NEW Arhi SS: One Last Wish. SNEAK PEEK Updted - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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my heart is dancing in excitement😆😆😆 ...khushi is so naive,cute n attractive...pls arnav,convinccce ur gal😉///i m really sorry 4 being always late in commenting,dear...i loved it so much...pls continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
oh my gawddd!!!m laughing like a maniac...gosh khushi thought he was adopting her???lol...now i want to see er reaction on the marriage thing...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Awesome satart to ur fanfic!!👏👏
It made me laugh so much when Khushi thought Arnav was adopting her when he actually wants to marry her!!😉😉
Poor arnav might just have got a heart attack!!😆😆😆
loved khushi's character... she is so young, innocent yet so mature.. loved the sensitive side to her... when she went to burry her dead cat!!
she is just cute!!😳😳
& mr. wampus!! hahahahaha... only khushi!!😆😆
& of course arnav..well he is a hottiee!!😳😳😳
Can't wait for the next part!!😉
continue soon!!
P.S: Did make me smile! & also did make my day!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz pm me!!! great so far!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello my beautiful lovelies,

I am half way done this chapter, but I thought I should show a small sneak peek. I was hoping to finish this, but my History paper slapped me in the face. So I will update this tomorrow night or so. Or this weekend. Midterms are coming soon to suck my blood so I am preparing myself with cat videos... Yes, you heard me; cat videos. :P Anyways enjoy!

Sneak peek for chapter 3


"I am sorry Mr. Razaida, but this is how it all comes down to..."

Arnav sank down to the chair and held in his tears. Everything was going to change from now on. How was he supposed to do this alone? He had nobody in this world left. Life was never fair, and it never has been.

"Isn't there anything we can do?"

Arnav saw his eyes drop. He already knew the answer, but just a bit of hope, somewhere down there, maybe there was a way.

"I am sorry Mr. Razaida... but there is nothing we can do... just.. carry on with what you are doing."

Edited by Dalmuthuya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Amazing sneak peak Dal!

Even though I didn't even get a word😆...but your title is one last wish so I think Khushi has a disease or something like that!! Maybe she is going to die or maybe Arnav!!! but your stories mostly focus on Khushi,So I assume its Khushi!!

and Arnav is talking to the Doctor or the orphanage lady...that is why he is crying..

WowAmy,you made the whole story...⭐️ I know I'm wrong!!😳

but I want to know whats happening..so update soon...

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Amy--

Amazing sneak peak Dal!


Even though I didn't even get a word😆...but your title is one last wish so I think Khushi has a disease or something like that!! Maybe she is going to die or maybe Arnav!!! but your stories mostly focus on Khushi,So I assume its Khushi!!

and Arnav is talking to the Doctor or the orphanage lady...that is why he is crying..

WowAmy,you made the whole story...⭐️ I know I'm wrong!!😳

but I want to know whats happening..so update soon...

thanks for the pm...


LMAO LOL I love your prediction.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg great sneak peek...waiting for chap...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I dint get one thing here...U gave a sneak peek of Chapter 4. Did I miss out chapter 3 or is it that u directly jumped up to chapter 4 with a surprise update on chapter 3 followed by chapter 4...

The sneak peak was breathtaking...Though clueless of what is happening yet interesting...Hope the suspense is cleared sooonnn...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

I dint get one thing here...U gave a sneak peek of Chapter 4. Did I miss out chapter 3 or is it that u directly jumped up to chapter 4 with a surprise update on chapter 3 followed by chapter 4...

The sneak peak was breathtaking...Though clueless of what is happening yet interesting...Hope the suspense is cleared sooonnn...


OMFG YOU ARE CORRECT. THANK YOU! I am so stressed I didn't even realize. LOL.

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