OS : The Splintered Rainbow + Note on 9

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sias2

@sias2

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

ok i don't know what to say..that was beautiful..you don't know what you did to me..i am unable to stop my tears.,m crying with khushi..
i never have imagined this aspect i mean i never imagined them to separate coz of death..
i could feel her pain, her grief, her love for him..
and i really can understand how difficult is for to let go..
now i know i would be depressed for sometime coz of this story..so you better write some happy stuff please..
i don't want this sadness to haunt me for long,
thanks for pm

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Excuse me while I weep. That was so beautiful..Masam, you have outdone yourself with this OS.

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesomely written...but too sad. I need happy ending

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Oh.. why are you hell bent on making us cry?
As lazy said, 1 happywala story please...

If only update coming yay!!!

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Ok...I thought this one was going to be a happy story...but my heart just stopped beating when she turned around and he wasn't there!!!!

Gosh...Khushi's pain and denial has been portrayed perfectly in this OS!!

I had a huge lump in my throat while reading the whole thing...

Everyone was trying to help her come out of that denial...including Arnav in his own way...and they did finally succeed in doing that as well !

Great writing...but the next one better be a happy ending!!!!!

Thanks for the pm!!!🤗

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

OMG u made me cry the hell out !!!!

this was damn to painful...y didnt u let her die...death is better than getting hurt like this !!!!!

pls dont write anythin tht can be so painful !!!!!

its too damn terrible !!!!

i can feel the pain !!!!

beautiful piece of writing but damn painful

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

damm...i abt to cry right nw...my eyes r already filled wid tears ri8 nw...poor khushi!!...i m nt even in a state f write nything else...thnx for pm...

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rockingchamp

@rockingchamp

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

really a heart wrenching story...i thought u would come up with a happy os ...but awesome ...thnks for the pm...next tym pls a happy os ...

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVED it, dammit!!!!!!!!!! u made me cry!!!!! it was SO so sad... n so beautiful!!! i don't have words... i'd like to give u a standing ovation and a big hug!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

This is by far one of the best One Shots I have read.. Khushi just couldnt let go of her past and chose to dwell in the illusion or rainbow she had created which broke as she embraced reality... Such an apt title to this wonderful OS.

Sitting in front of the laptop with tears in my eyes and a handkerchief to block my sniffing lest the people in my house land up in my room.