The First Five Times - Five: Pg 21

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved it.loved the idea.u always write something new and surprise me..and now their first five times..
Loving it..

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

something new loved the flashback loved their first meeting n the dargh scene loved it thanks for the pm

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

loved their first few meeting loving it

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667300

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the scenes the first is when they first me and the second was in the darhg very nice thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: snoopy84
loved their first few meeting loving it

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
something new loved the flashback loved their first meeting n the dargh scene loved it thanks for the pm

Just to clear it up, Khushi and Arnav don't actually meet in either of these pieces.

In the first one, Abhishek calls and Khushi never goes into Sheesh Mahal and in the Dargah, Arnav doesn't drop his key but puts it into his pocket properly.

Not your fault guys at all though! Obviously something lacking in my writing. Probably trying to be too subtle and falling flat on my face :P

So I will take that into account for future :)

Edited by nayika - 12 years ago

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newmoon2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome scenes
Thanks for the pm

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Ritika

@WiseGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I get it now... I had to reread the title... I had my friend read this because she has come over and she thinks that "it's amazingly awesome." Her words.

Can't wait to read about their third meeting!

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667300

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: WiseGirl
I get it now... I had to reread the title... I had my friend read this because she has come over and she thinks that "it's amazingly awesome." Her words.

Can't wait to read about their third meeting!

I'm sorry! I seem to be confusing everyone because I had the mistaken belief that you could all just see into my brain :PP

Glad you got it though in the end.

Aww thank you for thinking my work worthy enough to show to your friend and I'm glad she liked it :D

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Aww! The first few episodes! How sweet! That show was magical. I miss that show so much...God just thinking of the first episodes makes me want to go back and watch up until Akash's wedding. What a great show that was...

Thanks for reminding me of the magic!

Looking forward to read what happens next!