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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

holla shana i know u were not expecting me to edit my comment any time soon

but what to do i broke my promise made to my self and came on IF only to comment and tell u how much i loved this chapter and how great u are

k coming back to the chapter it was awesome

i loved it

it was all my type of scenes 😳😆

u must have guessed it but i will still say which my favorite dialogue was

Manya I need u, I need u now ! 'said Udayveer still breathless by the kiss while his body shuddered with desire 'I need u now ,please Mnaya let me have u.'

this was the best line and after this line the update was super duper

just the way i love it

shana your writing gets better each time👏

this update was

Awesome
Wonderful
Totally Rad
Sweet
Caring
Compassionate
Passionate
Loving
Brilliant
Spectacular

shana can u please scan and send me your autograph i will frame it and keep it in my room

now as always

please please update soon

with manveer scenes

love u so so much shana

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx
Shana di awesome update 👏 👏 👏
I hate VJS and Minakshi ...she is such a bitch 😡
morning mai sb accha ho *fingers crossed*
loved the update ❤️ 👍🏼 🤗
And the best part wsKISS ME MANYA🤣

Kya Yaar itne romantic dialogue ka kachra kar diya

beechare UV ne itni depth se bola tha 🤣

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: pmpm1
Awesome update Shana! Loved every bit of it! 👏

Feel a little sad for Manyata though... waiting eagerly to find out what happens in the morning... I'm sure things won't be hunky dory between them 😔

Now please don't make us wait too much for the next update. 😊

dont worry UV will always be UV whether he likes it or not he will have to be with Manya

and Mnaya has lot of work to do before she actully lives peacefully with her love Udayveer

She has to get justice for Yuvraani Mnayata who is still missing

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Ohhh...my goodnesss...it was damn good...
u r a fab writter shana..i tell u...kya rapchik update tha...maan gaye bosss...writter ho toh tumhare jaisi...👏
love it...
haila man yata and uday kaa hanky panky woh wohi pure sence me sence mein...hayooo...rabba me mar java...waise mnaya pe uday ka jadu chal hi gaya...waise uday se kon haar naa chahta hai...love it yaar...
hawww...ush kamine VJS manyaat klo kisss kiya...kamini minakshi ka bhai hai toh ush ke jasa hi hoga naaa...
ab manyata ki memory wapas la bhi do...tabhi toh minakshi aur ush ke ush kamine bhai ki baand bajegi...plzzz...update soon.

Manya ki memory ...well dear that will be last thing to come 😆

just see how Mnaya resolves Minakshi thing and proves her the murderer of Yuvrani Mnayata...phir to this Minakshi will herself prove that Mnaya is Mnayata and then and then and then lot has to happen

keep reading this FF has lot to give before and end it 😊

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Malangan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome update!!!

Loveddd it
So finally manya shastri moved away frm YUV...and is working for his arch rival ...jeezz!and VJs is nothing more than a backstabbing beast..afterall he is a murderer's brother ...
How low can these two stoop ?? I hate them with all my heart fittey muhhh minakshi n VJs ..rott in hell
Hayyy princey ko sad kardiya :( princey ko princess se hate karwaya :(
Poor poor my princey he is drunk...hope mis shatri doesnt regret n accuse him this time ..

Cont soon

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sweetshab
awesome update!!!

Loveddd it
So finally manya shastri moved away frm YUV...and is working for his arch rival ...jeezz!and VJs is nothing more than a backstabbing beast..afterall he is a murderer's brother ...
How low can these two stoop ?? I hate them with all my heart fittey muhhh minakshi n VJs ..rott in hell
Hayyy princey ko sad kardiya :( princey ko princess se hate karwaya :(
Poor poor my princey he is drunk...hope mis shatri doesnt regret n accuse him this time ..

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hey Shabs Mnaya will never blame UV for anything now ,infect it was she who agreed .

our UV is a smart guy he always asks before he does 😳

actually now Mnaya will have to face a lot as she has choosen the path of being a common girl Manya Shastri.

But dont worry UV will be their to help when she stumbles

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sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

superb writing shana...plus da precap is awsum...do contnue soon...

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Sunshinegirll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

hey shana awesome chapter👏
thanks for the long and beautiful chapter😊😊
poor adya.. wish she gets her mum's love soon.. even though her mum is alive she isnt with her
now manya finally gives herself willingly to uday.. must say i expected her to shout at him again after reading the last line in your promo for this chapter.. but the way it continued was too good😳😳
loved d precap.. manya pregnant😳😳 umm pls give manveer a prince this time😃
waiting for more.. please update soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

comment edited on pg no 8

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Shana what a update! it truly worth the wait!
this was the one of my favourite updates uptil now i know i always say this after 2 3 updates but i cant stop my self from saying this because you are indeed a amazing writer! Your FF is just perfect!
this update was awesome awesome awesome!
manyata finally gaved hersefl to uday in her senses well i felt like uday just wanted her he hasnt forgaved her yet dont know what he is planning now! but how can he think so low about manyata the girl who gaved her self to him in her senses is the biggest proove of her love for him! i hate vikram i thought he will fall gor manya too but i guess this FF isnt dat filmy😆
shana you must update fast now otherwise we impatient readers will fill ur inbox 😉 do update fast this time.

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