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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Amazing update 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
awesome...
loved it especially rey's diary...
thnx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
Rey diary part was awsum
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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who the hell is abhay ha... is it rey ... tell it fast in the next part soon...
continue soon wait early... finally taani revealed all the truth to everyone...
please do not tell me that kria ko kuch nahi ho ... make her meet her once request it is... 😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

who the hell is abhay ha... is it rey ... tell it fast in the next part soon...
continue soon wait early... finally taani revealed all the truth to everyone...
please do not tell me that kria ko kuch nahi ho ... make her meet her once request it is... 😭


No dear abhay is another main charector in this ff.
this is abhiya and kriyaansh ff. and trust me kriya will be fine.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazin update dear...so rey is dobriels's brother...thats great yaar...amazin...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter-5- mysterius person in mount college


days passed but kriya remain same like a dead body. everyone was worried about her. misha told everything to her dad and brother amar about rey. weakling and dazzlers took admission in mount college. amar always tried to stay away from all of them but when he saw the condition of kriya, a pain rised in his eyes. misha start doubting about amar becuse when she tried to talk with panchi and her dad about amar, they always changed the topic.
one month was passed and weakling, dazzler were studying in mount college.


mount college


a bmw car enterd in mount college. a boy come out from car. he was wearing black clothes.all the boys and girls start looking to him. girls were staring and drooling on him. but he ignore them and goes to principles office. all the boys were feeling jelousy becuse their gfs were drooling over him.

in classroom

ruhi comes runing in class
misha- ruhi kya hua, tum itna smile kyon kar rahi ho?
ruhi- misha... omg tum log class me kya kar rahe ho? bahar dekho kya ho raha hai. pura atmosphere change ho gya hai.
piya- tum kehna kya chahti ho?
ruhi- piya tum log mere sath chalo.
all goes to outside from class with ruhi. misha about to say something but ruhi pointed her finger in another direction and everyone moved their face to that direction. the same boy who was in black clothes was coming from that way.
neha- omg ruhi, he is looking handsome yaar.
sharon- yaa neha, u r right.
swayam glare to sharon
swa- what u mean sharon?
kriya- guys something is burning. i can feel it.
misha- yaa dude.
all were talking about him but piya was more shocked to see that boy. the tears comes in her eyes and she wishper
piya- abhay...
misha and others turn their faces to piya. misha shouted
misha- what? is he abhay? what how it can be possible?
piya- misha he is abhay. my abhay.
misha- omg, it means he is a (but piya cut her and whishper in low voice which only could misha heard)
piya- yes misha and pls dont told to anyone about his secrets. it can be change everything
( guys misha knew every secret of piya so she also knew about abhay's reality and his past. this secret will come back as story prociding)

sharon- abhay?? and what means your abhay?
piya- i love him.
sharon- and he?
piya with little smile- its complicate. u cant understand. and now when he is here, i hv to solve this matter.
misha- piya pls, dont do anything wrong. i knew ur tempred is high so pls controlled urself.
piya- no misha, how can he leave me. today i will not listen u.
abhay was going to his car but piya called him from behind. everone start staring piya. abhay turn his face and shocked to see piya their. he goes near piya but for his surprised piya slapped him. everyone was shocked to see that. abhay knew that it would be come so he did not said anything. misha try to stop her but abhay said that it is between us so pls lets us solve it.
piya- how dare u abhay? how can u do this to me? how can u think that i can leave without u? i was crying everynight for u thinking that u r dead. tell me abhay why u do that?
abhay- what u r thinking piya. was i happy when i leave u. i hate myself for what i did. but piya u know it was right. we cant be together. we r diffrent piya and nobody can change it. i cant love u.pls move on piya.
piya- move on? how can u say that abhay? i cant.
abhay- u can piya and u hv to.
piya- i will move on abhay what on one condition
abhay- what is condition.
piya- u also hv to move on. u hv to forget her. can u do it?
weakling and dazzler were shocked to see that.
abhay- i cant. she was my soul.
piya- then how can i move on abhay. she is dead but u still love her and u espect that i can move and forget u.
abhay turn his face to another side.
piya- yes abhay. u hv to face it. she is dead. she will not come back abhay. she was ur past.
abhay shout- nooo... she will come back. she promissed me. and saying that he run from their.
misha slapped piya.
misha- i dont belive u piya. u said u love him but today u hurt him. u know everthing about him. how can u do that? he want to forget his past but today u open his wounds.
piya come to scence
piya- misha i m sorry. i should not hv say that. where is abhay?
misha- i dont know but he run from here. piya he already hate himself becuse he could not save his love. he need some space piya. i knew that he love u but u know that u both cant be together. he is right. we r diffrent piya. abhay did not belong to us. he belong to another world and we cant change it piya. u hv to move on piya. saying that she left from their.
piya whishper - u r right abhay. i hv to forget u. this was incomplete love story. m sorry abhay, i did not want to hurt u. now i will always stay away from u. i hv to forget u but how?
kriya kept his hand on her shoulder and said.
kriya- piya, main humesha sochti thi ki universe ji ne sirf mere sath hi bura kia hai but tum to mujse bhi jyada dard me ho.
sharon- its ok piya. everything will be fine. now lets go.


in reharsal hall of mount college

misha- bro, why r u staying away from swayam and his frnds. u only talked with kabir. what happen to u? u r my bro but aisa lagta hai ki main tumhe janti hi nahi hoon.
amar- u cant understand misha.and amar left from there.
misha in thoughts-( how i cant understand amar. i hv to solve this mystery. why u feel pain to see kriya like that. ur danced just like rey. rey lost 7 month later and u come back india 7 month later. did u realy come from london. somehow i feel that u r rey. muje kush karna hoga. i have to take help of piya and others.)
after sometime kriya and others also come to reharsal hall.
misha- guys muje tum logo se bahut serius baat karni hai. pls listen carefuly.
sharon- kya hua misha? pls tell us.
misha- its about rey. muje lagta hai ki amar hi rey hai.
all- what? how can u say that?
misha- well listen carefully.
u told that rey left u 7 month later and bro also come back from london 6 month later. what before that we were not know that we hv bro.
kriya- what?
misha- yaa, dad told us that bro ;left us due to personal prob when we were child.and now come back but when i m tried to ask about his past from dad and mom, they changed the topic. i m thinking that something is wrong. one more thing, bro is just danced like rey. he hate frnds and love. and i notice that everytime when bro seen to kriya in that condition, i saw tears in his eyes.
kriya- u r right misha. i notice that what i ignore. now i m understanding.
misha- guys, now tum sab logo ko kush rehna hoga kyonki hume amar ka truth pta karna hai and specialy u kriya. i hv a plan.
misha told them the plan.


in the night
in the woods

a boy was siting infront of a grave. he was crying and shouting the name of his beloved. no tears were flowing from his eyes. he was staring to moon. a powerfull creature of earth was crying. he shout- i cant forget u mathili. piya i cant move on. yes he was abhay raichand. then he start writing something on a blank page. after written he standup and through the page in another side. aftersometime he run from their and lost in darkness.a woman come their and took that page. she start reading that page which was written by abhay.---
( guys this poem was written by abhay)
Unlike the stars on the night...
Unlike the raven that fly towards those stars...
I always cry and felt in these dark side
Asking God why?

Until now the pain still inside...
I wish I can go like those ravens
But I always fall through the questioning the holly arc

Not because of those people who makes me fall
Nor the struggles that I can't get forward...
But the sickness and the hurtfulness I feel on own myself...
From the start I really hate being me
From the start I really want to regret all
And from the start I always want to escape in these pain of being ME...

But I KNOW I CAN'T
Always blaming my pain on these side, , ,
The side that no one see me cry...
The side that no one hear me shout...
And the side which where I said to be...
I belong...
Darkness


after reading this, woman slightly wishper- why u hurting urself abhay. why u doing this my son.


guys pls coments and like.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Amazing updte 👏
luvd it
feeling bad fr abhay nd piya 😭
nd kriya too nd amar is nly rey
waiting for misha's plan 😊
updte soon
Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally all the doubt are clear... continue soon wait early...😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awsome update. . .
So abhaya ki entry ho gayi. . . . .
Abhaya and piya ka part was awsome. . .
Abb sab ko clear hogaya ki amar is rey. . Yuppieee. . . . .
Misha ne kuch plan kiya hai 4 kriyaansh. . .
Yupiee. . . . .
Abb maza aayega. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. , . .
Egarly waiting 4 it. . .

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