ARSHI SS: ~UMBRELLA cr~(BFTW4) IMP NEWS pg53 16/10

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Loved the concept, poor Khushi had to go through so much for her father who at the end didnt survive. Atleast now we know that ruthless business tycoon was not Arnav Singh Raizada.

loved that she has such good friends around .
Please do pm me when u continue

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Rita

@rjhaveri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Lovely story, Arnav here seems like a nice guy. I hope Khushi gets lots of love and happiness in this story. She has suffered enough. Appy you are a very good writer, I like your stories.

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vishruta

@vishruta

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

awesomenesss!!!!!!!!!!!!

pls let the magic begin...

love ya,

Vishruta😳

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theezy-lovely

@theezy-lovely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

as usual an awsome updat...

nw nly got 2 read it.. sry

bt it was lovely...

update sooon...

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Anjali

@Payaash

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Awe !!!! I love it !!! Pls update this soon na ... Even pawn ... Pls ...

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anupm

@anupm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

intrsting.

eagrly waiting for nxt..

u r an awsm writer...i only read 2 stories of u. every1 z amazing...

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Sweety1987

@Sweety1987

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Wow di...at the beginning I thought it was ASR who used Khushi...but the way u showed the character is simply wow...I always like ASR with humbleness but of course he need to have some attitude...I liked the beginning... 👏 👏

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MK Nahal

@nahal.mandeepka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

is there any 2nd update or not

plzzz continue

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Wow mind blowing and amazing story
loved it
so arnav is not theman who did this with khushi
love this caring and friendly asr
plzzz
plzzz
continue ur ffs