New SS: A fairy Tale, Last Chap Pg 28, UPDT 30 Oct

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Mahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

awww that was so adorable yaar 😳

loved the entire update..😃

arjun laughed😲.. aww.. that is just something to adore the most 😉

and that too coz of Riya

nehle pe dehla hehe😆

beautifully written dear..👏

and i wonder who was following her.. might be one of the guards..😕

do update soon babe 🤗 n thanks for the pm 😳

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preetika

@baRunmYlove21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Nice update and too cute 😊

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

that was really cute! especially the laughing part! how funny! but sweet... loved it a lot! please update soon! can't wait to read more!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: daisydee425
so sweet he kissed
amazing he laughed so sweet

yep Arjun's is hardly the old Arjun now, he completely changes when Ri is here😳

i wonder if we'll ever see him laugh in the serial though😕

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

Awesome yaar

Glad to see Arjun laughing

Thanks dear, lovely emoticon...

N yep loved when trying to imagine a laughing Arjun

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: lola123
Lovely...when arjun kissed her cheek..I was like aawww...very sweet part!!thanks for d pm

Thanks dear, n the way Arjun kissed her😳 was also awww for me😳

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Leki
nice part update soon... thnx for PM

Thanks dear😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: mushiroxx
😆 riya running away from arjun n gnoring her n making fake calls talking about onions...🤣🤣
that was good one...👍🏼
arjun kissed her on her left cheek...awww...riya now don't u dare wash ur left cheek until the next kiss...😉🤣
n finally our ACP arjun laughed... n that too cause of riya...🥳
loved it...
update soon...😳

well i wanted it to be funny, and i didnt know what else she could talk about, nothing apart onions came to my mind😆

If our Riya doesnt wash her cheek, Arjun would run away from her due to the dirtiness🤣

Thanks for your lovely comments dear😉

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Dear haruhi,

Very nice going, light and airy like a souffle that comes off.

What I liked best here is that Riya is in no way besotted with Arjun, and he is equally startled at the sudden attraction he feels for her. The lines "He both hated it, and felt a relief that somehow after Roshni's depth, he wasn't only a living corpse. He was also afraid of what just happened, since he didn't feel he was ready nor wanted to fall for someone again." are especially good, as they capture his dilemma perfectly.

All in all, it is promising, especially in terms of style. The content will undoubtedly come in due time, but I hope you will maintain the focus on the mystery and not let it get overwhelmed by the Arjun-Riya angle just because of the clamour for more of that. In a thriller, the romantic element should be a tadka, not the main dish!

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Thanks a lot for your comments dear, well Riya is besotted with Arjun in my last two recent SS and FF, this time i wanted something different, and dont worry i wont forget about the case, and i'm not even sure if i'll make Ariya a couple in the end of this SS or not...
Still thinking, but what i wanted to show was that after the death of someone we really loved, life shouldnt stop for the person alive, however difficult it be, and still everyone deserves at least some happiness in their life...
Hence trying to bring some roshni in Arjun's black and white life, and i made this SS very light so that anyone can enjoy without any tears or pain...