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Posted: 19 years ago
how long will it take to post the part iam dieing to know what will happen next
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Posted: 19 years ago
damn, i am sorry guys ur going to have to wait for the update my stupid file thing accidentely got deleted so i am going to retype everything.
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Posted: 19 years ago

ok next part is here i know u guys will love it.

Part 13

Maybe i should go to kripa's house, i mean it cant hurt can it? but i am suppose to trust her, says an inside voice angad sighs, i do trust her and i am not going to go to her house because i suspect her or anything i just want to give her a surprise. Angad finally makes up his mind and get's ready. He still doesnt feel right about what he was doing but he just had to know, just this once and after that he would never ever suspect her.

He walks down to the hall to find Ria in the living room talking to someone, in almost whisper afraid that someone would hear her, Angad step's closer careful, to catch words of the conversation, trying not to let her know that he was there, "Yes prithvi i will come meet u just not now, u know bhai is still home i dont want there to be questions." She was talking to prithvi what the hell!!! When did this happen? No assumptions angad they might just be friends.

"Oh prithvi just shut up. U know that cant happen i know how my brother will react if he finds out he will like totally freak."

"Ok bye love u, and miss u." Ok no more assumption there was definetly something b/w them.

Angad clears his throat. Ria quickly puts down the phone and looks at him in surprise, Angad tries to talk to her in a totally casual voice, "Who was that Ria?"

"Umm just a good friend of mine."

"Oh good friend, how good of a friend." Angad says his eyes narrowed.

damn he already knows no use pretending. Ria manages to stuter out an answer, "Bhai... it just that i was going to tell u but..." Ria sighs, "I love prithvi bhai."

"Oh how long has this been going on?"

"A few months"

Angad closes his eyes shakes his head a little and goes and sits down beside ria, "Ria why didnt u tell me? We are like the only family that each of us have we cant go around hidding things. I Like prithvi he is a nice guy, i am sure he' ll take care of u."

"Really Bhai?" Ria says in desbelief his brother had approved this quickly maybe he didnt know his brother as well as she thought she did.

"Yes, but the next time u hide something i swear i will kill u." They both hug.

"U going somewhere bhai." Ria says seeing him all dressed up

"Yes, just going for a small walk, why u want me to drop u somewhere?"

"no that's ok prithvi is going to come pick me up."

"Hmm... i am going to want a little talk to him about that."

"Bhai!! See that's why i didnt want to tell u ur so protective of me."

"Ok ok i won't." He says in an annoyed voice, "But i guess i should get going."

Angad takes his motorcycle and sets off driving to kripa's house. He kept tracing things in his mind, Ok all he would do is knock on her door and tell her he had come to surprise her. God that sounded stupid even inside his own head but what the hell. He parks his bike besides kripa's drive way and looks at the door. He reaches his hand to open it, it opens it's not locked. Angad hesitates stepping inside, but his curiosity takes over, he wanted to see what kripa was up to.

He reminded himself that he still trusted her, ya right who the hell was he kidding. There is no one in the living room, maybe he should just wait here. But he doesn't he doesn't know why he does it, it was probabally his second instincts, but he heads straight towards kripa's bedroom.

As he climbs the stairs he hears sound of voices going closer and closer. His heart was thumping painfully in his chest, what was kripa doing with someone in her bedroom. He goes and stands beside her room the door is open slightly, what he sees makes him want to scream.

Kripa was in arms of tarun yes the same one he had met the other day, the one that was a "good friend of hers". He might have interpreted as him giving her a friendly hug but there was no chance of that. They both were in bed under silk sheets, most likley naked, now kissing their hearts out.

He feels like vomiting. He puts his step inside the room he wants to beat the crap out of tarun, he doesnt even know what the hell he is going to do to kripa, probably stab her with the knife but she would also have to pay.

Tell me how u guys liked this part... and if u even did

Next part: Angad beating the crap out of tarun. It'll be awesome trust me... but what will happen after that one clue that i can give is ... its something with police involved. If u guys hate kripa now wait till the next part u will hope that angad will torture and then kill her painfully.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg you have to continue right now....by the way make angad punch tarun right now!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hope angad beats tarun up really badly!!!!!1 😡 😡 😡 dam that kripa! how can it be any worse??????? 😡 anyways... now u have to continue asap!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!!

awesome part!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg plz cont soon cnt wait to see wa happens nxt n make sure da angad punches tarun 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet honey

omg plz cont soon cnt wait to see wa happens nxt n make sure da angad punches tarun 😡

He will do more then punch him, he is definetly pissed enough to kill him...hint hint.😉 😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
i swear its the season of broken hearts evry fanfic i read (especially ak fanfics) there are hearts being broken 😭 awesome part cont soon 👏 and i don't mind angad being revengeful becuz in ur story kripa deserves evry bit of hatred frm angad 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
heck yea! lol for the lack of not being allowed so say somethin else! thank god he knows! who the heck does kripa think she is trying to fool angad like that i mean seriously ugh! and ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww under sheets kripa and tarun ewwwwww i mean if it was angad lol itd be okay but tarun ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! shes such a ... ugh i cant believe her! u know what angad needs to do lol he needs to beat the crap out of tarun til his face is distorted and no girl in her rite mind would go near him! oh hes pissed enough to kill him... thats cool i mean tarun totally has it coming! as for kripa well im out of ideas but it better be bad whatever it is!! she cant get off easy!!!!!!!! kripa sweety no one messes with our angad and gets away with it! lol by the way that was an awesome part!!! plzzzz continue soon!
Edited by Numera89 - 19 years ago

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