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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't usually admit this but dammit you made me cry. This moved me so much. Thought I should let the author know i appreciate her efforts at a heart-wrenching piece. You really pulled it off. The perfect balance - no overt dramas, just the human emotion, which is already an incredibly delicate thing, and it shows in your writing. May I ask, is this inspired by a similar scene in Grey's Anatomy? I'm not a follower of the show and I'm really intrigued as to what was your source of inspiration for this 'little' OS.
Any rate, thanks for writing this ficlet. Made my heart hurt in a good way <3
Edited by shona-li - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read this in a very emotional state and by the time I finished reading, I was literally at the verge of tears.
it was such a touching concept, sad yet so bright and happy.

also really happy about if only coming back :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona-li

I don't usually admit this but dammit you made me cry. This moved me so much. Thought I should let the author know i appreciate her efforts at a heart-wrenching piece. You really pulled it off. The perfect balance - no overt dramas, just the human emotion, which is already an incredibly delicate thing, and it shows in your writing. May I ask, is this inspired by a similar scene in Grey's Anatomy? I'm not a follower of the show and I'm really intrigued as to what was your source of inspiration for this 'little' OS.

Any rate, thanks for writing this ficlet. Made my heart hurt in a good way <3



Thank you! :)
And about your question, no the scene was not at all similar. Of course it involved death and grief, but the whole scenario was different.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have a lumP in my throat tears are falling down my cheeks and this OS was just so beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: masam



Thank you! :)
And about your question, no the scene was not at all similar. Of course it involved death and grief, but the whole scenario was different.

Well then, can I just say that was an extremely well-written fic on grief. I've read similar fics like this before but I have to say yours really hit home. Never having been in that scenario (and I pray I never do), your story really brought the reader in the headspace of what it would be like to be in the character's shoes. Oh my poor heart! Now I gotta go and tend to it. Beautiful scenes you wrote. Went straight into my bookmarks.
Don't stop writing. You are an amazing writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona-li

Well then, can I just say that was an extremely well-written fic on grief. I've read similar fics like this before but I have to say yours really hit home. Never having been in that scenario (and I pray I never do), your story really brought the reader in the headspace of what it would be like to be in the character's shoes. Oh my poor heart! Now I gotta go and tend to it. Beautiful scenes you wrote. Went straight into my bookmarks.
Don't stop writing. You are an amazing writer.



Thank you, truly humbled I am.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OOHHH goddd..wow this was wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful brought tears to my eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how do you have the heart to write such stuff? i would be a wreck crying.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm sitting here with streams of tears running down my face! This was beautiful and moving at the same time. Ah, I'm so overwhelmed that I'm having a hard times stringing sentences together. I'm speechless. This was perfect.

-Mohini
Edited by mohini_agarwal - 12 years ago

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