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hey guys!!!!!

im gng back to home today ...

so my last update til nov 3...

and i didnt talk or inform someone special...

really sorry for that

the reason i have already given...

hope ur not angry still

love u !!

will miss u a lot...😭


finally


HAPPY NAVRATRI GUYS!!!!!!😃


dnt know y i m having a strange feeling

will meet u again later...

so here goes the update...


gaali dena hai toh dedo ..😆




"kya acha tha??? "kriya asked confused….

"kuch nahi"rey said and kissed her wet shoulder….

Kriya left a contended sigh as his lips touched her wet shoulder making it burn…..

She opened her eyes and pulled back from the hug still sitting on his lap…..

"kya hai batayiye na rey…"she wined…..

"hmmm wo actually……..hmm"he pulled her close and started kissing her neck and his ri8 hand gathered her hair and took them to her left shoulder and he kissed her nape when she slightly moaned but she again pushed him back

"rey batayiye na….kya bol rahe the neendh mei??? Abhi laata hun beta???"she asked innocently…but someone is in real naughty…

"arey abhi laata hun beta nahi ..abhi aata hun baby tha… "he said…

"baby??? Mai aapki sapne mei bhi aane lagi???"kriya asked slightly blushing

Rey thought

Do u think abhi aane lagi tu??? Ur always in my dreams reality everywhere dear…but lemme have some fun..

"arey tum nahi wo"he said dreamily…

"koun???"kriya frowned…..

"that bold sexy cute extremely gorgeous girl…. "rey was cut as usual……

"itni achi thi??? Toh uske paas hi jao"she said with a pout as tears filled and got up to go when he pulled her upon him lying on the bed…..

"baatcutter……sahi naam rakha maine…meri baat toh sunlo poora.. mujhe dekho"he said but she looked away…….

"look at me baatcutter"but still she looked away as tears on verge of rolling down……

He cupped her face with his ri8 and turned her to him……she finally looked at him as a drop fell on his cheek…….he closed his eyes sighed once……..y do this brave girl always is this weak in case of him?? He looked at her…..kissed her eyes and rubbed the unshed tears with his cheek…

"that bold sexy cute extremely gorgeous girl next to me yesterday night ..in my arms…..poori baat toh suna karo baatcutter ……"he said slightly low as he was the reason that she becomes so week from heart…..

He looked down cursing himself……..when she just suddenly hugged him nudging her head in the crook of his neck ….

"sorry"she murmered slowly near his ear and kissed him below the ear….

He pulled back to look at her….and then cupped her face bringing it close to his to have those delicious lips for that day……but he was abt to kiss when his cell rang…..kriya came to senses and was getting up when he pulled her pinning her to bed groaning at the caller and kissed her to earnest when she tried pushing him…….he suddenly pulled back looked at her…..

"im not letting u go so be quite"he snapped at her and agai captured her lips…..

"umm…..umm"she tried saying something but he was on his words…..he just carried his way out ……but he never got way into her mouth for which he again pulled back….

"baad mei fir call karenge agar itna imp hai toh now give in dammit…."he again snapped and kissed her with more force……he can sense her lips curve when her teeth tightened than before not letting him in at all….he graoned and crushed himself more into her slightly making her loose control but nah ……she is not at all giving in…..

"fine"baat karlo .. he literally scowled at her and sat looking away on the bed with his back to him …when giggled as he shot a glare to her and turned back again….

He picked the call…..

"koun hai itna bada V.I.P huh…. She is not intrested in me anymore…mai hi gadha hun .."he went on cursing him her and everyone for making them together and not even left universeji and cursed him saying that he was the main reason for their first meet …..

Kriya was trying not to rofl hard…….she sighed hard and lifted call…..

Kriya: hello maa……

Preet: hello beta kaise ho?? Disturb toh nahi kiya???

Kriya: arrey nahi nahi maa mai ekdam theek hun…aapki bte ka haal thoda kharab hai…..

Unable to control kriya laughed when rey glared at her again and again turned back to his cursing

This made her laugh more……

Preeti: kya hua beta??? Rey ko hua kya hai aur tum has kyun rahe ho???

Kriya: arey maa unhe kuch nahi hua ….aur reason aap unhi se poochiye…..waise maa aap kaise ho??papa.

Preeti: sab ache hai…..actually aaj hum tumhari mom ke paas jaa rahe toh socha unki pasand ki kuch leke jaaye…toh kya acha lagta hai unhe???

Kriya: maa yeh sab kyun???

Preeti: kriya maine kya pocha??

Kriya: hmmm she sighed in defeat……

Preet: ab uska jawab do…….

Kriya said what smriti likes and all

Preeti: beta rey kaha hey???

Kriya: yahi pe hai maa…..

She handed the mobile to rey who snatched it and was speaking to his mom…..

Preeti: rey swayam Sharon kaise hai??

Rey: mom vo……

He froze and tried hard not to gasp as she slightly bit his earlobe and was playing with her tip of tongue caressing his earlobe….

Preeti: kaise hai rey wo log?? Baat karo….theek toh haina……

Rey: haan maa ek dam theek……

He stopped again as she passed her hand through his chest and bit his neck slightly and chuckled at his expressions making him fume more…….

Preeti : waise kriya has kyun rahi hai??

Rey: wo …kuch nahi maa… bas aise hi ….wo actually …….

He closed his eyes tight when she kissed his bare back planting wet kisses along his spine and chuckling in b/w…

Rey: mom mai aapko thodi der mei call karta hun

He cut before preeti could speak and turned back gripping her shoulders and falling on bed trapping her when she looked at him with shock……she didn't expect this sudden reaction………he looked at her with narrow eyes…making her breath hard…..

"kya kar rahi thi??"he asked huskily……

"wo……wo……wo"she struck as her mind cleared out……

"u know what…..u have to pay for all this dear…."he said and kissing her fiercely and pinned her wrists to the pillow when again the mobile rang……..

Rey groaned again and saw beside and it flashed "swayam"

He sighed and fell beside her and received the call…….she was still breathing hard her eyes closed…..he balanced on his elbow with mobile b/w and received..

Sw: rey….

Rey: haan bol swayam…

Sw: uth gaya kya???

Rey: haan kyun???

He saw her open her eyes so he slightly passed his hand under her saree on her waist grippng it tight and pulled towards him not letting her breath to be back to normal …..she looked at him with pleading eyes ……he gave a look of never and pulled her more close

Sw: mere bhai 7 baj gaye..baahar ghumne nahi jaana kya??? 9 baje ko taxi aayegi ri8??

Rey: haan toh??

He was totally focused only on kria who was pleading him to leave but he trapped her legs with his and pulled her more close such that his lips almost touched hers and spoke to swayam……makng her breath very hard in anticipation….

Sw: kya haan toh?? Maharaj kriya ko uthayiye…..aur tayyar hojao….

Rey: nahi swayam tum log jao kria bohut thak gayi wo abhi tak so rahi hai hum kal jayenge..

Her eyes widened…….she was abt to speak when hhe placed his finger on her lips…

Sw: okay cool…..take rest…… aur breakfast…..

Rey: who hum saath mei karlenge…….

He said looking at her lips and slightly took her lips in his when she flinched back slightly as swayam was still on call but the blush failed to stop at hi comment

Sw: theek hai dude….take rest…..bye

Rey: have a grt day…

Sw: u too bye

Rey: bye…..

He said his eyes never leaving hers he simply threw the mobile aside and pulled her close with both hands…….

Kriya: hum nahi jaa rahe??

She asked somehow…

Rey: kyun tumhe jaana hai???

He asked bending down and kissing her collar bone……

Kriya: wo …actually……

She started breathing unevenly

Rey: actually???

He slightly pulled the pallu down and placed a warm kiss on her exposed flesh

Kriya: hum bhi ghoomne ………..

She tried hard … she was still not able to register the nights passion of his…..and now again???? She feared at that thought ….it sent cold chills down her spine…..

Rey: ghoomke hum kya karenge??

He asked he slowly wnet down pulled her saree aside and kissed her navel and bit her waist slightly…

She gasped hard……..cluthched his arms …….he looked up at her ……finally her eyes met his …..

Kriya: ghoomke enjoy….

She was saying slowly when suddenly he came up to her ear and spoke in her each……

Rey: enjoy toh hum jaha bhi karsakte hai……infact waha se jyaada….

He said and looked at her……..she gave a hesitant smile and was abt to get up when he went upon her totally trapping her…….

Rey: kaha jaa rahi ho??

Kriya: wo..aapki kapde nkalne…….

Rey: its not yet over u still have to pay for this……..he said slowly and kissed her face slowly when she finally accepted the defeat and surrendered herself…..

He was surprisingly soo smooth …….he didn't kiss her lot and all……but he was caressing her softly and sat finally ……… and held her by shoulders………she was confused what was with him ……

Kria: rey…

Rey: sshhh……….he pressed his lips over hers…..

Rey: dnt talk……its my tym….

He said as desire burned in his eyes…

She looked down unable to bare his gaze…he slowly bent forward into crook of her nec and kissed her throat……and bit the collar bone for which she moaed slightly…….his tip of tongue passed over her throat as if he was having his feast….he looked in totally different level of passion than ever……he slightly pulled her towards him…..and looked at her …..he looked at her intensely as his hands went to the pallu and un pinned it and he pulled the pallu off……..

…….she gave a smile and slightly grabbed her saree pallu ……..she gave a smile and was abt to cover herself when he gripped her hand….she looked at him when he nodded a no… she looked down shyly and closed her eyes as he pulled her more close and slowly undressed her and pulled her into his lap ……..she dug her nails into his chest and hid her face hugging him…….he started kissing her nape when he heard a knock on the door……this was enough or kriya to flinh and go to hyper mode..

"rey….ab..koun…..mai abhi….."kriya started panicking when rey slightly pulled her to him and said……

"dnt panic."he said and kissed her forehead and made her sleep on the bed covered *ps : he is in his boxers* her with the blanket till her face and asked her to close her eyes……she just followed…..rey went to see who it was…..

Swaron came to bid bye and asked him to lock the door …..rey bid bye and locked the door and went to room with a smile….

He locked the room and went to bed when she opened her eyes…….he slowly slid onto the bed and gripped sheet but not able to take as she gripped it tight……..but his desire has crossed limits….

He pulled harshly and layed upon her puling the blanket over them as she was feeling quite uncomfortable…….he made love with her for sometym and entered her again with a lot of thrust making her cry loud in pain…..finally after a tyring session he pulled her close and pulled the blanket over their head……

She after sometym opend her eyes…….and found herself inside the blanket….she pulled the blanket of her head and looked out of the window taking in the fresh air….but the blanket again fell on her face….she again pulled down but this repeated for thrice……so when the blanket fell on her face she lifted slightly and saw him looking at her with a cute smile…….she can't help but smile

"kya hua rey??"she asked…..

He called her with finger…..she moved close to him when he pulled her totally to him …..she passed her hand on his back and hugged him…

"kuch nahi bas soch raha tha hum aise chup ke rahenge to kaisa lagega??"he said looking at the blanket over them…..she gave a laugh

"ur such a kid rey"she said and moved back to get up when he pulled her hard…..

"toh is bache ko chod ke mat jao na ..dar lagi toh??"he said cutely…..

She laughed again……

"rey grow up."and sat on the bed whe he sat and pulled her into his hug…

"tumhe pata hai….mujhe subah subah ye sapna aaya tha ki…"he explained her his dream making her wear his tee and finally pulled her onto his lap and lifted her and got down….

He placed her down in washroom and said…

"actually mai tumhe nahabhi sakta hun..but its too late for u to take breakfast….."he said moving out and caught the door…..

"acha toh aapka breakfast??"she asked making a stern face

"I had it a few mins before "he said and winked and closed the door leaving her red inside….

As soon as she came he went in to get ready..she wore a saree…..*kuch jyaada hi nahi pehan rahi???*

He came out with a towel around his waist and stood before the mirror applying some gel to his wet hair when two hands circled his waist and she placed her cheek on his bare back and closed her eyes….

"u look so inviting like this rey"she said and snap opened her eyes at what she said….

He smiled and pulled her front…..

"im all urs."he said throwing his hands up which made both laugh…..he pulled her close…

"I dnt think I look more inviting than u …"he said and kissed her cheek….and the doorbell rang….

"take the breakfast "he pecked her lips and left her…

She smiled and went to take the breakfast…finally when she entered she saw him adjusting everything for their breakfast

They had a hearty breakfast and sat down to chat and spoke all random thingies.. most was she was telling all silly things…if its anyone other than her he would have shouted in frustration for talking such topics and dash out but here he was way too intrested in her talks….

It was evening 7 when they were in living room deciding to watch movie and then some one banged the door kriya who was near opened when swayam dashed in followed by a fuming Sharon but poor girl her hair messed up and panting hard……….as soon as she saw kriya she held on to her….

Sh: shona…….u m tired…

She sighed

Swayam flopped on the couch beside rey and laughed hard….he teased Sharon and now she chased him till the 8th floor…..never in life Sharon raiprakash would have climbed that many steps

Sharon complained kriya when kriya scolded swayam and he lyk a baby pouted and looked at her lyk a kid being scolded by his mom……then after those roothna and manana all settled ….swaron freshened up and came to living room and all sat in couch krisha together and rey and swayam on their love's side…hugging them sidewards watching a very funny film

The day passed grt and all drifted to sleep ther itself….rey woke up at 12 :00 and woke swayam who carried away Sharon and rey took kriya in and slept with her in arms……..

***

Rey moved his head slightly as the light fell on his cheeks…and closed eyes tight and slept ….but wait..something was smoothly scratching his nose….he slightly shaked it of and slept….now he felt the same sensation on another side of nose……he frowned and opened his eyes……just to find kriya moving her head continuously adjusting herself as rays fell ri8 on her face.he nose was rubbing his in process……a small silent laugh took place…he laughed at her cuteness…..

But still the light irritated her..

"uhh! Uhhh!!!"she cried like a baby and moved close to him……….his smile widened as he pulled her more close…..

"uhh.uhh.. uuu!!!!!!!!"she cried more as her sleep was being disturbed…..he pulled her more close and she nudged her face in the crook of his neck and slept giving a sigh of relief "hmm"

Rey smiled at her cuteness……later at 8 kriyaansh came out to see swaron coming towards their room..

Sh: good orning rey….gud mrg shona….

Sw: gud mrng guys.

Rey: hey shar gud mrng ….gud mrng dude..

K: gud mrng sweetu..gud mrng swayam..

All were sitting and talking when krisha said something and started the game of catching and runnin……after a lot tym as songs played krisha jumped on the couch when reyam were looking at them and laughing at their cuteness……but suddenly kriya sliped and fell back which reminded rey of THAT drea……

Rey: KRIYA!!!!!!!

He literally shouted and stood shocked…….sharon's gaze shifted to him as he shouted ….she could see the clear pain in his eyes……but to their luck swayam caught kriya in his arms…..

Rey rushed to him took her in his arms and hugged her tight and chanted

Rey: theek toh hona??? Theek hona???

Kriya nodded confused at reys that fear……

Rey excused and took her room and soon he was on bed hugging her tight and closed his eyes…

Kriya: rey hua kya hai?? She said placing her hands on his chest and her head placed on it….

"kuch nahi…be with me …..im feared"he said pulling her close…..she didn't get actually what is troubling him but kissed him slowly and soon he drifted to sleep…..

Here swayam was shaken too….now he was slightly picturising rey's dream which already scared him to hell……he sat his head n his palms…..after a long consoling session Sharon asked..

Sh: swayam kya hua?? Rey ko hua kya hai??? Batao..

Sw: kuch nahi Sharon…..

Sh: swayam plzz……

He was not able to stop himself he looked at her with painful eyes as she cupped his face and asked……

He slept in her lap and said everything abt rey's THAT dream……this shook Sharon but she controlled and said….

Sh: swayam its just a dream aisa kuch nahi hoga…

Sw: wish ur words become true……..

He kissed her palm and slowly drifted to sleep

***

That's it for now…

sorry for the length

Bye guys….gtg…🤢

HAPPY NAVARATRI!!!!!!😳

Enjoy!

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-deetha😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres

pinch me plz*ouch*
gosh its true...omggg
me 1st 4 d 1st time...yaayyy dhinka chika dhinka chika...

*Okay cuming back from shock...*

Mindblasting update deetha...

Loved it to the core...

KR Morning romance was just amazing

The way he got irritated with the caller...so cute...hehe woh toh uski mom hi thi...

But the BEST part was when kria distracted him when he was talking to his mom...oh man i loved it...kuch bolne hi nai dia...

Woh REY hai...aise kaise chod deta...rofl...
Kria ko toh pay karna hi tha...He got what he wanted...

Pehle mom and then swayam...rey ke romance ke bandh baja rahe hai sab logg...

But loved how he answerd him on the phone...

I can imagine him adoring his angel...while having their sweet talks...

Even that blanket pulling game was so sweet...loved it...

*Rofl*
swayam really made her climb that much...oh god...poor sharon...


Oh god plz don't tell rey ki dream sach honewali hai...no plz...

Evn loved the last pose..swayam sleeping in sharon's lap...so cute

in all superb update deetha

Happy navratri deetha...

Oh you are going...*sad* Will miss u and ur works like hell...

Have fun dear...happy journey


Thanx 4 d pm

-kinjal
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss

unresss


yyyaaayyy... me 2nd one to comment...

itne dino k baadd... 😃

coming to your update...


stat ka part was super hawt... lyk alwaz... 😳

this is somthing jo mai bolte bolte kabhi ni thak sakti... 😆

the way Rey got frustrated... hahahaha... rofl... bechara... 🤣

then baad mei all 4 together...doing masti... bt suddenly...that dream part... goshh...

and now swayam also told sharon abt it...

man... tera wo dream yha pe sabko pagal kar rha hai...

i hope it remains a dream only bt i dnt think ki aisa hoga...



nywaz... finally you also going now... mai aayi n you going... 😭

chal koi ni... enjoy with ur family... msti kariyo... and we need pics... dont forget that... 😛 😉

will really miss you darling... your updates to even more... 😛

Happy navratri... njoy... miss you... tc... 😊 🤗




Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res


-Unres-

no doubt Rey can start with his romance early morning...

kya kare baatcutter ka asar jo hai...

callers ko cursing... hawww... mom aur swayam ko cursing... bad manners apne rishtedaaron ko koi curse karta hai?


but bechare ka romantic moment disturb kiya...


kria toh smart hai... but Rey se zyada nhi... tym for pay back...

ghumna cancel kar diya... city explore karne se zyada he enjoys exploring her😳


Shar ko kya hua?

arre yeh Swayam ne kya kiya Sharon ka siren bajwaane k iraada hai kya?? aur toh aur Rey ki baatcutter ke non stop lectures milenge woh alag


KriSha chasing sessions... but Rey feared..


Shar knows abt the dream now.. Sway sleeping in her lap... and Rey cuddling his baatcutter... cute!!


I hope u r nt planning to make that dream cum true

it was an mind blowing performance

thanks for the PM

happy navratri

enjoy
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itti jaldi res??? wo bhi teen teen??? :O
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Posted: 12 years ago
count properly its 4
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