kriyaansh and abhiya ff- dead love

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aishasully

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Posted: 12 years ago

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very nyc keep it up sounds intrestng

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Iman

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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Anki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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thanx for the pm...

interesting start...

looking forward to the story...

update soon...

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tina tartari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice part

thou 2 shrt

contt soon

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

. . . . .chapter-1- distroyed

Rey crying badly.
Then he cover his face with his hands.

Ray's pov-

I m crying and only crying. But Wait a minute, why i m crying . I m crying for them who dont understand me and whos dont trust me. Yes they dont trust me. They all were my friends. I dont expected this from them. And kriya , how she can do this with me. How she hate me and why she dont trust me.
I was always feel guilty that i dont understand her but no more because i m always trusted her. Why i feel guilty .she dont trusted me so she would feel guilty. And if she would not feel than by i.
Fist time in my life i feel that i m alone.
What happend in last 10 days i dont understand but the one thing which i understand that love and frndship is only for books.
But in actual they r fake. And in my destiny no love and no frndship.
This is all over
(so guys i tell u that but happend in last 10 days)

FLASHBACK-

Guys aap jante hain ki st.lo uis ki team gai hai dance compedition me. (actuly muje naam nahi maalum ki kahan gai hai)
In dance comp. The shivam missbehave with tani and tani run from there. Swayam saw her and call to rey and other gang. Then sharon try to findout what happend .
Sh- what happen tani. Why you crying.
Tani- kush nai hua hai muje bo to shivam(suddenly stop relaising that but she say)
But sawam understand that shivam done something wrong and run to shivam. Rey follow him. Then swayam see shivam and catch his coller. Shivam is little drunk.
Sw- maine tumse kaha tha ki meri behan se dur rehna. Kya kia hai tumne uske sath(in angry tone)
Shi.-kush nahi bas kiss karne ki koshish ki thi.

When swayam heard that he punched on shivam's face.
Then rey come and pull swayam back and whisper in his ear "yaha par nahi swayam isse to kahi aur maza chakhayenge. He is GS and and people r seeing"
Swayam come in sence and left after give warning that stay away from his sister. They come back after wining the compdition.

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Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago

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Vishal sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

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IN ST.LOUSIN
All the boys and girls talked about tani and shivam.
VP called to the all team in his office. The all team come and shivam is also here.
VP- what happen in dance comp. Tell me everything.

Everyone start seeing each other but Sharon tells to VP that what happend.
Vp (in angry tone)- wht is this shivam. U r GS and if u do this bad things then the other boy of college do same.
Shivam say nothing
Vp shout and then shivam spoke
Shi- sir , tani is my g.f. And what wrong if i kiss her.
Vp- tani ,kya shivam sach me tumhara b.f. Hai.
Everyone start seeing each other.
Tani says nothing. Vp again shout. Shivam give a evil smile to the gang.
Tani see this and say
Tani- no sir, he is not my b.f.
All- what?
Then why you tell to everyon that u r shivam' g.f.
Tani- rey ko bachane ke liye and then she told all the incident and start crying.
Vp- rey ko bachane ke liye. Kyon tum rey ko kyon bachana chahti thi.
Tani- (after sometime in low voice) because i love him.
all girls and boys r shocked. Rey is double shocked.
Shi- par rey to tujse pyar nahi karta.
Everyone silent
Rey-(after 2 minute thinking ) -i love her.
All are again shocked
Tani and shivam also shocked.
Sharon hugged her and then all girls hugged her in group. After that swaym hug her(bhai behn bala hug)
V.p- muje sharm ati hai ki tum col. Ke GS ho shivam. Tum aisa kar sakte ho main soch bhi nahi saktg tha. Tum GS ki post se suspend kiye jate ho and aaj se rey hi phir se college ka GS Hai.

Then all come out of vp's office but confused and happy.(conf. Because what rey said nd hpy because rey is Gs.
Sh- rey tumne ye kya kaha tha
Rey- guys u all are wants that i move on nd know i move on and love tani . Par tum log aab abh bhi khush nahi ho.
Sh- nahi rey hum to khush hai but thode se confused the ki tumne kahi ye sab tani ko bachane ke liye to nahi kaha par ab sab confusion dur ho gai hai
Sw- ha rey main bhi khush hoon ki tum move on kar gye and muje koi tention bhi nahi hai meri behan ki kyonki main janta hoon ki tum uska kheyal rakhoge.
All -hum sab bhi khush hai.ab shodo ye sab and masti karte hai aaj.
Vicky-Haan ab rey Gs hai and koi rok tok bhi nahi hai.
Rey give him look and say-guys main Gs hoon par iska matlab yeh nhi ki tum log kush galat karoge.
All- old rey is back and laughed.
Rey- whatever...
And they start enjoying

Now 2 days passed

3rd day ek girl come out from car like tomboy and all gang also there
They all r shocked to see her
Girl- hey guys how r u?
Neha- hi vishakha, tum kaise ho
Vis- fine dude and then she meet to everyone.
Neha- where was u gone without speaking neha.
Vis- hey dude chup sab batati hoon par isse pehle mere pas tum sabi ke liye ek surprise hai.
All- kya???
Vishakha turn her finger to a car
Everyone start see there

A girls come out from the car and turn face to the gang
All r shocked to see the girl

Aaj ke liye itna hi frnds
Now plse like and give long long coment
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Precap- who is that girl?
Why rey say i love tani?
Socho socho
Next part soon

Edited by visu12 - 12 years ago

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Yuppiee. . . .
Again m 1st to comment. . . . .
Woww awsome update. . . . .
Rey ki haalat dekhkr mujhe bahut buratlag raha h,
m realy vry curious to knw wat hapnd ki rey itna sad h,aur voh frnship and love pe belive nahi kr raha. . . .
Thank god shivam ki saachi sabtk saamne aagai. . . . .
Wait,rey and taani in a relationship NO WAYS!!. . . . . . . . . . . . .
Yuppiee vishkha is back. . . . . .
And m dammmh sure ki voh ladki kriya hi hogi. . . .
Woww story bilkul intersting ho gayi h,
plz continue soon, . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago