ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

omggg!!!! im aleady droooling over this...woww

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hmmm. Thz ones gnna b real dark i guess... wat a bitch of mthr has khushi gt hre...n asrsems no less... waiting til u update d chptrz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Very intresting ...do continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

wow this is sooo different n nice one

superb one.

i am speechless at the moment wat to say

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Very interesting concept, what a horrible mum to have. feeling sorry for Khushi poor girl and ASR loving a 50+ women really that's very dark. Looking forward to it. I love your storieas as your concept are very different and as a writer you do risk with bold and dark subjects.

Thanks and good luck

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annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

congrats on starting a BFDW 3...and its quite a shocking prologue...always loved ur stories..it is sooo diff: frm others...so looking forward to read when u start this...congrats again...

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

plz p.m me future updates...it seems promising...😃😃😃

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Tara Singhania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

An SS?????!!!!!!!!! I thot you only write FFs!!!!!! Anyways even an SS is wow if its written by you!!!!!! The prologue is jus amazin...how can Mrs. Gupta stoop so low????? I mean seriously Khushi is her own daughter...she has taken birth from her own womb!!!!!!!! Selfish mother!!!!!!! Humph!!!!...

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..ashiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Awesome beginning.. Frm the start i can guess that this story is gonna be really dark!! Ws waiting it frm long frm the day i saw it listed on ur index list... So u gona pst part 1 afta u complete BFTW2?? Does that mean u gonna end that soon??