FF: It's Not Right - Thread 5: Ch 50 - Ch 53

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gogo9895

@gogo9895

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

oh no. you cant end it. you need to write at least an epliogue. it was heart touching part.

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

couldnt ask for a more perfect ending:)

it was so touching and emotional. true love always find a way:)

will miss this ff a lot but hoping u decide to start a new one very soon

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

a perfect ending anybody could ask for.!

brilliant work.! 👏

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

lol arnav kumari lovely ending

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

beautiful ending...the Kagans were nice touch!

-Sona

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@boyznaka

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

"I love you so much Khushi. I never thought I would get married. My Mom and... and now Di... I thought marriage was the worst thing that could happen to a couple. Ruin what feelings and attachments they had for each other, make them bored of each other but with you – I could never tire of you, I could never want anyone else. For me there is only you – with you it's perfect. When I think about marrying you it just seems... its just right."

This is just the perfect end. It is so sweet Shu. I really hate you for ending this. But, oh well.. Okay I don't. I am pretty overwhelmed right now.

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Sigh!
That was so just beautiful!
So romantic! ❤️

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Amazing ending!

Aww at the way he proposed. Too romantic ❤️

Beautifully written dear.

Loved it.

ArHi are just love

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

hope we will see ya some day soon again then
what an ending right just whats right
and arnav kumari gupta really
more like arnav kumar gupta khushi
wow so here ends their journey and am i glad that i was with this journey of their love
he actualy took help of aman and the internet to do this really
wow he really realy loves her wow man