SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey Tanuka plz read my blabber on top of chapter 10 of enigma...I have explained the reason of no updates of this one.\

thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read it and will be waiting for it then...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic ff just came to know about it from your gallery
a very different concept this is some kind of Revenge tale
sharon's father had really done something really bad with swayam's family so he is taking revenge by capturing his daughter but to his fate he loves her too that to very madly so where is it going to lead hurting his enemy or hurting himself. very exciting and thrilling story .i am waiting 4 an update but as you promised to focus on this only after completing your another wonderful ff enigma so i am in no loss just demanding an update for enigma of fate quickly
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Posted: 12 years ago
I lovedd itt Baz!!
I am sorry for commenting so hell late.

Sharon is so helpless...its so tough for a gal like her to get supressed by a man whom she loves the most.
And swayam...he is also in the same situation..its just that...here he is the one supressing..
I really liked the first scene...it was amazingly penned by you..the way sharon gave up and cried was heart wrenching.
Their expressions...teeth clenching...and sudden change in the expression..i loved it..you always write so well!
And rey is also involved in this??
Looks like i have to wait for the further update...!
Update soon..i want to read it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bazz do update after your exams get over...will be waiting ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please, please, please update soonnn ? (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
baz you shud continue on this one yaar...this story is so different and unique like any other works of yours...so you shud continue this FF...hope you wud get to this FF very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting story

Awesome update
please update soon
please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay guys I finally decided to continue this one...here is the next chapter enjoy!

Chapter 4

she looked at rey who was looking back at her with sympathy and she looked back at him with disgust and hatred then she said "you were with him!"

Sharon stared at Rey for a while and then looked at swayam both of them were looking at her with concern and pity. "Pity" she hated when people looked at her with pity. She tried to form words but it was as if the letters were dancing in front of her eyes. She opened her mouth and then closed it without saying anything. Her mind went blank as her whole life played itself in front of her eyes. Those beautiful moments of friendship she cherish, were shattered by a blow of truth. Was it all a lie? He was her freaking best friend. She used to share her everything with him including her boy problems and her boy problems were related to only one boy and he was swayam sekhawat. Her whole life the memories she spent so much time, so much love, so much care, so much affection creating were all lie? Her whole world had been turned upside down. She was not a very social person and the only friend she had was Rey and she knew him years before she knew Swayam. How long had this lie been in the making? How long had she been targeted? Why she? She looked at Rey with so many questions in her eyes and he tried to answer them all through his eyes. Their friendship was deep and they didn't always need words to explain their feelings.

Rey took a hesitant step towards her and she didn't step back. Being betrayed by your love is one thing but being betrayed by your friend is a whole other thing. Love has its own place in life and friendship its own but somehow there are things your love doesn't know about you but your friend knows them, similarly there are things you don't share with your love but you can share with your friend. Life is incomplete without friends you cannot make it through without knowing that yes there is one idiot who will sit down next to you when you will fall and laugh so hard that you have to forget the pain and return the laughter just like you can't except to take the leap without knowing that there is some special kind of fool waiting to catch you if you fall. If both of them step back leaving you alone to take the fall then how can one expect to stand again?

She looked him in the eye. She was hurt, she was crippled and sometimes your anger reaches to such a point that it gives you strength instead of becoming your weakness. That was exactly what was happening to her. she was so furious which was helping her over look her feelings and ignore the relations she shared with these two people and say things which otherwise she would have been scared to say. Rey opened his mouth to say something but before he could utter a word he received a stinging slap across his face. He didn't raise his head or look at her again. He was her culprit, he deserved to be punished. She curled her hands into fists and said in a low cold voice "You both make me sick!...COWARDS!" Her eyes met with swayam's whose mask was back on and his lips were closed in a tight line. Then she said still looking him in the eye "You should have been a man and faced me directly instead of playing with my emotions…..only cowards attack from behind and you" she raised her finger at him and then pointed it at rey saying "both of you are nothing else but cowards!" swayam replied leaning against the back of the sofa and while crossing his arms upon his chest "Mind you language Sharon! You want us to be a Man? Then you are overlooking the fact that you r still untouched if we would have been behaved anything but manly then your respect and dignity would long have been torn apart" Rey looked at swayam bewildered while Sharon took a step back scared.

Before Sharon could say anything she heard Rey practically yell "WT* Swayam! why are you talking nonsense……You lay a finger on her and I will rip you apart" Sharon stared at Rey confused while swayam looked at him disappointed but he knew he crossed the line and Rey would never even hear such a thing coming from him. This time he heard Sharon say " Just amazing…one threats to be physical with me while one protects me like my brother….I must say whoever wrote this play is a wonderful writer" swayam replied still in his bone chilling, low yet authoritative voice "Thank you, that would be me" Sharon ignored him and said while looking at Rey "Stop the F***ing act okay……u r disgusting pretending to me my friend for such a long time…..I must praise your stamina….you should have let those boys kill me and ended all of this in college" Rey looked at her shocked and broken. What had he gotten himself into? Then he said in a tone he often used to scold her "Sharon! think before you speak…..I never acted, not even for a second…I would have never let you die there and I am not gonna let you get hurt now" Sharon bit her lower lip as her throat went dry. That way he talked to her brought back so many memories. Rey saved Sharon in a college party by being group raped. She was drunk and he took her home. Since then he has been her best friend and was a little over protective about her.

Sharon finally found her voice back and asked "is there still anything left to hurt me?" swayam and rey both looked at her face and remained silent. She had no idea. Swayam was admiring her strength till now but he was worried what she would do when she will find out the truth. He was extremely worried because he knew such people who build a shell around themselves are crippled for life when that shell is broken. Sharon raised her voice again and said "why did you even involved me in whatever your mess is? What the hell do you even want with my father? He will make you bas***ds pay so much and he will find me soon…GOT IT!" swayam snorted and a sly smile found its way on his face and replied with disgust "That old man is too blinded by love for his daughter to notice anything….he is going mad! Filthy do* trusts me so much" Sharon looked at him wide eyed and asked "how do u know? Is he alright?" swayam replied with disgust still evident in his voice "Yeah I met him in the morning" Sharon ran upto him and grabbed the collar of his shirt and asked him "what did you do to him? how can you even look at him after doing this to me….u heartless jerk!" swayam still had his arms crossed upon his chest and he remained like that.

Sharon shook him violently and asked "Did u hurt him? is he also locked up somewhere like me? why did u met him?" Swayam replied with his hands still crossed upon his chest but his hands were closed so tightly that he was sure the blood circulation would have been cut by now "No, I did not hurt him….yet! No, he is not locked up somewhere but he will be behind the bars soon for the crimes he committed…" before he could continue sharon raised her hand to slap him but he caught her wrist midair and held her hand firmly before locking eyes with her as she yelled "My father did not committed any crimes got it….u r the one holding me hostage here not him!...let go off me" He didn't let go of her hand instead tightened his grip making yelp in pain and stop struggling to get her hand free as he said "I met him today because I am ur husband to the world not ur kidnapper. I was the one who broke the news of u missing since yesterday to him and also I pretended to be very worried and then left saying I need to find you…he thinks I am hell worried for u and right now searching for u on the streets like a romeo" Sharon hated the sly smile on his face and wanted to break his teeth. Then out of her anger it was as if her body reacted on her own and in the next second she raised her leg and hit him where it hurts. The next second he let go of her wrist and fell on his knees groaning in pain. She was shocked on her own behavior she had no idea where are this violence and impulsiveness was coming from but she didn't not had time to ponder over the thought as next second rey grabbed her shoulders and spun her around placing himself between her and Swayam and out of the corner of her eye she saw swayam looking at her in such a way which chilled her spine and made her knees tremble and she unknowingly hid behind rey.

Swayam slowly Stood up taking support of the sofa and said while locking eyes with rey "I think it's time he gets his first call from us" Sharon looked at Rey and then at swayam in turns and said "u r calling my dad! WHY?" no one bothered to answer but Rey understood what swayam meant and nodded then he turned Sharon back so that she was now standing in front of him. swayam had maintained his same posture. He was leaning against the back of the sofa with his arms crossed upon his chest and Sharon hated the way he looked so broken to hurt her and tried to say he is sorry for doing this to her. rey wrapped his arms around her waist tightly and then grabbed both of her wrists with his other hand while swayam now took small steps towards her. Sharon was totally confused and scared she struggled to get free of rey's grip but it was steel like so firm that it was hurting her. swayam stood in front of her and reached his hands forward. She moved her head backwards upon instinct but he didn't stop and tied a cloth around her mouth and while she tried to yell or scream but only muffled sounds came out and she heard rey whisper "I am so sorry" his voice was so sad that it seemed he wanted to cry.

Then swayam took out his phone this one Sharon had not seen earlier and dialed a number. It ringed for a while before a weak voice at the other end replied

Hello?

How is your daughter old man!

Swayam's voice was filled with so much disgust that Sharon could not believe her own heart was capable of loving the man who was the owner of this voice. Her struggles and screams became louder and stronger but she couldn't do anything. Rey was not letting her go and the cloth was too tight. Her voice would never reach to her father.

"Where is she? What have u done to her? Is she alright?"

"You don't get to ask questions old man got it! You only have to listen……."

"I swear I will hunt you down and make sure u go to hell if anything happens to her."

"No one is interested in listening to ur crap! Now do u remember what happened sixteen years ago?"

There was a long pause at the other end….and swayam continued.

"Ahhh looks like a door to a certain memory opened."

"Who are you?"

"That does not matter….what matters is that if u wanna see your daughter ever again then call a press conference and tell them exactly what happened…..I am talking about the truth…..the truth which no one knows but you."

"Who r you? How do u know? Where is my daughter! She has nothing to do with all of this don't drag her……"

"I know she is innocent that's why she is in one piece right now but….the sooner u do what I want the better…because patience is a virtue I don't have!"

"Listen if u want money then name ur price?"

"I don't want money old man…I already told u what I want….be quick as u actions will affect ur daughter's life."

"Listen….."

Swayam cut the call and stuffed the phone back in his jeans pocket while rey let go off Sharon who yanked the cloth off of her mouth and marched towards swayam. She turned him around and gave him a tight slap across his face. Some of the locks of his hair fell on his face and covered his forehead and he pulled them back as he raised his head again and looked at her. He didn't look the devil who owned that horrible voice instead he looked tired like a child who was guilty of eating too much candy. This sudden change only confused her brought back some unwanted feelings which added fuel to her anger and she banged her hands against the muscled walls of his chest while he remained standing doing nothing like a punching bag as she continued to shake him and hit him hard against his chest yelling "why r u doing this? What did I ever do to you? What incident r u talking about which happened 16 years ago? My father is a heart patient he can't take this much mental torture….u must be mistaken….this is nothing else but a huge misunderstanding!" she kept hitting him and shaking him even kicked him a few times but he didn't respond, he just stood there for her to hit him as much as she wanted so that she can let go of some of her anger. She needed to or else she was going to have a mental break down and also he was not going to be this generous every time. Streams of tears were flowing down her face and her voice choked in the end. She smacked him against his arm to get a reaction out of him but when nothing happened she yelled "don't you feel anything" and then her knees gave away and she fell on the floor crying. Her hair fell over her face and covered it as she hid her face behind her hands and felt so weak and vulnerable that she wished to die.

Rey looked at swayam and saw his eyes moist. He was sure if he waited for a while more swayam would end up crying in front of her and then he would hate himself for that. He looked at swayam's shirt and could see stains of blood on the front part of his shirt. Sharon had clawed his chest and arm poor boy must be in pain. He sighed and went towards Sharon. He gripped her by her shoulders and helped her stand. Sharon was too much lost or hurt to notice who was helping her while rey walked her to the bedroom and made her sit on the bed. Then he left her alone and locked the room she was in so that he can talk with swayam. swayam by then was sitting on the floor with his back resting against the back of the sofa and his head resting on his knees. Rey came and sat next to him and placed a hand on his shoulder and gave him a supporting squeeze. While swayam raised his head with moist eyes saying "this is much harder than I thought" a lone tear ran down his face and Rey's heart went out to his friend and in that moment he knew that swayam and Sharon both were gonna come out equally hurt from this.

Swayam slowly stood up wincing a little while rey chuckled also standing up and said "I didn't know she could kick like that"swayam turned around and gave him a look which said do-I-need-to-be-reminded. Which only made rey chuckled more then he pointed towards swayam's shirt and said "u should dress up your wound" while swayam noticed for the first time the blood on his shirt and said while shaking his head "she clawed my chest and arm under such circumstances" while rey's replied "only you can think about such stuff in these conditions" this time swayam chuckled and said "she is my wife and the love of my life u have no idea the direction of thoughts she me take!" rey remained quiet and then said "I think I should leave" while swayam nodded and looked at the room Sharon was in longingly. Rey looked at him and said "be gentle with her" swayam gave him another look and said "I am not gonna hurt her Rey but I am also not gonna let her do this to me again" he pointed towards him wincing while walking and the ache in his arm and the muscles of his chest while rey said turning around and walking towards the door "Be gentle with her swayam you have no idea what is doing to you in return" swayam remained quiet while rey walked out of the apartment thinking about what both of his friends were going to do now.

To be continued……..

P.S: ignore my mistakes guys and do leave ur feedback and hit the button. it took me three days to pen this down I hoe u all like it...the updates will be late sry for that but I am busy.

Cheers

-Baz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa, you updated! I am so relieved and happy because you told me that you don't want to continue it.. wait ok when you told me that, you was already writing the update! Such a witch you are.. you know how sad i was! Jesai ke koi marr gaya ho.. 😆

This was super awesome and on the go update! Loved how you can instantly change the style of your writing.. like in Enigma is was all emotions and love and here.. is pain and mystery.. loved it!

Well, i am very much curious to know what did Sharon's dad had done to Swayam and how come Rey is helping him too! I am shocked! 😲 The line Swayam said about being in his limits and not even touched Sharon, that one touched my heart because i could feel in writing that how much Sharon must have felt disgusted and pained! 🥺

Totally in love with this update... and the story and the concept.. though how much the strange and bigger the reason is, i am still not satisfied what Swayam is doing to her.. i am solely angry on him for this.. i hope truth reveals soon and then the actual track starts from there between Swayam and Sharon! 😎

PS : Sorry for the short reply as i could not manage to keep it reserve till exams end as i have few reservations on my list which are very special and i need to edit them only after exams, and your enigma include in them too! 😉


Marium.

Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago

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