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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Please edit your comments soon!

Vaishali Di, Kinjal and @additive_monaya! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yupppiieee. . . . . .
Awsome,
superb,
fantastic,
mindblowing os. . . .
I truly lovd it. . . .
MOOD SWINGS. . . .
Awsome concpt 4 an os. . . .
As always KR r THE WORLD BEST. . .
I truly enjoyed a lot reading it. . .
Continue writing such superb os. . . . .
And,
thanks 4 the pm. . .
Egarly waiting 4 the nxt os. . . .
Update sooon. . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Nice update..!
Loved it ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Yupppiieee. . . . . .
Awsome,
superb,
fantastic,
mindblowing os. . . .
I truly lovd it. . . .
MOOD SWINGS. . . .
Awsome concpt 4 an os. . . .
As always KR r THE WORLD BEST. . .
I truly enjoyed a lot reading it. . .
Continue writing such superb os. . . . .
And,
thanks 4 the pm. . .
Egarly waiting 4 the nxt os. . . .
Update sooon. . . . .


Hey! I am glad you liked my One Shot. 😃. And yeah, Vaishali Di requested me for both the couple and concept. 😳

And yeah my first time on both the couple and concept so I am very glad you liked it! 😉

Well, next One Shot will be soon as I have already typed it. But I will give some time to the readers to read this one before! 😆 Maybe on Monday! 😉


Thank you once again! 🤗

P.S: What is your name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

Nice update..!
Loved it ..!


Glad you liked my One SHOT! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Beautiful OS..
N i loved d title ;)
U know wht ur stories shows ur personality..:)
Reyansh ka love at first sight :)
N dan d marriage.. :D
He's so understandin.. He knew dat kriya needed space to adjust herself so he gav her d whole space...
Beautiful moments of kriyaansh :)
U portrayed it beautifully.. I loved it thoroughly!!
But short update tha:p neva mind !!

Eagerly Waitin fr ur nxt OS on kriyaansh..
Cnt wait.. U know:p
Umm.. If u dont mind.. Plz start a new FF on d3..
Wud love to read it.. Sry.. Fr d increasing demands :0
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
unresd...

hope u don't feel bad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

and hann res...

okies so sach bolun pehle u tell me ki where do u study??

teri english inni acchi hai...

and the title i had to take put the dictionary and i settled for sweet melodies... (blame the dictionary for it)

there were so many word jinhe maine pehli baar suna... yaar bata tu kahan se laayi apni vocabulary tu???

so it was so very sweet...

u know especially how u strt it 2ith third person pov describing and then dialoguebaazi pe...

it gives a different feel...

par mujhe na kuch aur chahiye tha... the thing is i am not able to put up into words... i will tell u as soon as i get this...

but the way she was reminiscing the past and how rey came it was beautiful...

lekin inna chhota so very not fair...

plus it was first time KR... so it was really good... i know u r not used to write abt them...

but practice makes a man perfect... and i will make sure u get them a lot😉

my next demand...

bas soch ke bata rhi,,,, umm... KR having a serious MU which gets cleared (not the melodramatic way a logical way.. and some sweet moments as to how they amend it.)


School from where I got the vocabulary http://thesaurus.com/ 😳

Then, okay this is whatever I could infer from your request Di. Sorry if you are unhappy with it!

And yeah do tell me when you frame it in words and explain what exactly you want! 😃

Next demand, you will have to wait for sometime, as each couple will have their turn. 😉

I am glad with whatever I could put up [though not according to your expectations / demands] you liked it.

Next time I would be careful with specially your demand! 😆

And the length, I told you I wasn't really satisfied with it myself but my brain just Stopped working iske age!

I hadn't even given a complete end but then I tried to give myself a break and then complete it.

Anyways. Thank you once again Vaishali Di ! 😃

_Nivriti :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Hi.
M madhu. .
Cal me madsy as al my frnds do.
Friends??
And ya wats ur name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
hey it was really osum...
luvd it...
and i must tell you u really have great writting skills dear...😃
n wats ur name?
m Roopam...
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