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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Loved the update...khushi is a wise girl to choose her dream..im sure there going to be lotts of fireworks btwn arnav -khushi...i like the combo between Aman and ASR.. arnav is a kind of guy we love to hate ...very arrogant and sarcastic but charming when he wants to...i say, good luck Khushi to deal with him on a daily basis... thanx for the pm and pls continue soon...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

She is shocked is such an understatement.. That was the most shocking thing she ever heard.. The way she blasted on him but at the end of the day, she has to get back to her Boss.. Oh Im sorry.. Her Boss's Boss.. 😆

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881876

@881876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Believe me i am big-big fan of yr 'IF ONLY' and week ago I read this FF of yrs for the first time and i m so hooked that when i read yr PM i clicked STB first...You are simply amazing and this update is freaking great :)

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

WAW SUPERB UPDATE LOVED IT SOOO MUCH :d

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Ultimatewishes

@UltimateWishes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

heyy it was awesome

he remembered how she smelt

he read her diary

he put her out of her misery by giving her ,her job back

he is interested in her

he doesn't think of her as a regular fling !!!

masssive thankss
update soon :):)

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

amazing update dear...

n m loving this arnav n khushi... so different from the show but equally adorable n cute...

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

You just rocked again...👏...I love the way Arnav N Khushi are... They are too different from our show... but its enjoyable... looking forward to see Boss/Employee Conflicts...😉

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

ahhh nicely done!

them working together! Fireworks!!! love it!

She confounded him.. with her variety of smells.. and he pissed her off.. interesting combination!

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Frankly, I've read a couple of real life stories but this one takes the cake! Generally, all real life stories are fascinating mostly coz they're ..well real ! But you know why this one is like W.O.W?! Its because of how you've articulately penned it. All the way through, I was simply in awe of the way you write. I loved each and every character.. Where Khushi is a bomb, Arnav an ignition and together they're gonna create fireworks 😆 This story is so pleasing and cute and sweet and funny and crazy and so much more that am more than hooked on to it.. One liners are killers! Storyline interesting (like a live movie going on) .. characters lovely. .. and on top the 'real' thing makes it a dream! :)

I thought 'If Only..' was great coz may be, you got a strong hold on it and it's all so clear in your mind and everything .. However, after reading this piece, am completely speechless. You've become an inspiration!

-V-

P.S : I like how Arnav has a playful side here unlike normal ASR ...LOL.. Its a treat to watch him this way .. 😳
P.P.S : Spill beans soon :D

Edited by Ethereal-Path - 12 years ago

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zobsheh

@zobsheh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Woah this was one longgg update 😃...i some what knew that Arnav will bring her back...and i am loving Arnav and Aman's camaraderie...and Khushi is just too adorable while Arnav is a stubborn ...flirt i might as well add...Awesome update...loved it.. and thanks for the pm😊