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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the first chapter and at the risk of being called repetitive i have to say this OH MY GOD,!!!! The girl is officially crazy
As if devi mayiaa had to make them meet and give him enough proof of her craziness...
God !!!! Absolutely loved her reasoning for going all the way till the cemetery...though why she needed a lift was absolutely hilarious

Off to read the next part

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Just read the first chapter and at the risk of being called repetitive i have to say this OH MY GOD,!!!! The girl is officially crazy

As if devi mayiaa had to make them meet and give him enough proof of her craziness...
God !!!! Absolutely loved her reasoning for going all the way till the cemetery...though why she needed a lift was absolutely hilarious

Off to read the next part


Finally you are back! You have a lot of reading to catch up on missy lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok here i go again
OH MY GOD😲
he wants to marry her???
And she thinks he his here to adopt her??? Even when she finds it way too wierd she still thinks he is here to adopt??? Oh her innocence is going to be the death of me one day i tell you!!!
But??? Y does he wants to marry her????
And he is Mr. Wumpus!!! Me likey!!! Me likey very very much !!!!
Loved how he rried to reason with ner that he is not grumpy any more and how she retaliated with not as yet😉

And you call THAT a sneak peak?????😡
Didnt get head or tail of it...and arnav is crying
My dear Mr. Wumpus is CRYING...its so not good😡
I am so pissed i dont even want to predict anything...

And i am so not going to say to that you write amazingly...i will only be repeating myself again and again and again And again and i am bored of repeating myself😉

Update.Fast.
And i promise i will comment even faster ( definitely not like i am doing nowdays * facepalm*)

C ya around
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya


Finally you are back! You have a lot of reading to catch up on missy lol


I know iknow
And i am very very sorry
Would pouting like khushi will absolve me of this???
I promised in the prev comment i will be a good girl and comment ASAP
But then you will have to update
And i am still not over my Mr. Wumpus crying😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh i forgot to mention
Loving your new signature
What a line 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta1691

Oh i forgot to mention

Loving your new signature
What a line 👏


Why thank you :) Got to thank my man Sangakara :) And also loved your comment, but come on now Mr. Wumpus will be okay <3 ;) COMMENT FASTER. I miss you when you don't comment. I love the long comments and your mad tude to go with it. lol. <3 Waiting missy and I am working on the chapter right now. Kind of having a block :/
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya


Why thank you :) Got to thank my man Sangakara :) And also loved your comment, but come on now Mr. Wumpus will be okay <3 ;) COMMENT FASTER. I miss you when you don't comment. I love the long comments and your mad tude to go with it. lol. <3 Waiting missy and I am working on the chapter right now. Kind of having a block :/


Read your history book if you are having a block
You always comes up with interesting ideas after reading history 😉
I meanwhile will read "a crack..." before my battery dies out
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta1691


Read your history book if you are having a block
You always comes up with interesting ideas after reading history 😉
I meanwhile will read "a crack..." before my battery dies out


True ;) haha I will be updating tomorrow morning or so. And okay waiting for your comment there :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Precap has me confused. Waiting for the actual part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
And here is chapter 3! I am not sure if this is a good chapter. Sorry guys, my brain is fried from uni so I hope this is not all too bad. :)

Chapter 3

Khushi stood in silence, staring at Arnav's face in awe. Her pink lips formed the shape of an 'O'. Arnav stared at her gulping, waiting for the tension to disappear. He knew what her answer was going to be, but waiting to hear it come out of her mouth, terrified him. She backed away from him and turned her back towards him.

Arnav moved a little closer to her and almost grasped her shoulder. Midway he stopped, worried, that he might scare her. Scaring her is not the best idea, especially when he wanted this answer to be a yes so badly.

In a small voice she spoke, ''so... you don't want to adopt me?" She sounded confused, like a little kid trying to understand the alphabet. How could he blame her? After all this was an unexpected offer. He doubted this happened in anyone's everyday life, but then again, people didn't bury cats in cemeteries... Somewhat this seemed a little normal for the both of them.

Once he found his voice he replied, ''no Khushi, I don't want to adopt you. In fact I think that's illegal..." She turned around to face him, her eyes narrowed at him. Anger was evident in her usual chirpy face. This was not going to be good, he thought, as he held in his breath again, waiting for her to explode.

"So what about marrying a teenager? What about that Mr. Wumpus? Don't you think that is illegal?! How could you even come to me and just ask me! I might be naive, I might be childish, and sometimes I might be oblivious, but I know my morals in life! You don't even know me! People are supposed to love eachother before they marry. Yeah, that's right, Khushi Kumari Gupta does understand life. Don't be fooled by my childish nature. I can be mature when I want to be. Just because I sleep with a stuffed owl doesnt mean I am not mature OKAY.'' Khushi let out a huge gasp of breath and pouted her lips, to make the point. She crossed her arms before her chest and grabbed the paper weight owl once again, stroking it, with her long slender fingers.

Arnav stared at her dumfounded at her entire monologue. Her explosion was worse than he thought. But he knew she was right. How can a man just come before a woman, and ask to marry her if they didn't even know each other, or love eachother. Still, there was a secret hidden behind all of this; he did know her, he did love her. The only thing is that she didn't know any of this. If he told her how he knew her, she might defeinitely say no to this so he decided to keep that hidden underneath the carpet for now.

"Khushi... I know this is a lot to take in, but can you at least think about it," he pleaded with her, hoping she would understand, but when she turned to glare at him, he knew this was a lost case.

"No, the answer is no, Mr. Wumpus. I need to know why you are here after 2 years, asking me to marry you."

And there it was, the dreaded question he tried so hard to avoid. Deep down he knew this would finally come down to this; the root cause for why he was here today.

Flash back...

2 months after the cat lady incident

"I am sorry Mr. Razaida, but this is how it all comes down to..."

Arnav sank down to the chair and held in his tears. Everything was going to change from now on. How was he supposed to do this alone? He had nobody in this world left. Life was never fair, and it never has been.

"Isn't there anything we can do?"

Arnav saw his eyes drop. He already knew the answer, but just a bit of hope, somewhere down there, maybe there was a way.

"I am sorry Mr. Razaida... but there is nothing we can do... just.. carry on with what you are doing."

Aman held Arnav's shoulders and helped him. At that moment Arnav didn't know whether he was present. Everything was destroyed in a blink of an eye.

"ASR... look... we just...," Aman couldn't, he just couldn't bring out the words. Tears were blurring his vision and he knew, he had to be strong for his boss. As they were walking Arnav stopped abruptly. His gaze staring in to the distance thinking hard about something.

Quietly he spoke, ''Aman... just take me home.. I am really tired..." Aman nodded; holding Arnav tight, they both walked to the car. Many that were witnessing the 2 men hold each other, were smirking, or making snide comments, but none knew the deeper picture...

Arnav snapped out of his memory land and looked down at the carpet. He couldn't tell her the proper reason. It was not time yet, but he knew she needed an explanation. So he decided to tell her half the truth. How he fell in love with her.

"I am here... because I love you Khushi. Why else would I ask you to marry me?" Arnav answered her quite smoothly, even though his heart was playing havoc. He saw her brown, twinkling eyes, widen at his confession. Her white teeth nipped at her red lips, slightly making it bleed. She was nervous, he assumed.

"But... Mr. Wumpus... you don't know me..., she whispered looking in to his eyes, awestruck at his confession. At that very moment all Arnan wanted to do was hold her tight, whisper how much he loved her, and never let her go.

Arnav walked a little closer to her and cupped her smooth, fair cheeks and smiled warmly, ''but Khushi I do know you... you are my crazy cat lady." Khushi gasped at his words.

"Excuse me, did you just call me crazy cat lady!?", Khushi asked him indignantly. He slightly chuckled at her bewilderment and nodded teasingly. She was so cute, almost like a little kitten herself. Why couldn't life just be easy so that he could carry her off somewhere, and love her.

"Yes, I just called you crazy cat lady. What are going to do about it, huh Khushi?" Arnav asked her smiling widely, after all these months. She came closer to him, a small smile playing across her face. A glimpse of mischievous flashed through her eyes and he knew she was up to something.

"Well, Mr. Wumpus you know what I think?," Khushi asked innocently, very much closer to him. Arnav gulped at the closure and nodded a no, waiting for her to continue. She raised her hand, slowly bringing it down upon Arnav's nose and before he knew it, she flicked it.

"BOOP, I GOT YOU!!!!,'' She screamed gleefully and clapped her hands, jumping up and down. For a few seconds Arnav stood still, shocked at what just happened. Once he realized the incident he began to laugh along with her, shaking his head at her sweet childish attitude.

"See what I mean? You're a crazy cat lady,'' Arnav said smiling at her, gently grasping her smooth hands. She didn't pull away, but there was hesitance. Khushi looked down at the carpet and then back at him.

"Mr.Wumpus... I can't still marry you...",

An unbearable sting stabbed his chest at her answer. Holding on to her hands he knew that just giving up on her wasn't the answer. Maybe there was something they could do. Then it hit him.

"Alright Khushi... how about this? We get to know each other before we get married? You come live with me for 2 months. I promise you I will take good care of you Khushi. I won't let anything or anyone harm you, I swear. You can sleep in a separate bedroom and we will spend time together during the day. We will do all the little things before we marry. I will take you anywhere you want. Please Khushi, please?" Arnav begged her like a little child himself. He widened his eyes to form the puppy dog pout, hoping it would be irresistible.

Still silence settled between them, while Khushi was deciding her answer. Arnav muttered a few prayers, begging God to give him this chance. Another chance to breathe life, and it was only through her, he could do it. Finally after a few minutes of thinking, she spoke.

"Would you hold my hand in the big people rides at the carnival?"

He shook his head chuckling at her question. Of course she would ask a question so crazy like that. Arnav bought her palm up to his lips, and lightly kissed it.

"Khushi I will not only hold your at those rides, but I will hold your hand through everything."

A wide smile spread upon her face and she nodded her head, finally accepting his offer. Without giving a second thought Arnav jumped up and hugged her tight, spinning her around, making her giggle with delight. Her vanilla scent tingled his senses, sending shivers down his back. As he put her down she began to tell him the list of things she would want in the fridge to eat, at the house.

''We have to have jalebes that is a must, oh and chocolates and and and loads of more jalebes, then more chocolates... " She rambled on looking up at the sky, through the window, still holding his hand.

Mesmerized by her sweet voice, he listened to her all evening, not giving a rat's ass about the meeting he was supposed to be in.

***

Yes, I know the flashback still didn't make sense, but I did that on purpose. Many things will make sense as the chapters progress. You guys can still keep the guesses coming because I love reading em. :) Comment, comment, like, like! Only if enjoyed of course. lol.

AND WISH ME LUCK FOR MIDTERMS. Let's hope I can kick some History and English ass!

Edited by Dalmuthuya - 13 years ago

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