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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

All of us want a love that would surround us. Be the perfectly balanced Nature in our lives.

But to lose such a love and to move on is one hell of a task. Sometimes equivalent to, if not more than, having the news of the death of your beloved broken to you. You've portrayed that PERFECTLY.

From where do you get such beautiful ideas every other day? Yeh dimag mujhe dey dey Thakur :)

PS Choti even she has her Arnav in her life. Humka bhi kuch kareka padi!



Lai lay Thakur!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am chocked with emotions and my vision is blur with tears to write down this comment.
When i read the first quote about grief for GA i didn't know what's coming ahead and i had a feeling it won't be a happy one. But something like this was never expected. Khusi lost everything in one go. Her husband and the unborn child. It's only the love of her family, the doctor's try and more over Arnav's constant plea to Move on helped her finally accepting the truth..

It's heart breaking Masam to see someone so happy one moment and the next moment standing all alone...
Very beautifully done specially the quotes for GA.
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am absolutely speechless. This was one of those superb things you can't explain. I hate you for making me feel so despondent. You write amazingly well Masam its just stop dukhi-ing your readers. Give us something happy happy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...soo this was it!
Sad with a different side of life! The most difficult thing after grief, moving on!
Its nice! Speechless though!! Wonderful writing!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm speechless...
Diff sides of grief...
Very very good...
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Posted: 12 years ago


No no masam. You got it wrong. YOU are Thakur. I am Gabbar. This is Sholay and your dialogue will be a defiant, loud "Nahiii!"
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Posted: 12 years ago
OmG !!!!!
Can I just tell you this is the most beautiful thing you have ever written!!!! Not to mean that Spilling the beans and If only stop being my favourite but this is out of the world!
This brought back sooo many memories. 😭
THERE ARE ALWAYS FIVE STAGES OF GRIEF
This was the episode where George dies! Ohh man I am almost teary now!
Khushi's sorrow and desperation was brought about so well it left me speechless ! I love love love this O.S Masam and I love love love you too! Thank you for the pm😊

P.S - I am just wondering how lucky I got when I came across If Only on IF one day!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blck234

OmG !!!!!

Can I just tell you this is the most beautiful thing you have ever written!!!! Not to mean that Spilling the beans and If only stop being my favourite but this is out of the world!
This brought back sooo many memories. 😭
THERE ARE ALWAYS FIVE STAGES OF GRIEF
This was the episode where George dies! Ohh man I am almost teary now!
Khushi's sorrow and desperation was brought about so well it left me speechless ! I love love love this O.S Masam and I love love love you too! Thank you for the pm😊

P.S - I am just wondering how lucky I got when I came across If Only on IF one day!😳



Haha, thank you!
And yup, season 6 premiere narration!
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so emotional. Loved it so much.
Great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
u made me cry...i hate u grl for making me realize that my emotions cannot be under control all time.

Loved ur wonderful OS...it was touching. cant explain how much for my tears are not under control till now.

U have plotted the emotion so well that , All way through out the story u made me think , what i will do without my hubby...Prayed god never ever this should happen to any one..

Edited by sammymas - 12 years ago

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