FF Unexpectedly Expected;TH 7 pt 42 LinkTH8

rkapoor1382

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

tht was awesome one

loved it

feeling bad

both are dha

one of thmmshd have tld something

i hope Anjali calls n asks abt Arnav

n khushi gets tensed

something like this

continue soon

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Annu92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

WoWWW! u r great...! Seriously...u definitely hav a bright future... I lovvved it... Looking fwd for ur beautiful updates...plz plz plz update soon..

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

I don't know why you feel this update isn't funny, I found it simply hilarious! the comments by the protagonists to themselves were just awesome and had me nearly fall off the chair with laughter! arnav arriving with rolled up sleeves seems like a prelude to a punch up or more likely he shaking khushi till her teeth rattled in her head!

each desperately yearns for the other to say something that will make khushi stay back but daren't reveal his / her true feelings... kudos to arnav for being honest about the contract and for letting her go even if his heart is breaking! so, do you have a twist in store for us? will khushi realise that probably her priorities have changed and that she would be happier with arnav? can't wait for the next update!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago

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gangsu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

its totally amazing update

khushi face luk lik a clown after applyin jam😆

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

oh man!!!!! your fic is soo interesting and your way of writing is hilarious...hahaha..evaporate khushi evaporate...hahahaha...

i m not very sure about what arnav will do now...but if it by any chance comes to confession from both sides then i m very much happy by it...

cont soon...

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frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

he let her go!! it takes lot of courage from him to stop her but even more courage to let her go! wow!! simply amazing writing.. loved it...

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DrNoureen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Okay let me start now!

First of all the quote, It was the best one you ever included!

I just loved it, and it suited the situation so well!

And don't worry, I know and accept that this wasn't funny at all but it was a veryyy very much needed part and you pulled it off beautifully!

there were some parts in it, small yet so magically beautiful! the whole 'jam' thing and him leaving, her wanting to say 'bye' but instead saying 'see you' actually brought tears to my eyes!

waiting for the next part, glad that UE is gonna pick up speed now!

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