SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84 - Page 16

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Nehal92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whoa! Rey also...* claps* girls what's on your mind! anyways i love this ff...wait i love every work of yours:)) well all i can hope is to get an update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
what Rey also!! is ff main koi aadmi acha hai bhi ya nhi
and it was not at all boring actually this is more intriguing and i want to read more
btw can u tell me in which part exactly will u unfold the mystery so that i can have some sahara of it!! hehehehe
and yes i know u r a busy person but update soon yaar and waiting for enigma now
p.s. my name is anam but thankgod u didnt call me aman :P hehehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woooaaahhh Baz, Awesome update there... Sharon is trying to threaten Swayam but he hurts himself...
and also that line was awesome jisme she says you have made my life something sorry I don't remember...
and also her best friend is involved with Swayam...
But I guess Swayam has some pretty good reason for a revenge from Mr.Raiprakash...
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Posted: 12 years ago
BaZ am i dreaming??????? getting two treats on the same day? I am dead🤢 I am so thrilled to read this one.First scene is superb, def swayam knws that sharon cant hurt him and he is scaring her off by saying that he can hurt her🥺 Rey is also an ally to swayam😲 well kahani mai bahuth he twists and turns hai, it is sure going to be a block buster one. BaZ each time you surprise me yaar how can anyone manage to write so well in all her updates each so distinctive from each other, well that is your speciality na😳 This update is incredibly beautiful, an underlying romance ka tadka be hai, it is a full on entertainer yaar. Baz you are one of a kind gal, each update leaves us wanting for more.BaZ you are rare and precious, You just create magic with swaron⭐️ Keep up the good work ji. Loved it and plz agar hosake to jaldi update karna plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
How many suprises r still dere fr us???????????god!!!!!ur ff z sooo full f hidden thngs nd we alwys ends up wth full f ques in our head...nd u r gvn awy each secret ne by ne nd dey r mkn our eyes pop out...jst lyk sharon i also exclmd "also him"...i ws soo eager 2 read d updte dat i read it over nd ovr...d updte began wth soo mch thrill...wat swayam did ws sooo sooo unexpected...nly u can gve sch awesme scnes...wen swayam cme clsr 2 sharon nd put d knife in his neck nd strtd hurtin himself i was ashtonished... "He placed the sharp edge of the knife upon his neck and slowly applied pressure to it. Her eyes widened in shock as she looked at her hand still holding the knife. She tried pulling it back but he increased the pressure and didn't allow her to do so also this made the knife cut through his skin and she saw a droplet of blood flow down his neck. Her felt her heart stop beating upon seeing him hurt because of her and she said worried "what r u doing?" he looked in her eyes and saw the love and pain in them. It killed him to know how much she loved him and what he was doing to her. "dat ws srsly d bst prt f dis updte...it ws full f mxd emotions f 2 prsns...sharon ws sooo vnrble..nd it ws kinda expected..evn though swayam has dne soo mch bt she lves him nd cnt hurt him...nd d bst prt ws how mch swayam ws confident f d fct dt she cn nvr hurt him...d wy swayam tuk her in his arms ws nyc...he crs fr her bt at d sme tym he dsnt stp bein scry nd rude...i rly lyk dis swayam a lot..u mke d updtes sch dt nobody can end up hatin him..but also feel fr him...nd swayam's halat z also bad...his guilt on hurtin her nd seein d lve she has fr him..he srsly must hve vry strng rsns wch z mkn him hurt her against his will...phew..srsly ur updtes r alwys lyk dis..Gve us sooo mny emotions..nd u didnt gve awy wt swayam has against sharon's dad...eager 2 knw dat...nd rey being invlvd in dis z a hge suprse as i said in d beginin...totallyyy unexpected...don knw how sharon wl deal wt dis ne...gr8 updte nce again...do updte soon...nd kisne kaha its borin...it ws gr8 nd intriguin...eagerly waitin fr d nxt prt...once again a gr8 updte..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Baz how in the world do you hold urself for giving such intriguing update????
it was awesome...i liked the part where she says u made existence a lie...and when he was hurting himself, she could see the the person she knew; part was nicely put...
REY???? hmm now i feel, surely swayam is trying to protect her someway maybe by holding her hostage...he sure is hiding something Very bitter truth of her father(okay this predictions are the result of being optimistic creature n specially when it comes to SwaRon we helplessly be optimistic😆)
pata nahi reading your works till now makes me say, surely u turning things soon...
do update soon...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT??!! Rey's involved with Swayam in this too ?? OMFG !! Anyways, let me start from the beginning !! Love the whole knife incident between Swayam and Sharon !! It was really intense the way Swayam actually brought the knife to his neck and the blade actually cut him a little !! It was really touching how Sharon could not bring herself to hurt him but I also loved how Swayam stayed true to his character of the bad guy and warned Sharon that he will hurt her if she tries this again !! And now coming to Rey part, this really is an unexpected twist !! I'm sure Sharon must be broken again by this !! Looking forward to seeing how Rey is involved in all this !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was not boring
it was quite interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
rey to is involved in it.thts a surprise...
plz update soon waiting eagerly n thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This episode left me in a daze...so much variations in terms of emotions - first Sharon trying to unsuccessfully put on a steely exterior, Swayam effortlessly seeing thru it...convincing Sharon how easy it is for him to keep his cool even when she pretends anger becoz he knows she luvs him too much to hurt him and hopefully hate him either - the fact that her family is involved in this treachery is gonna crush her worse as much as her assumption that her childhood buddy Rey is has shocked her...awsumly impressed by the Swaron interaction in the first part of the update...every part of that was dot on as always!!!!

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