SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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goguma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

and i thought it was love at first sight for him...
mistress huh?! no way! run kushi, run!

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un.complicated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Erm ... that took me by surprise. This Arnav is not like your usual one ... and quite frankly I think that he is a d***. But, I look forward to the next instalment!

Can I also just say that Barun looks super hot in that picture that you posted?! 😛

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Hiruni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Lovely SS! I wanna read more! very interesting!!

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Jay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Wah...Thats my girl ...🤗

Lubs you lot Smita dear...

you are back with bang...👍🏼

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Tanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

i luv reading ur stories luvd this part even it seems interesting

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

that's bad Arnav is so wicked yaar!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

back with another comment! just read the second part... loooved it but, for that indecent proposal, could cheerfully have kicked asr where it hurts! poor khushi is so innocent that she couldn't even understand that she was being propositioned, though when it was clearly spelt out to her, all she could do was walk away in shock... so if asr learns who 'chotu' is is he going to use that knowledge to force khushi to do what he wants? am on tenterhooks to know how things will play out!

the most touching lines: "Lovers? But we don't even know each other! How can we fall in love with each other? We just met!" such innocence!

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J P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

voila new series!! and sumtyn new frm u if I not wrong heheh!! if the start was awesome part 2 was stupendous!! lol mistress she ran away miles!! I wonder how hel gte her bak n den fall in love wid her!!

Cheers for the pm :)

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Durga

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

do continue soon yaar ... waiting eagerly..

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

WOW!!!!!! Smita, only yesterday i asked u to write something new and here u are... a whole new approach... a whole new ASR... and a whole new story...

MUAAHHH!~!!!!!!!! Swtheart... love u.

First of all, this is totally different from all ur other works and am already in love with this forceful ASR that u have painted. Khushi is almost the same as before only that she can sing, but yet her flavour seemed fresh.

What i loved most is that the more u make him hard and ruthless, the more it will be great to read about how he falls hard for her...

Can't wait!!!!! Thanks for the PM.