SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

How do u manage to write it so beautifully?? I would say yet another awesome update Baz..:)
Sharon can never hurt swayam neither does he... their emotions r so beautifully penned down...and do update next one soon...can't wait 4 it... 😉

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

WOAH WOAH WOAH i am hooked...this is one intriguing update How do u manage to write something like this..tu wahi baz hai na jo awesome wala romance bhi likhti hai 😲 *bows down* 😊

Swayam is so full of hatred for Sharon's father but at the same time he is guilty that he had to include Sharon...love the way you have mentioned this part. Emotional turmoil Sharon is going through is so beautifully penned down by you girl...from how she is shattered but still can't hurt him...just wow. Rey is also involved in all this 😲 OMG please update soon and thnx for the PM 😊

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

BAZ 🤗

this one was a super amazing and mind blowing update !!

the first part with the knife was intense , sharons hurt and the way she just couldnt bring herself to hurt swayam was very well described .

swayam continued being the villian hurting himself and also warning sharon that she can get hurt the next time .

swayam is so obsessed with all the revenge and hate thingy with sharons father , really wanna know the back story .

Rey being involved in all this is a huge shock for sharon as well for us , it will be interesting to see how sharon reacts to this .

eagerly waiting for the next part , update asap ..

With each update the ff has intrigued me to a major extent , update the next parts real soon Baz .

thanks for the PM.

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Baz this is a fablous update..

Gosgh the way Sharon cried when Swayam got hurt and then Swayams meet with Arjun Raiprakash..
But what is Rey doing here..
He is surely gonna hurt Sharon more than Swayam..
Thanks for the pm..:)

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

OHH !! Felt so Bad for Sharon !! Poor her !! The one's whom she trusted has stabbed her, not only her husband, but her BFF and god knows what her father did that she is bearing these consequences, but I h do have a feeling that it must be so bad that when Sharon would get to know of it, she would support her husband, her love, Swayam and punish her father for his wrong doings...

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

amazing update Baz...superb...Swayam and Sharon love each other so much...they both know clearly that they wont hurt the other...swayam trying to hurt himself and sharon's vulnerable state...swayam one side has to maintain that firm kidnapper attitude and on the other side he is unable to bear sharon's pain...Sharon's condition touched me...beautifully shown...the reason for him doing this to Sharon must be really a strong one...

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Amazzingg Twist!!!😃

Pls update asap😉

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

BAZ! tum to hum pe bazinga bazinga kiye ja rahe ho. Seeing Rey too involved in this plan was seriously shocking. Poor Sharon I don't know how she is facing such shock after shock. Loved this update. The begining of the update was simply put explosive. And the way you wrote it felt like we were visualising that scene infront of us. Wonderfully done. Flashback sequence was interesting but it leaf tme wanting for more. And yeah special kudos to the dialogues of Swayam in this FF. Certainl felt like that of a villain. Amazingly done so far. Can't wait to read more.

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Woah another twist..Rey is involved 😲

This seems to be master plan by Swayam which took a lot of time and effort. I like how he is so real and is so open to his feelings to Sharon and knows the effect he has on her. The knife incident was beautifully done. Looking forward to the next update.

P.S - I hate it when i am this late to comment i used to be among the first to comment on every update of yours.. miss those time.

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Nice update...it is quite disheartnening to see that swayam loves sharon so much but can't reciprocate it bcz he has something against her dad...i just fell bad for him...n then talking about sharon...when everything bad happend wid her...her love broke her trust...i guess the worst is yet to come n even her bff is gonna betray her...want to know what gautam raiprakash did wid swayam that he is taking d revenge by hurting his love...waiting for nxt update...continue soon.

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