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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 21

"Where are u talking me sahil" kripa asked screaming over the roaring of the bike.

"U ll see"

"I am tierd of sitting on this bike, how far away is it?"

"we are almost there i want to be sure that we are far enough away i dont want anyone disturbing us." After 10 more minutes of riding on the bike kripa and angad arrived at their destination.

"Wow what is this placed." Kripa said looking at the lavishly decorated sign on the building.

"Its my favorite place to be, and the best disco around." Angad says smiling at her, "I am sure u ll love it, i heard from ur dad u like excitment, and well u cant get anymore excitment anywhere else."

Kripa walks inside the beautiful decorated disco, she finds that angad was right this place was everything, lively, exciting, crazy, and the best part was she could dance, she had alwaysed loved dancing. But she had never been to a disco before, her parents had never let her. She gave angad a kiss on his cheek, "Thanks"

"For what??"

"Everything" kripa said smiling

Angad smiled, thinking how sweet it would be when she found out who he really was, "Wana dance??"

"Ofcourse"

The song Rock and roll from the movie kabhie alvida na kehan was playing, kripa was enjoying herself very much, after an hour of jumping up and down Angad though got very tierd. He didnt like dancing as much, he had only come there to make kripa happy, "Kripa lets go i am tierd."

"Come on sahil we have only been dancing for an hour, just stay for half an hour more and then we ll go."

"No i dont have anymore energy left to dance."

"Ok then just go sit i ll be there as soon as this song ends, its like my faviorite."

"Ok, i ll be right over there by the drinks." Angad leaves kripa alone and goes by the drinks counter. He finds a few guys there, they were all strong and muscular, he gets an idea, he gives them money telling them exactly what he wanted them to do, making sure kripa was not watching him.

The song ended kripa stopped dancing and went to go join angad, but she couldn't find him anywhere, "Hey hottie, who are u looking for, we are here, why dont u dance with us," one of the guys says grabing kripa by her hand, The rest of them surround her.

"Go to hell, pervert." Kripa says realesing her hand walking the other way, some of the other guys blocked her way, one of them grabed her by the waist.

"Ur right she is a hottie." he brings his mouth close to kiss her, Kripa tries to release herself from him, when he doesn't let go she slaps him in the face, the kicks him in the shins and runs away out of the disco, the guys follow her.

Kripa was very scared it was like all of her nightmares were coming to real life, Her high heeled sandels were preventing her from running fast. They were gaining on her, she kicked her sandals away, she was sweating, and was now far away from the disco and running on a car less road. She was tierd her bare feet were bloody and hurting.

But she didnt dare stop, she knew what would happen if she did. She wasn't feeling so good now though, she could feel herself slowing down, she urged herself, to go on.

But her body had lost too much blood and her brain needed oxygen. She felt her knee hit the ground, everything went black the last though in her head was "they are going to catch me."

As kripa fainted Angad came up he had been there all along watching everything, he smiled and paid the guys, then carried her on his sholders put her in his car, and then drove away.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hahaha! Nice plan angad! lol i thought this part was suppose to be romantic! oh well its better this way lol! i wonder where he is taking her? plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part
i can't wait what happens next plz coninue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
i thought he had a bike were did the car come from?
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww i feel terrible!! that very very very mean of Angad!! i mean poor her!!

contineu soon
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Hina
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

aww i feel terrible!! that very very very mean of Angad!! i mean poor her!!

contineu soon
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Hina

lol i dont feel bad of kripa after all kripa did send him to jail for 7 full years. think about it if the person you love betrays you and then sends you to jail for 7 years i think you would also be angry

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Posted: 19 years ago
I just read ur whole fanfic - maybe Tarun was thw one that had wanted Harry dead n blamed A so he could have Kripa - but then his plan back fired coz A killed him!

I reallly like ur fanfic - but A deserved the punishment coz he did kill Tarun

How could K not recognise him? Wouldnt that face haunt her dreams ?

Cont soon

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Numera89

hahaha! Nice plan angad! lol i thought this part was suppose to be romantic! oh well its better this way lol! i wonder where he is taking her? plz continue soon!

i havent gotten to the romantic part yet😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandini

I just read ur whole fanfic - maybe Tarun was thw one that had wanted Harry dead n blamed A so he could have Kripa - but then his plan back fired coz A killed him!

I reallly like ur fanfic - but A deserved the punishment coz he did kill Tarun

How could K not recognise him? Wouldnt that face haunt her dreams ?

Cont soon

Chandini (",)

many years in jail changed his appearence and he was 17 then and 25 when kripa saw him again. Peoples features change quite a lot b/w those ages, And angad kind of caught her by surprise. But dont worry she ll recognize him eventually

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

i thought he had a bike were did the car come from?

He stole it 😆😆

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