NEW Arhi SS: One Last Wish. SNEAK PEEK Updted - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsuuum update dear./...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweetie,ur ss is simply captivating n intriguing...i m so eager 2 know exactly y does Arnav want 2 marry Khushi...how he met her again n she din't know...n many a other riddles n secrets...Dalmuthuya,pls break ur own record 2 torture ur ardent readers n update soon 😡 😆😆 no, no dear!!!! i m just joking...i can understand how difficult it
d be 2 keep balance between studies n fiction writing... it was just a sweet gesture on my part 2 show u how much i admire ur creativity !!!!! 😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

sweetie,ur ss is simply captivating n intriguing...i m so eager 2 know exactly y does Arnav want 2 marry Khushi...how he met her again n she din't know...n many a other riddles n secrets...Dalmuthuya,pls break ur own record 2 torture ur ardent readers n update soon 😡 😆😆 no, no dear!!!! i m just joking...i can understand how difficult it

d be 2 keep balance between studies n fiction writing... it was just a sweet gesture on my part 2 show u how much i admire ur creativity !!!!! 😛😛


I love your sweet gestures <3 I will update this after I update chapter 8 for Innocence in her eyes :) I am currently working on that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏nice story update plzz..

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya

Hey guys, well, I am here with another SS. Yes, I know many of you will be like, ''dear god Dal finish the ones you have promised and then start another." But I am weak and I cannot keep an idea inside my head for too long. Writing is an addiction to me so it has to go on paper and I got this idea reading one my History books. It's going to be a little different from all my other FF's. I am trying to explore something in this FF so I hope you guys will enjoy the ride with me. This just a small piece of sneak peek and tell me what you think. :)



One Last Wish






He watched her behind the tinted shutters, dancing along to the rain, not giving a thought about the outside world. She was beautiful... A woman on the outside, but a little child hidden on the inside. Her carefree laughter echoed in his ears with the trickles of water washing down to the earth. Sense of peace diffused in to his soul as his eyes moved with her body. He prayed a silent prayer, thanking the heavens for this moment of a second chance to live.

Aman turned towards his boss.

"Is she the one?"

"She is the one... she is the answer to my one last wish."



Note: For my Innocence in her eyes readers; computer is gonna be fixed this weekend, sadly. So that is gonna have to wait for a bit. That is why it was giving me trouble to download. :/

For Behind this Stone Heart... I am seriously thinking of discontinuing it guys.. I just can't think of anything what so ever for it. I don't understand why, but I got nothing. So I think that's gonna be off, but hey we got this new one coming up so... :D


Index

Chapter 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66687875�

Note: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3228794/new-arhi-ss-one-last-wish-sneak-peek-updted?pn=6�

Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3228794/new-arhi-ss-one-last-wish-sneak-peek-updted?pn=8�

Sneak peek: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3228794/new-arhi-ss-one-last-wish-sneak-peek-updted?pn=15�

Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3228794/new-arhi-ss-one-last-wish-sneak-peek-updted?pn=18

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Posted: 12 years ago
l love this story and l love khushi. but the flashback has arnav some type of disease??? anyways do pm me when you will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry, i know that i'm really late in commenting...i had exams going on so i had to take a break from IF...Coming to ur update, its really nice...loved it...do update soon and gud luck for ur exam...(if ur still having it 😆)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. I am glad Khushi is ready to give it a thought. And Arnav is so understanding, loving and caring. And 'rat's ass' reminds me of Dean. Hehehehehe... Thanks for the PM.
Manal <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

Lovely update. I am glad Khushi is ready to give it a thought. And Arnav is so understanding, loving and caring. And 'rat's ass' reminds me of Dean. Hehehehehe... Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3


LOL I WAS WONDERING where that ''rats ass line'' came from and now I realize it is something Dean says! LOL OMFG. Nice catch ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys, this is a small sneak peek for the next chapter! :)


Chapter 4 Sneak Peek

"So she changed her mind?," Miss. Sense asked Arnav, while she was sipping her tea. Arnav nodded and took a bite out of his cookie; finally after hours he got something to eat. With all the stress he didn't realize how hungry he was.

"Well that is not surprising,'' she added, her eyes carefully watching his reaction. Arnav looked up a frown present on his face. "What do you mean?", he asked suddenly curious by her comment.

Miss. Sense leaned a bit closer to Arnav spoke in a hushed tone, ''you have been stalking her for 2 years Arnav. Shouldn't you know her a bit more?" Blood rushed to his cheeks, and he lowered his eyes. Miss. Sense smiled lightly at his embarrassment, ''yeah, that's right. Don't think I haven't noticed."

"I guess I am not surprised... but what do you mean by your first comment?'', Arnav asked her, putting his attention fully on her. She sighed and got up from her chair. "There is a reason why she acts like a child most of the time... An incident that changed her life forever..."

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I am revealing something in the next chapter. I think it's pretty obvious, but I didn't want to change the original plan for the story. :)

PS: Innocence in her eyes; I am having bad writers block for the last page. More like I know what's going to happen, but the words to describe is blocked. I will try to update that soon. Bear with me <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh!!!wts cumin next?wt z d incident Ms.Sense z talkin abt?too much to openn..

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