Ye Naintara kuch zyada hi udd rahi hai isse sabak shikana hi hoga [This Naintara is flying too high I think it is important to cut her wings]

Sanju: Geet neeche gayi hai dekhte hai kya hotha hai [Geet has gone downstairs let's see what happens]

Hall

Naintara: Geet'Geet

Geet: Kya hua itna chilla kyun rahi ho? [What's the matter why are u shouting so much?]

Naintara turned around to face Geet

Geet had a calm and relaxed composure

Naintara: Geet hum kabse aapka intezaar kar rahe the [Geet I was waiting for u for so long]

Geet: Kyun? Aisi kaunsi musibat aa padi ke tumhe aaj meri yaad aa gayi? [It seems u r in a great trouble or else it is not possible that u will remember me]

Naintara: Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahi hai? [Why are u speaking like this?]

Geet: Ab toh mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai k tumhara yaha aane ka koi khaas maksad hai warna aaj se pehle tumne mujhe aap kaha ho ye toh muje yaad nahi aa raha [I am 100% sure u have come here for your own selfish needs as I really fail to remember any day in the past where u had addressed me with respect]

Naintara: (thinking) Isske toh tewar hi badle hue nazar aa rahe hai mujhe isse jasbati karna hoga tabhi main apne maksad mein kamiyaab ho sakti hoon [She has changed a lot I need to play with her emotions so make my plan a success]

Geet: Lagta hai apne shatir dimag mein kisi naye plan ko anjaam de rahi ho [It seems ur brain is busy in giving final touches to your next plan]

Naintara: Nahi Geet aap hume galat samaj rahi hai hum yaha kisi maksad ko anjaam dene nahi aaye [No Geet u r misunderstanding me I have not come here to execute any plan]

Geet: Aane ka maksad batau Naintara Geet ke paas tumhe dene ke liye zyada waqt nahi hai wo kya haina mujhe bina appointment koi bhi nahi mil sakta tum mere saamne khadi ho mujhse baate kar rahi ho ye mera ek ehsaan hi samaj lo [Come to the point Naintara as Geet cannot waste her precious time on you. No one can meet me without appointment u need to thank me as I granted u the permission to stand in front of me]

Geet was giving indirect slaps to Naintara by using the arrows of her words

Naintara: Geet hum toh yaha aapka dukh baatne aaye hai [Geet I am here to be a part of sorrow]

Geet's expressions were unchanged

Geet: Agar tumhare yaha aane ka yahi maksad hai toh main tumhe bata du ke main dukhi nahi balki behet khush hoon [If this is your real motive to meet me then let me make it clear that I am very happy u need not worry about me]

Naintara: Ye toh kehne sunne ki baate hai Geet aapke dil ki sachhayi toh hume aapke aakhon mein nazar aa rahi hai sach kehte hai taras aata hai hume aapko dekhkar [These statements are just meant to console oneself Geet as I can clearly see the truth of your shattered heart in your eyes I pity u Geet]

Geet wanted to give a solid reply to Naintara but decided to stay quiet for a while

Naintara: (thinking) Lagta hai ab Geet ki lagaam humare haath mein aa gayi hai yahi sahi mauka hai uske saare zakhmo par mirch chidakne ka [It seems Geet is finally under my control this is the right time to sprinkle chilli on her wounds]

Naintara: Hum jaante hai Geet aapke maasum se dil ko kitni thes pauchayi hai uss insaan ne jisse aap kisi waqt beinteha mohabbat karti thi'aapke paak jasbaato ko uss zaleel insaan ne dhoka aur fareb ka naam diya' hum toh yahi dua karenge ke uss Maan ko jald se jald maut mil jaaye taaki'[I am aware Geet ur innocent heart is totally shattered by the attack of a person whom u considered and loved wholeheartedly once upon a time. He is such a cheap man that he termed the true feelings of your heart a reflection of betray and deceit I truly wish that very soon Maan dies a painful death so that']

But before Naintara could even dream of completing her statement she landed on the floor with a loud sound of thud as Geet had gifted her with a hardcore and audible slap whose echo was still resonating in the surroundings

Geet: Jab tak Geet zinda hai uski har ek saas Maan ki salamati ki dua maangti rahegi 'mere Maan ko baddua dene ke bare mein sochna bhi mat warna main apni mohabbat ki lapto mein tumhe kuch iss tarah jalakar bhasm kar dungi ke marne ke baad tumhari raakh bhi kisi ko naseeb nahi hogi [As long as Geet is alive every breath that she takes will pray for the safety of her Maan and if at all u dare to curse my Maan even once then I will burn u with the flames of my love to such an extent that no one will be successful in locating your ashes after death]

Naintara was shocked to see love and possessiveness in the eyes of Geet for Maan

Naintara: Geet hum toh bus ye batane ki koshish kar rahe the ke aapka aur Maan ke rishte [Geet I was trying to make u understand that the relationship between Maan and u is']

Geet: Maan aur mere beech jobhi hai wo humare beech ki baat hai'Humare rishte mein kisi teesre ki koi jagah nahi hai [The relationship that I share with Maan is only between two of us no third person can come in between the two of us]

Naintara trembled as Geet gave her a warning through her eyes as if declaring dare u speak a single wrong word and u will yourself be responsible for your pathetic condition

Geet: Tum jaisi giri hui aurut rishto ki vakalat kabse karne lagi? Tum yaha mujhe mere Maan ke khilaf bhadkane aayi thina par shayad tum bhool gayi Geet ka pyar ek aisa chatan hai jismein koi bhi surang banaa nahi saktha [From when did a cheap woman like u understood the importance of relationships? U came here with the intension to make me hate Maan but let me tell u one thing Geet's love is that mountain wherein there is no hope of creating a hole even in your wildest imagination]

Naintara: Hume toh lagta tha ke humari tarah tum bhi Maan se nafrat karti ho'[I thought that like me u too hate Maan from the core of your heart]

Geet: Maan ke liye Geet ke dil mein bus ek hi jasba ho sakta hai aur wo hai sachhi mohabbat jiska saamna tum jaise karodo Naintara milkar bhi nahi kar sakti [Geet can harbor only one feeling for Maan and that is unconditional love. A team of crore Naintara would also fail to stand in front of my love]

Geet: Tum mere pyar par taras khane ke liye aayi thi khud ki haalat dekhi hai tumne pure media mein tumhari image ki dhajiya Maan ne aaj udayi hai der si hi sahi mujhe khushi hai ke Maan ko tumhara asli chehra nazar aa gaya [U were feeling pity on my love have u seen ur condition? Today u have become the biggest joke in front of the media as Maan openly exposed ur true face in front of the world. I am happy that atleast maan got to know your true colors]

Geet: Tum yaha mere dil mein Maan ke khilaf nafrat ka beej bone aayi thina par afsoos tum shayad ye bhool gayi ke jis din Maan ne apni Geet ko tumhre kehne par khud se dur kar diya tha uss din bhi mera dil apne Maan se nafrat kar nahi paaya [U came here to sow the seed of hatred in my heart for Maan but u would be shocked to realize that the day when Maan threw me out of his life due to ur influence that day also my heart couldn't dare to hate the man whom it loves beyond sanity]

Geet: Kis baat par taras khan eke liye aayi thi tum mere chaukat par? Geet ki takdeer gawah hai aaj tak Geet ne kuch khoya nahi balki paaya hi hai [What made u think that I was drowning in a deep sea of remorse? My destiny is the witness to prove that till date Geet has never lost she was always a winner]

Naintara was shivering in front of the confident Geet

Geet: Geet wo pehli ladki hai jisse Maan ki dosti naseeb hui' jab tak hum saath the maine humesha Maan ka haath thama iss tarah mujhe unki parchayi banne ka sammaan mila [Geet is the first girl who was gifted with Maan's friendship. As long as we were together I always held his hand protectively and in this way I got the respect of becoming his shadow]

Geet: Maan ne tumse kabhi dosti ki hi nahi Naintara wo toh bus tumhari taraf aakarshit tha tum toh ek chalawa thi jiski uske zindagi mein kabhi bhi koi asli jagah nahi thi'[Maan never considered u as a friend. U were simply an attraction for him who could never make a true place in his heart in this lifetime]

Geet: Maan ke har dukh har utar chadav ki ek lauti dariyaan main thi jismein wo bina jijak apne saare jasbaat khulkar sama dethe the' Jitne haq se wo mujhse ladte mujhpar apna gussa barsaate uss baat se mujhe unke ruh ko tasali wali khushboo se mehkane ka mauka mila'Main jaan gayi ke shayad wo mujhse pyar nahi karte par mere bagair unki kahani adhuri hai' [I was always a part of every ups and downs of Maan's life. I was an ocean for him where he used to surrender all his pains with full authority. His anger and his shouting made me realize that may me he doesn't love me but he can't stay from me. I was an integral part of his life who got the permission to scent his soul with a fragrance of faith]

Naintara started sweating'she had never expected Geet to be so proud of her love

Geet: Maan ne toh tumse apni khushiyaan bhi kabhi baati nahi Naintara tumhari haisayat toh unke kadmo ki dhool barabar bhi nahi hai unki ruh tak ka safar tum kaise the kar sakti thi? [Maan never shared his happiness with u Naintara as u were not even capable of touching the dirt of his shoes forget about making a way to his soul]

Geet: Kuch mahino ke liye hi sahi Maan ne mujhe apni biwi ka darza diya'shayad wo dil se iss rishte ko nibha nahi paaye par aaj bhi mujhe garv hai ke Maan ke naam ka mangalsutra aur sindoor sirf aur sirf meri yaani unki Geet ki maang mein saja tha'Main hoon unki ardhangini [Maan made me his legal wife for few months'maybe he never accepted this relationship wholeheartedly but I am proud to say that I was the only woman to decorate herself with the mangalsutra and sindoor which was beautified with Maan's name'I am his lifepartner..his soulmate]

Geet (smirk): Patni ke saamne dusre aurat ka darja hi kya Naintara shayad tum jaanti ho humara samaj dusri aurat ko kis naam se pukarta hai ' [There is no significance of a second woman in front of a wife. I guess u very well know how does our community look at a second woman']

This was the biggest slap and insult of Naintara

Geet: Main wo pehli aur shayad aakhri ladki hoon jisse Maan ne apne jism ka hissa banaya'Maan chahe mane ya na mane par uss raat ek pati aur patni ke beech jo hua wo mehez ek sharirik pyaas nahi thi balki janm janmantar tak saath rehne ka ek paak aur pavitra bandhan tha ' Uss raat meri ruh ko apne Maan ke pyar ka ek na khatm honewala saagar mila jisse mujhe yakeen hua ke kahina kahi wo bhi mujhe chahte hai [I am the first and maybe the last girl who became a part of Maan's body. He might disagree but the moments that a husband and a wife shared between them that night was not a physical need but it was a divine promise of 2 hearts that bonded them with a thread for a lifetime. My soul was drenched with Maan's love to such an extent that I am sure maybe he is not aware but I am the only girl whom he can love'yes he loves me]

Geet: Maan tumhe kabhi uss nazar se dekh hi nahi sakta Naintara'iss pure kahani mein jeet mere pyar ki hui hai aur haar tumhare dhoke ki [Maan can never visualize u with those eyes Naintara. In this whole story my love has emerged victorious and u r the one who has lost]

Geet: Geet kal bhi Maan se pyar karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hai aur humesha karti rahegi [Geet loved Maan before..she loves him today and will continue to love him forever]

Geet: Iss baat ka andaaza main shayad Maan ko kabhi lagne na du ke' [I may never allow Maan to understand this truth that']

"Aaj bhi aapki faili hui baaho mein wo khichav hai jo mujhe unn mein simatne par majboor kar de

Aaj bhi aapki muskurahat mein wo jaadu hai jo mere har gum ko pal mein fanna kar de

Aaj bhi aapki nazro mein wo adaa hai jo mere dil ke band darwazo par roshni ki ek dastak de de

Aaj bhi aapki baato mein wo jaadu hai jo meri ruh ko khoobsurat tasveer ki peshkash de de

Aaj bhi aap iss dil ke masihah hai jisse pane ke liye hum khuda ke bhichaye hue kaato ki chadar par has ke apne kadam bicha de"

[When I see u spreading ur arms I feel like melting my whole existence in it my embracing your folds EVEN TODAY

When I see your smiling face all the wounds of my heart get a healing touch EVEN TODAY

When I see your mesmerizing eyes it forces me to open even hidden door of my heart EVEN TODAY

When I hear your soul searing talks my soul gets a touch of divinity EVEN TODAY

U are the Lord of my heart for whose happiness I will happily walk on a carpet of thorns happily EVEN TODAY]

Geet closed her eyes and placed her bracelet close to her heart

Geet: I love u Maan'I love u

Geet got emotional and immediately left for her room

Sanju comes to the hall and decides to throw Naintara out of Geet's house permanently

Sanju: Tumhari khairiyat issi mein hai Naintara ke issi waqt yaha se rafoo chakkar ho jau kyunki ye jo CD mere haath mein hai uss CD mein Geet ne jo tumhe karara thapad maara hai wo behet hi khoobsurat andaaz mein kaid ho chukka hai agar media ke saamne khud ka aur tamasha banana nahi chahti toh bina der kiye GET OUT OF MY GEET'S LIFE [It would be better for u Naintara if u leave this place right now or else I will leak the CD of Geet gifting u a slap to the media. If u don't want to once again become the headlines for unnecessary reasons then get out of my Geet's life right now]

Naintara wiped her sweat with her stole and rushed out of Geet's Mansion immediately

PRECAP: Sanju: Prem Geet aaj bhi Maan se pyar karti hai aur sach kahu toh pehli baar mujhe Maan ki aakhon mein Geet ke liye sachhi mohabbat nazar aayi [Prem Geet loves Maan truly even today and for the first time I could actually see true love for Geet in the eyes of Maan]

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M FIRST PIHU...YIPEEE
Awesome...loved it Pihu dear
Simply Awesome

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