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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Memories or flashbacks..you haven't talked about a meeting yet ...she gets a call...she knows exactly where her jijaji is ...and the key did not fall down to picked up...intriguing...will their meeting be less painful?

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Updated comment on pg 3 :)

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Such wonderful times...the first few meetings...never tire of watching those epis over n over again...

Loving yout take On their meetings n cant wait to read more...

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krishna mehta

@krishu3393

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

thnks for reminding back parts..!! its lovely n i love it..!! u r awesome nayika.. i like whatever u wrote.. m ur fan..!!

thnks for pm..!!

update soon..!!

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

makes one walk back on memory lane...

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Thanks for reminding back parts.loved the update.thanks 4 the pm.

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Oh these old epis were magical. Nice concept. You could add the youtube links maybe, added effect.

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

beautifully written!

thanks for the pm.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

You are reminiscing the magical moments but with a twist.. they do not meet. So what would have been like if they had not met..had not Devi Maiyya intervened?..It would not have created the magical nostalgia associated with these scenes for sure..Looking back, it was like destiny brought them face to face!!

What do you think will have been their story had they not met each other?