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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

And then kisses and more kisses :)

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

awesome update, khushi is reminded of his kiss and their convo was very cute,

asr is very calm and composed, while replying to her.

thanks for the pm.

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sias2

@sias2

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Loved the update! wow AR bought Khushis company..now that's news.. it would be fun to read their encounters in office! ASR and aman god they are so cute..i mean i liked their conversation it was just so much fun.. Khushi what to say about this gal she is an unique piece.. m getting suspicious about this Amar.. wow Masam take a bow..love you<3

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Kalyaani
Coffee...
~Edit~

Women being called Venus or Aphrodite, I can understand a recipe book? Really? That was a mochalicious line. Aman is a fantastic bitch, he really is.

Did I tell you, I love this Arnav'.he is so freaking awesome''.

He did the following and does not bat an eye lid '

Reading a girl's diary (thank God he skipped the girly parts)

Behaved like a good boy the diary girl's Mom (nice move)

Kissed her and remembered the taste (good move, I must say)

Hired her not for the kiss they shared, the portfolio he saw on the sly (best decision, thus far)

Poor Khushi to vacillate between rage and happiness, sensible girl settled for happiness'..go girl chase your dream and have that hunk chase you.

Your coffee dose of the update''.

*Pulls out the cup and runs away*

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mirka88

@mirka88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

I read chapter 3 and 4 together.

Khushi's mom is really cool here and I loved the interaction she and Arnav had.
The kind of relationship she and her mom share reminds me of mine.

Arnav is awesome in this story. He's flirty, mischievous and bold when he wants to be, and he's stern and professional where it is required.

I love this Aman as well. He has a lot of facial expressions to offer. They are extremely amusing.

Just a thought ~ Khushi's relationship with Amar, reminds of me of the initial relationship between Anjali and Shyam in the show. Of course, the characters are different, just there's a similar longing and loneliness from Khushi's end as was in Anjali initially.

I don't have to say that you're an amazing writer, you know that already,
Will be waiting for the next chapter! :)

Edited by mirka88 - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Ahhh...this is why I absolutely love STB!!!

Recipe book??? 🤣 Arnav telling Aman what all he did was too funny...!!!

I totally luuurve your characters!! ❤️

Khushi was in a dilemma...happy or angry or frustrated...which feeling should she adopt at the moment??? Great description of her feelings...😊

And the subtle way Arnav made Khushi an employee again...though this was based on her taste in photography and NOT the way she "tasted" !!😉 Good move Arnav...!!

Like I've said before...this is such a breath of fresh air!!!

Thank you for the pm!!!🤗

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Omg! Finally what I wanted to read! Gawd I simply wait for ur pms n in that especially Stb!! Loved it lol n when she was lik n all broke girl that whole week it was damn funny gawd I cant stop grinning and this arnav is so much fun! And the arnav-aman duo rock sizzling chemistry lol!! And I wonder whats gonna happen the rest of the life ;-) loved it! Yay I.m happy dancing!
cheers for the pm :)

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

WOW !awsome Update!
Aman n Arnav are adorable😆in a weird way!love ths FF.

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Ruki.F

@Ruki.F

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

soo cute .. like the way he convince her for joining back ..waiting to read wut gone happen next when they start working together

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

hilarious!!! i am loving this style of writing... first person style!!

love this relaxed arnav and his bitch!!

khushi has spunk... some chutzpah as u put it... superb.

keep it coming!