Baatcutter#4 thread 5 link pg 152

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally…im happy today..finally ye update kar rahi hun…as u all know this is soo close to my heart…

Aww my baby finally im back to u..sorry for the ignorance

Kk chalo now seedha update..

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"aahh!!!!!"they shouted as fell in water with a thud…..all most the hangover flew away but nah poora toh nahi utrega itni jaldi….they shouted at top of their voices…

K: swayam!!!!!!!

Sh: rey!!!!

Krisha: how dare u….

They got up but coz of clumsy and fast reactions their legs interwined and they fell back in the water…..at this reyam burst out…but krisha coz of sudden fall water entered into mouth and they started coughing……reyam became alert and took their respective ladies out and made them sit and rubbed their back……

Finally krisha were fine when reyam who were controlling laugh till now started rofling……

This annoyed krisha a lot!!!

They started chasing who ever were near them….the boys were enjoying a lot.they ran at full speed…….girls because of the dizziness were slow…boys took the full advantage and played with them…it was a really fun filled for boys and tired for girls…….they came a long way from their starting point……finally girls sat down on knees panting when boys came and sat before them bending and showing their backs to the girls...they punched one or two for both and laughed bending back balancing themselves on their arms… they were closing eyes when reyam saw this…….they silently went back and pushed the hands of their respective love…….and then wat??? Buwahhahaha……..krisha fell back and sand spilled into their mouths…..

Kr: ewww!!!!!!!!

Sh: yuck!!!!!

Reyam were rofling on the sand…….krisha glared at them and poured sand on them and walked away…..

Reyam looked at each other and took a handful sand and throwed on each other…

Reyam: we hate you two..

They imitated the girls……krisha heard this and sat down with a pout……as they were on little talli mode tears made their way out soon ended up in deep sobs…reyam who were laughing and craking jokes didn't see notice them crying……but once after 15 mins they walked back they noticed Sharon crying in kriya's lap and kria too crying hard….

They were confused…they walked to them and asked them

Sh: Sharon…kriya tum ro kyun rahe ho???

Swayam made Sharon sit and caught her by shoulders and rey cupped kriya's face.both were crying badly….

Rey: ro kyun rahi ho baby???

Sw: haan baby hua kya hai???

Krisha pushed them away….

Sh: tumlogon ko itni fikar kyun??? *sob*

Kr: jaayiye aur aur haslo hum par *sob*

Reyam soon after knowing the reason were abt to rofl but controlled themselves and started their manaofy act finally succeeding….

R: toh chale??? Mai driver ko call kar chukka hun… its getting dark…

Kr: arey mere shoes toh wahi pe rehgaye…aap log rukho mai leke aati hun..

Rey: tum ruko mai leke aata hun

Kr: rey..aap baito yaha…mai leke aati hun koi baat nahi..

Rey shrugged and sat back…shareyam sat there talking normally and Sharon rofled when reyam said abt their behaviour few secs back…..

They were talking for near 15 mins now……it doesn't take much tym for her to come from there…..its just some way away and then behind a big rock which separated them…..as usual rey got restless and finally after 20 mins when they got the call of driver that he arrived shareyam rushed to check….they went and checked but none…no one is there……

Rey: baatcutter??? *he whispered to himself…*

Rey: KRIYA!!!!!!!! He shouted.

The trio shouted for nearly 5 tyms and they were abt to go to search her when they heard some sounds..the ran and behind a rock they saw four members trapping her and one trying to force himself on kriya…..she heard their voice and cried loud with all strength as the one closed her mouth tight…

That very scene made rey forget all his senses…he kicked one till he became unconscious and swaron somehow managed the rest two..and the final one who touched his wife was standing there with a knife on kriya's neck to save himself….but swayam knocked down the knife and finally rey pounced upon him….he literally stabbed him to death…. He was abt to hit his head to rock when finally krisha and swayam using their whole strength pulled him back to the cab…..swayam sat in front and rey sat between krisha….as the drive started everything was silent…..sharon was on verge of crying…swayam somehow was consoling her….rey was just looking ahead fuming a lot...kriya tried but she cannot hold herself back anymore and started sobbing when rey silently pulled her into hug and comforted when she cried out her fear in his arms…….none ate the food…..

Soon they went to their respective rooms….it was two hours since dey came…….still rey was fuming sitting on the bed and continuously switing the channels…….how dare anyone tried to even touch her……he will kill him for sure from next tym..may be if krisha and swayam were not present that bas***d would be dead….

Kriya herself came out of that but here rey was not able to come out….she tried everything and anything to divert his mind……but nah……he is stubborn….the only words he spoke is…

"tum kuch nahi jaanti kriya aise logon ko jinda rakhna nahi chahiye"

"how dare he touch you"

"tum logon ko beech mei aane ki kya zaroorat thi??….."

She was irritated with him now…….arghh how to convince him…

She was cursing him under her breath and trying to find a way…while taking the dress for her to take a shower ……

Rey already freshened trying to avoid her talks to convince him

Then it clicked her

Arey mai ye toh bhool hi gayi…..par aise kaise??? Kyun nahi???par kaise???

Arghh!!!!!

She kicked the chair and went into the washroom for her shower

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He switched of the tv and throwed the remote control on the table beside the bed and layed half on the bed and closed his eyes…..everything was silent when he heard music playing.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMMmE3UYFgk[/YOUTUBE]


.he knew who did that and for what they are dng it….but yeah where is she now??? He glanced around the room …but she was no where…

He again glanced.but no result again….as the song started he felt cool breeze ouch him…he looked there……there she was..she opened the balcony door and was standing with her back to him near the railing…but wait…..white saree???


What was she trying to do???damn she looked sensuous…he checked her from top to bottom…there she turned to him and was dancing slowly the most seductive way making her saree to reveal her parts sometimes and covering sometimes…rey looked at her shocked…….she layed on the chair and slowly lifted her hands over her head caressing herself ..which was pulling him onto the edge….she was the most sensuous woman he had seen till date..and today……ohh no….what can he comment now….sensuous was little word before her

He gaped at her…..to add more to his emotions she stood beside him and danced seducing him…..

Y would he be calm now.after all she is his….he had all the ri8s…he pulled her on the bed and the both rolled twice and ended up with rey upon kriya……..she was abt to say something but he crushed his mouth on hers and kissed her with hell lots of passion..she was not even able to respond to it properly as his hands were crazily moving over her ……she just moaned high jst to make him more wild…….he slowly got down kissing her face and dug hi face in her bosom and pulled her tight towards him….he kissed her and totally lost his senses……

His hands caressed her removing every piece of cloth avoiding him to caress her skin……she unconsciously pulled his tee and finally both layed under the sheets kissing each other to worst…rey went upon her but stopped ….he layed beside her and was in deep thought.she nuzzled closer placing her head on his arm and he hugged her tight……

Kr: rey?? Kya hua???

She was confused with his abrupt stop…

He looked at her…..as usual with all his love..he pulled her tight against him ….kissed her forehead…

Rey: kriya…u know ri8 ki wapas jaane ke baad kaam shuru karne wala hun??

Kr: haan pata hai pati dev ji ab uska kya???

Rey chuckled at her words….sure she was irritated to stop at such a peak point….

He pecked her lips quickly and spoke….

R: u belive in me na….u have faith in me ri8 that me and swayam will reach heights??

kria looked at him annoyed but smirked..

K: mere pati reyaansh singhania ko success paana chahegi mere pati success ko nahi….

He laughed how she was boasting abt him that too in front of him..

R: kriya …….wo

K: rey boliye na…..

R: kriya ……I want someone who represents our love……mujhe apna karke ek baby chahiye tumse… are ready for it???

He asked her ….she was shocked at what he asked….

R: kriya plzz…..i really want to hear someone calling me dad and jo mujhe bohut tang kare…..jise dekhte mujhse tumse aur jyaada pyaar ho…

She looked down..

He turned her face to him…..

R: agar tum na chahogi toh…

He was speaking when she cuped his face….he stopped confused on what she is dng…..she slowly pulled him ….he was too soft and followed her…she slowly dug his face in her bosom and hugged hin tight after he totally ended on her……he was confused he dnt want her to be uncomfortable…he looked up …….she was blushing turning to left and eyes closed in anticipation.,….

Rey: tum sach mei chahit ho??

He whispered in her ears making her shiver and hug him more tight and her blush deepened…..he got to know abt her wish too…

Rey: mujhe jitni jaldi hosake utni jaldi mere bache chahiye……

He said hoarsely turning her face to him making her look into his eyes once and look down….she was abt to say something when he again crushed his mouth into his pinning her hands back on the pillow and made his way into her and never left her mouth not letting her to cry in pain……and finally he layed beside her who was now totally sweating and hell tired…….

Rey: kriya are u ok???

He asked concerned…..she slowly opened her eyes but immediately looked down and pecked his cheek and dug her face in his chest……he pulled back and kissed her softly this tym which made her dizzy and coz of tiredness as soon as he pulled back she drifted to sleep…he looked at her face …he felt different….she looked totally different from few mins back… is it because of what took place shortly??? Even his feelings seemed new to him……he felt his love increase hell lot of tyms than before for her……he pulled her close and drifted to sleep experiencing this new feel……

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"daddy….chocky"

someone pulled his tee...they were in the car and he was driving when his sweetheart was on the passenger seat and that little 2 yrs baby stood b/w both the seats roaming all over in the car and finally pulled his tee shirt……rey looked back and smiled….

"abhi deta hun beta …"

he said and stopped the car aside and came out ..the sunrays striked his face

He covered his face with his hand and slowly removed it opening his eyes……

There stood his angel in a sky blue plain saree drying her hair with towel and looking at him with naughty smile…….

He frowned…

"abhi deta hun beta??? Kya tha wo?? "

she asked slightly thinking how he spoke in his sleep….

"aahhh!!!!!!! Then it's a dream?????? Shit!!!!!"

rey said sitting and pulled her onto his lap and hugged her ...rested his head on her shoulder and spoke…..

"but I loved the dream"

Leaving her confused abt what he was talking



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aaj keliye itna hi...


chotu ho toh sorry...

🥱

next update ki kuch pata nahi chalna chaiye ri8??? 😆

isiliye


do comment and like😃

enjoy

-deetha😳
Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res



Congratulations and Celebrations!!!!!!!!!!!!

UnRes

deethu Jaan Loved the Update..
It was fab..
The way the things were protrayed aww that was fun..
And Rey taking her permission to make love and the sweet dream he got..
This was fab...

Cute hai <3
Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats 4 the 4th thread... waiting 4the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tu na doob ja...

peak point pe laake har update ko chodti hai...

ab yeh bata uss dream ka kya huya????

and beech mein baby aa gaya (u know am happy..) lekin ab plzz uske saath kuch na karna...

chalo loved the update...

sabkuch tha... action drama fun masti mazaa...

full to package (main hindi serial ke director ki tarah sound kar rhi hun)

but sacchi mein bahut mast tha...

rocked it.../.

ab na jaldi-2 wildcat pe tapak wildcat or my chamgadar 😉

good night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres... Firstly deethu... Biiiggg wala hugs and congratulations for ur 4th thread... *hugs* ... U totally deserve it... 😃 ... Banner k baare mei mai kuch ni kahungi... 😆 ... Now coming to ur updte... OMG... Kya update tha bosss... Reyam Krisha ko pareshan karing and karring and thn shuru hua girlska famous attyachaar... Rona.. 🤣 ... Nd whn u mentioned dat kria has jst gone behind a rock n all... Bhagwan kasam tb i felt ki kria to gone now...bt thank god tne usse bacha liya..😛 ... And Kria ne Rey ka gussa thanda karnw k liye kya technique use ki... Gussa to jana he tha... 🤣 🤣 .. Nw coming to dat baby part... To i jst loveeddd the dream... Aawww... Loved the update dear... And meri b same req as kriyansh24 ... WILDCAT UPDATE KARDEEE PLZZZ...
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

tu na doob ja...

sea bohut door hai

peak point pe laake har update ko chodti hai...

😆

ab yeh bata uss dream ka kya huya????

arey bas use treasure karo jab chahiye tab use karenge😆

and beech mein baby aa gaya (u know am happy..) lekin ab plzz uske saath kuch na karna...

i can promise dis...baby ko kuch nahi hoga...kyun ki abhi tak aaya hi nahi story mei🤣

chalo loved the update...

glad u liked it😳

sabkuch tha... action drama fun masti mazaa...

😎

full to package (main hindi serial ke director ki tarah sound kar rhi hun)

😛

but sacchi mein bahut mast tha...

😃

rocked it.../.

ab na jaldi-2 wildcat pe tapak wildcat or my chamgadar 😉

good night...



haha hanji..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo 4 d new thread deetha.. ...:-):-) nd abt update it was damn ossomm!!! Loved it...:-):-) kriyaansh nd swaron beech scenes were really funny...:-):-) rey is fuming aftrall he is too possesive 4 her...:-):-) but kriya in white saree...damn hottt yaar...:-D nd abt rey kya bolon literaly dead aftr seeing her lyk that...:-P fab. Update... Nd hottt too... Nd w8 abt that dream??? Thode dino k liye bhol ja yaar us dream itni smooth life h inki... Let it be...nd cliff hangr ki aadat sudhar le warna pakka kisi din tra hi koi reader tje cliff p hang karega... So sudherja nd update soon
Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread
it was awsome loved it
kriyaansh & swaron beech scene just loved it
update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...n i really want iss ff ke abhi aur bahut saare threads ho...ya phr ye ff kabhi khatam hi na ho

now coming to the update...
do i need to tell you ki kaisa tha, i think u know it better...
it was chummeshwari (terence sir k style me...he is ur fav. right???)
loved each n every thing...
again it was deethalacious update😊
n thanx for the pm dear...

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