SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84 - Page 7

I think d devil is back in action
You are a real devil isn't it
Wow yaar from where do you always bring d concept which leave me speechless. I never said it before but I wanna say it now dat you writting skills and dis update are beyond perfect. I think reading dis story would be a thrill. I loved how you described each and every action of Sharon her expressions. I just loved it. I guess d mystry is yet to unfolded. Eagerly waiting for d next part. Update soon

Great Start!! its intriguing and full of suspense😊

Baz Baz you crazy little damon called devil, i can just say one thing that thank you for creating a brilliant suspense drama with swaron in it...

I just love reading suspense stories too much and what an exceptional start this was...when i saw the start the way sharon entered cherished her husbands picture...and all looked so cute and nice so i made up my mine ke ye introductory part hai aur boring hoga...

but no no wait i was totally wrong...here came to demons to catch sharon...and all the way from there the story took off for me...

i just enjoyed reading the description how sharon hide behind kitchen table and than door...and than every minute steps description and sharon's reaction to that...awesome mind blowing loved it...

than she actually locked one of the persons in kitchen and than came another action pact move with one more person trying to catch her...and she used knife too well to escape from there...

But again running away didnot help the cause for sharon as she once again struck to a person whom she thought to be Rohan was actually the master of the demons that were trying to catch her...still she was feeling some warmth in those eyes of the stranger...what can i say about this whole it was perfect and suspense that was created there was just rocking...

I loved this one most that she knew that person wants to make her hostage but after all that she felt warmth in his eyes...and finally you revealed that it was swayam and he called her wifey...that means swayam kidnapped his own wife...now this what i call full of entertainment with suspense...

egerness for this FF is now on sky high...because if this is the first part than i am surely in for a treat with this FF...Baz i must comment that you really write suspense brilliently...

awesome piece of work to start with...loved it for sure to the core...something that i always love to read a perfect suspense story ingradiants to start with...thanks for pm...do update soon yar...

pratik...

p.s. sorry kal ratko net stop ho gaya to padh nahi paya...i am really sorry for being late...thanx for wishing me luck for the exam dear...

This my expression after reading the FF..totally confused... and Swayam ..I mean Swayam THE KIDNAPPER... Looking forward for the next update..Please PM me if possible

Baz,this is ur first thrilling update i can't believe this
When i start reading i thought that it must be a sweet,cute n romantic update.Swayam n sharon r married,sharon staring at her husband's pic but the next moment well as u say we have to read ur full update n then come to conclusion..
Then let the chase begin,i feel like i was watching some thrilling films i can imagine all this scenes in front of my eyes...:)
I never thought that swayam would be kidnapper,he was having warmth in his eyes n then it changes into coldness looks like swayam actually love sharon
I am
not Rohan wifey….my name is
Swayam Sekhawat and I am holding
you hostage" attitude woo i already started loving this ff
Eagerly waiting for next part now...
Update it ASAP

thank you for all your workss...your work brings our swaron in front of us...and all carry a different story...excites us a lot