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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks numera i just love long comments anyways next part comming up soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

i know u guys will hate me for this part i about to post but hope u ll enjoy it


Part 14

He puts his step inside the room he wants to beat the crap out of tarun, he doesnt even know what the hell he is going to do to kripa, probably stab her with the knife but she would also have to pay. But he stops when he hears them talking, "Oh tarun i love u so much" Kripa says kissing him passionately.

Tarun laughs pulling away from her, "After this i love u even more, what the hell i couldnt have believed that u could get any more hotter than u were, u definately proved me wrong."

"Ya sure whatever no need to butter me up." kripa says going slightly red

"No i am not kidding, poor angad doesn't know what he is missing. He doesn't even know (he knows now) what his girlfriend is doing behind his back, actually this is what makes it so much fun."

"Ya u are so right, that stupid dumb oaf thinks that i love him, a kiss or two and he was already making our wedding plans."

Tarun laugh, "Come on kripa give the poor guy a break i mean ur already being mean enough to him by sleeping with me."

Kripa looks thoughtful, "Hmm...Ya ur right." They both are glued to each other again, their mouth and their bodies. Angad who is standing outside feels his heart piercing it was bad enough that kripa, his kripa, the kripa that he trusted with his life was sleeping with someone else. But now he knew she didnt even give a damn for his feelings. He was in love with the biggest W**** on the planet. But he would not take all their BS anymore it was time to kill. Without hesitation he steps inside the room.

His voice is icy cold and with not a trace of warmth in it, "Hello kripa"

Tarun and kripa both unglue and look up surprised, "Angad" Kripa says in a fearful voice.

"Plzz dont take my name kripa, or i might just..." He doesnt say anything anymore he grabs tarun and slams his against the wall, kripa screams, "Tarun!!." Kripa grabs the phone beside her and starts dialing the police. Angad doesnt care he just wants to hurt tarun as badly as possible he punches him breaking his nose with a crack.

Tarun would have fought back but Angad doesnt give him time to recover he kicks him in every body part. Kripa is yelling at the background and at the same time trying to give the police the address of where she lives. kripa goes to stop angad, grabing him by his waist but he just throws her back she hits the table and becomes unconsious. Angad is through with tarun he is bloody red, he turns around to leave but tarun grabs him by the waist.

Angad who is still pissed as hell throws him towards the same table that kripa had hit, his head hits the corner of the table hard, his skull cracks and tarun lays by kripa but not unconcious. Angad also realises this he leans towards his body to feel his pulse there was no mistaking it, HE WAS DEAD. Angad just sits their realization of what he had done hitting him, hard.

Love of his life had betrayed him, He had just commited a 2nd degree murder, and the police were on their way. Angad just sat there, he was a smart guy and could see that there was no way to escape this situation. When the cops came they found him sitting against the bed, his hands covered with blood, and with two people laying beside him one unconsious and one dead. They arrested him he did not protest and went quitely.

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Angad was in jail when kripa went to see him, at first she had hatted him for mudering harry but now she hated him for mudering Tarun and harry, her hattred along with her pain had definetly doubled. If she had known the consequence of wanting revenge then she would have never even considered it. All she could do now was watch him behind bars and make sure he got the stricktest punishment that law offered, but she had to meet him.

She had to see him behind bars maybe that would make her pain lessen, she knew it would work because just seeing him sitting behind bars, hopeless, helpless eased her pain. She had made sure no one came to comfort him, not even the sister that he had loved so much. She made sure that she would hate him, think of him of as a cold blooded murder that he was. He would have many years behind the bar to recall and keep recalling that every one that he loved hated him.

Next part: Kripa's visit to Angad, many secrets revealed like who wrote those letters, and what kripa was really planning on doing, why she thought he murdered harry.

Parts after next: 8 years have passed, kripa has still not forgotten the past, though she is much more cheerful now, Why wouldnt she be her parents are planning her marraige

I am still looking for comments guys lets me know that u guys are actually liking the story.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
I hope u guys liked that part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
sad n i hate kripa rite now but i m sure she has reasons well continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
angad murdering someone.... 😭 speechless awesome part cont soon plz 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was surprising .. i didnt know angad would actually kill tarun but very good part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow too good but dont make it an 8 years gap make it 3or 4 years...8 years seems to long
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey...gr88 part, i hate kripa obviously like everybody else, lol, hehe...n angad, well i feel bad for him...lol, cant wait to read the next part! continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

wow too good but dont make it an 8 years gap make it 3or 4 years...8 years seems to long

dont worry angad will only be 25 and kripa 24 and they will hate each other like hell angad more then kripa though he lost much more

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Posted: 19 years ago
omg noooo Angad cant be in jail yaar! not fair! tarun totally deserved it and so does kripa! y should he be punished ugh!!! 8 years plzzzzzzzzz dont tell me angad was in jail for the long! kripa cant get married and be happy! no way angad has to come out and make kripa's life miserable!!! perhaps by him marrying her and yeah she is a total Wh*** ugh!! plz continue soon!

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