SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84

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@Parvathi12

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

dude.. that was awesome... man.. when u said rohan.. i was llike what the f??? y is she married to this rohan... but then.. rohan is swayam.. n that's all that matters... waise why is he doing all this??? please update the nexrt part soon... and thanks for the PM...

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

okay baz m speechless...firstly yeh le 🤗 specially for putting up ur thinking caps n giving such an amazing update...

the update was awesome...

the way u started with the beauty of the picture n to the way u described her later was beautiful...

the happiness reached to me...

but then the thriller twist was a shocker...sharon's strugle to escape was very well penned...n WTH rohan is swayam n she gets to know this after her marriage 😲 n that too she gets to see such a side of him where he holds her hostage...intriguing...

update soon before i die with the suspense...

thanks for the pm...

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@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Baz, welcome back my dear and what a thrilling start to the FF !! I loved how you wrote the whole scene where Sharon admires herself and her husband in their wedding attire !! After that was when, shall I say the action started !! I gotta give it to Sharon !! Poor girl was so scared and yet, she fought to escape with all that she had !! And just for a moment there when I thought she was free and was running into the arms of Swayam, I was proven right and wrong at the same time as it was Rohan, who is the guy who planned the whole kidnapping and whose name ain't Rohan but Swayam ??!! Totally confusing but definitely intriguing !! Can't wait for the next chapter !!

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

cont! its intresting but do space out ur work! it hard to read it!

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

oh my god baz ...i seriously don't have any words to say...i am just speechless... brilliant piece of work...everything from the beginning was described by u brilliantly... the way sharon was admiring their wedding pic...the way she was admiring her husband...wow...then her struggle to escape...outstanding...when she escaped from the house n met rohan her husband i thought why rohan where is swayam...but poor sharon she was so relieved to be in his arms...but then she came to know her kidnapper is none other than her husband...n at the end such a big turn of events...rohan is actually swayam...really really mind blowing baz...i am seriously in short of words...now i will request u to plz give us the next chapter as soon as possible...i just can't wait to read the next chapter...plz update soon baz...pretty plz...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

balle balle shawa shawa, BaZ has updated, sorry yaar thoda filmy hogaye, teri update deke meri dil ka haal yahi hai yaar.

BaZ you are the best yaar, undoubtedly👏👏👏 The pull your updates give to the readers are always amazing, but this one is exceptional, yaar... When i started reading the update i felt now swayam will come in and then some romantic scenes would be there, but to my surprise it was a story with a difference👍🏼 Amazing!!!! You are a ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ , I totally bow before your writing ability, arey who would have thought that her husband himself is going to hold her as a hostage😲, well well BaZ i cant get enough words to express my admiration for your work dear, 👍🏼 you know i am total fida on your works but this one absolutely fantastic. The part where expressing sharon fear was so narrative, i could visualize the whole thing. Poor sharon the person she loves is the the culprit. A thriller romance is always my favourite. Thanks janu for this brilliant update ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 I know you are buzy but plz try to update jaldi waiting for the next part

an ardent fan of yours😊

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Reserved

P.S I hope you won't strangle me to death for not commenting earlier. :(

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🤗 Bazy-wazy (<-- way to humiliate some one 😆)

Awesome start. This ones really different from the rest of your works, I mean you're like the expert when it comes to sizzling romance and we've also seen you do humour and pain, but this, like I said, is new. But you've written it really well nonetheless. You've gotten me hooked already. I can't wait to know what else is going to happen in your FF. It's really intriguing, you know.

Once again I'm sorry, for more than one things, as you know.!

Thank you for the PM

Edited by Srishti_TanHa - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

OMG, heroine kidnapped??? 😲

That too by her beloved husband????

Wat is it? Wat is the reason???

Reaveal the mystery soon.

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Mahirah

@Mahirah

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

OMG OMG OMG This one is soo freakin awesome..

Loved it please Baz do update soon :)

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

God dis is so damn confusing n amazing too... I loved d way u described d whole scenario... Juzz loved it to infinity... N d way u wrote i dint feel dat dis was ur 1st tym really... Ur such an amazing writer baz...
I surely knw lyk ur oder ff's m gonno fall in love wid dis 1 too... Actually i hv fallen already fr dis 1..
Rohan n swayam r same... Bapre n she loves him n he's helding her his hostage... God itz confusing.. Update sooner dear plzz...!!

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