Ariya SS: Tujhko Jo Paaya.. (10A & B) 08/01

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Wow di what an awesum blossom update..
purely ariyalicious..
loved it...
shree words made me laugh...!
arjun in mandir grt..
riya blushing absent mindly lolz..!
ria pray fr arjun lil heart touching!...
ria unhone mujhe date ke liye kha mein ab kya pehnu hehe...~!!!!!!
u describe ariya feelings in very sweet cute n romantic way..!
grt di..!
all d best fr ur work..!
fab..!

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Res

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I love the Chotu-Shree-Riya camaraderie. And. It's amazing how perceptive they are about Riya, while still giving her the time and space she needs to come to terms with things... and them disclose and discuss with them.

Haye ni!!!! Main marr jawaan... inni soni jodi hai yeh!
The description of their clothes, expressions and thoughts... was... Beautiful. Ooh-la-la. And. It made my heartbeat and breath quicken.

Such a well described first date. And. By God. It was so uncannily realistic. The rushing about. The dilemma over clothes. The pause before opening the door. The breathless evening of your partner.

Everything was perfect.

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Awww...

Shree and Chotu are so cute !!! And their bonding with Riya is just Superb !

really nice chapter with Arjun and Riya scenes.

Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

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sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

lovely again...

but arjun riya romance,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.waiting

luvd shree n chotuu

terribly missed rathore😆

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

just cant wait for more
cont soon...

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Disha

@.Brok3nSoul.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Uff Di!

Maar daalogi kya?☺️☺️ 🤣

Awesome Awesome Chapter! 😳
Hotness Personified!

Can't even type the comment properly! 😆

Let me blush lil bit more! ☺️

Hadd hain...ab next update ka wait na hoga!

Thank you for the update! 🤗

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

ohhh no...girl, u just made my heart race faster...its still fast!

aisi toh heart attack aa jaayegi yaar...

jaldi kuch karo warna...

Amazing tha...romantic...sweet...cute...

and i loved Chotu-Shree's comedy

"Nahi nahi.. Dard kyun hoga.. Bass sar par danda hi toh pada than a.. Aur uske baad Arjun Sir ke angry young man wale gusse se bhare stares, Rathore Sir se suspension ki dhamki aur raatbhar Chottu ki daant.. Bass itna hi toh saha hai maine.."

that set me laughing!

cont soon