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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Whoa...right now, I have a red nose, there is huge lump in my throat and tears are running down my cheeks...but I don't know what to say!!! Simply MOVING!!!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

This was beyond splendid!

If you said it was long, then it didn't seem so. I thought Masam is back with a happy wala story. But m heart broke in to a million pieces when she turned around and he wasn't there.

There were so many lump in the throat wale parts 😭

I knew she was in denial and she continued to be despite of her therapy sessions.

Her loss is too deep. She not only lost Arnav with whom she had a blissful life and would have had a even better life he and the baby were there.

Everyone played their part in making Khushi see the reality:

Dr. Rathore - professionally during every session

Payal - by re-arranging the living room and making Khushi spend time with her and her kid

Shashi - A new marriage for his daughter

Garima - hugging her daughter, reassuring her.

Arnav- asking her to move on, again and again.

Khushi - who finally decided that it was in her hands and she did let him go.

P.S. Abhi ek happy wala story likho in which nobody is dead ok?

Spectacular :D

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi Masam...

I really don't have words to express my feelings for this OS. I have never ever cried while reading any piece of fiction as much as I'v done for this one, it tore my heart. Absolutely marvelous, but heart shattering 😭

My heart was tearing apart while reading Khushi's denial and grief 😭 loss of a husband and a baby, all at the same time...you've penned down everything so well. Hats Off dude.

when we love someone so much, its hard to let em go so easily. I'v lost a certain someone, and i know how it feels.

Freak Freak Freak!!!!!! i HATE sad endings, they they make me go through a severe mode of depression... You know what, now you're going to write us all a nice, beautiful, romantic OS, just to get us out of this SAD-MESS 😆

Oh, and you're posting If Only update soon. Yayyy!!!!

ok, that's it, Loved this OS, one i would never be able to forget.

tc, love

JIA

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Hiii...Awesome os...Loved it...Can't wait 4 more...Thanks 4 da pm

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

res.

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main kuch nahi bol sakti, i have the hugest lump in my throat😒 IT WAS B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. (yes i spelled it😉) thats all i'll say aap ne laa-jawab kardia😆

a lOoong update is always welcomed🤗

take care 😊

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow! That brought tears to my eyes. Amazing.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

I cried my eyes out while reading it... It was heart wrenching yet awesome... U r a fabulous fabulous writer.

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

I M CRYING SO BADLY HERE😭.. U WRITE SOP BEAUTIFULLY👏

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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Wt have u done my dear girl ? I'm sobbing my hearts out here reading ur story ?I bet u went through the same emotion when writing this brilliant story ..I don't think I can l sleep now ..honestly,I hv only one thing to say tht ur an amazing writer..

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
This was beyond splendid!

If you said it was long, then it didn't seem so. I thought Masam is back with a happy wala story. But m heart broke in to a million pieces when she turned around and he wasn't there.

There were so many lump in the throat wale parts 😭

I knew she was in denial and she continued to be despite of her therapy sessions.

Her loss is too deep. She not only lost Arnav with whom she had a blissful life and would have had a even better life he and the baby were there.

Everyone played their part in making Khushi see the reality:

Dr. Rathore - professionally during every session

Payal - by re-arranging the living room and making Khushi spend time with her and her kid

Shashi - A new marriage for his daughter

Garima - hugging her daughter, reassuring her.

Arnav- asking her to move on, again and again.

Khushi - who finally decided that it was in her hands and she did let him go.

P.S. Abhi ek happy wala story likho in which nobody is dead ok?

Spectacular :D