OS : The Splintered Rainbow + Note on 9

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

u made me cry masam...😭😭 it was emotionally awesome...😭😭

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mirka88

@mirka88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

So beautiful...and so sad...

I'm going to read 'Once upon a notepad' again to cheer myself up..

I felt like crying at the end of this one...you write so, so well..so poignant.

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Oh My God!!!

That was brilliant.

Ma stories wn't even be anywhere close to urs.

It was too touchy...ma frnd msgd me somethin about his death while i was readin this and i got all hyper all of a sudden.

I shouted at him for talkin about death...but he just smiled and told me dat,"So u do love me and so i cn trust u to any limits which i knw long yrs back."

Blah, i'm not usualy a touchy type, but dang he came to knw dat i care.🤢😆

Oh man...i think i'm too addicted to ur stories.

Cn't wait for next 'If only' update.😛

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

i lost words...wile reading this i dont know why my heart kept paining soo much...was the story sad , but i read many sad story of arshi, but never felt like this...i gues its becoz of ur wrtting, that it took me to a altogether different place...al i can tell u is ''God bless u''

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

This was brilliant 👏 and an emotional one but not

at all long(if it was didn't notice it).

The statement which Arnav of her subconcious said

about moving on was very beautiful.I'm definitely

going to note it down 'cause I found it very lovely.

At the end ,Khushi eventually moved on...thats

what I loved the most.

A very beautiful and a moving update.

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Laila

@Edella17

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Omg , I am still crying My eyes out ...You are. Brilliant writer , the emotions you have evoked through your writing are beautiful ...

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Oh God. I did not need to read this right now. Already in so much misery over two quizzes tomorrow and cricket. :(

But this was so brilliantly done! Left me speechless honestly. You are an amazing writer. Take a bow. :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

wow man you sure made us cry
but then that was bound to happen
well they all tried to bring her back to reality huh
and when she did she decided to let go

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Oh God the tears just wont stop flowing...this was beautifully written..style was awsm...I felt each and every feel and emotion in this OS...tooo sad...