SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

A lonely 10 yr old in the hospital...my heart aches for that girl...and u are opening up their past little by little and am reading with with so much curiosity that my eyes are hurting and my heartbeats are faster😊

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Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

That was really sad in parts.
I know they got off on the wrong foot but I'm glad to see Arnav trying to make amends.
Loved the update.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Thnqq fr making dem talk... nice ipdate...

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

am i stalking?...😕

nice update...part by part revelation to past

Babas loss was expected...loss of his dear wife and unborn child.

Kuushi was 10 when she met with accident...so its a permanent defect. Is she handicapped?or something else...im curious.

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Ohhh his entire family has met khushi! I'm sure they'll be able to engineer further meetings between them ;)! You have mami's and nk's dialogues spot on! Haha, makes me laugh! Khushi's been injured since she was 10 :( wonder what other info the detective will uncover...

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Shweta

@Sunset90

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

I've again started my business of stalking you! When I come to IF, the first thing I do is look if you have updated. Now why did I come to IF in the first place while I was doing mathematics is a mystery. But the greater mystery is what was Khushi's past... So I chose to read it... And boy did it amaze me... A wonderful flow to the story that always makes me want more, I love your writing.

Loved the saree ( as usual). Better become the costume selector for Sanaya or try to direct your stories in real. I'm sure all your fans would watch.

Now the family has also met her. I'm sure Khushi realized that Arnav doesn't actually want her as a mistress but as wife, but he is simply not aware of his own deep feelings.

That past of Shashi was very sad! 😭... How sad Khushi must be!

The met at the hospital! Gasp!!

Waiting for the next update!